New Maaneet FF Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na#1 Link Thrd 2 - Page 14

poor geet it was just a dream 😉 wait for my maaneet love story 😊

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Thank You For The PM

Loved it
Was all this geet's dream?...

if dream is this much beautiful wht would it be whn it comes to reality

thnx 4 pm

wht a beginning Piya di...
Hats off to u...
Me loved it..

Startin from d vry beginnin... I absolutely luvd hw u described d nature.. Baap re.. Aapke andar to pkka wordsworth aur Shelley ki aatma aa gai thi.. Hehhe.. Amazin desription of d nature..
Hw she ws waitin 4 d moon 2 appear but d clouds wer clouding ova d moon..givin her signals dat she wnt b able to meet her frnd 2day..but hw she still kept her hopes up..n den d moon did come up 4 her smiling at her as her Maan came to her..
Though it was a dream.. But u described it with such serenity n beauty dat it all seemed soo real..

D way u described Geet's feelings.. Her strong will to meet her friend..her hopes dat Maan wud b wid her..though he wud neva undrstnd her love..all dis showed hw strong willed..n strong headed she is.. She might be soft n humble..but shes strong n determined as well...

I absolutely loved d update Piya di...
Beautifully written...

Love u Piya di..
Urs.. Falak...

hey plz yeh dream na ho plz dear

awesome part!!!!!!

is the precap related to this confession??? if yes then thank god there will b much more to come... r else there will not b thrill in reading past... once u know the present..

its real fun when we read the story with enthu waiting when maan really realise geets importance in his life... rather than starting the story in present...

though i loved this part its just my opinion ...

but if every one really want the story to move in past as FBs then u can also go tht way... bcoz anywayz u r expert in writing lovely dovely scenes filling with the essense of love n romance at its best..

A very different first chapter Piya...