Pandora's Box Thread Two: LAST NOTE Page 141

First Previous

Page

109

Next Last

Frequent Posters

shaam91

@shaam91

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#511

the day u decide to update is the day i decide to feel sleepy.lol.:P

probably cz im studying!haha

hopin to see updates when i wake up!:D

Quote

molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#512

I have become a professional stalker all becoz of u 😈. I stalk your FF for updates every hour and finally I'm relieved to get an update.

Oooh! Lavanya in a revealing saree. she is one adamant b*tch isn't she? Loved this update as usual. Now I'm off to sleep. will be waiting for your updates tomorrow morning.

P.S. Ur delay in updating is excused as long as they are awesome.😃 Enjoy ur family time.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

...

@MereMahiyaa.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#513

Amazing Update

Why cant lavanya ;leave them alone pff😕

Loved it < 33

Cant wait to read the next part!

Quote

prerna salian

@prerna31s

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#514

Good one :) I just hope lavanya doesn't create misunderstanding between arnav n khushi like last time !!! I will hate dat plzz mini dnt do dis !!

Quote

HeadOverHeels

@HeadOverHeels

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#515

I have lots to say, since I just read everything from the marital rape scene onwards. Wow!! So, he raped his 16 year old wife, and she thinks it's cool, because idiotic 1947 women in her house giggle, and she saw animal lust in her husband's eyes. Hmm. Marking his territory? If he was going to behave like a dog, he could have caged her in a ring of piddle. Anger management dude!! You nailed the BS revolving around the violence against ignorant young married girls by their own husbands. Kudos!!

And, Akaash Whoa... What a guy. Good sense, and protective to boot... With balls. Nicely done. I feel his pain in the last chapter. Something tells me Rustum would have kicked Arnav's ass for what he did to his sister. Great timing for showing Akaash's memories. It blends well.

And yeah, Arnav should be feeling the guilt, but I see he has some way to go before he realizes the full extent of what he's done. Not to mention his young wife, who needs to learn some lessons.. But who will teach her?

Love the updates, love what you're trying to portray, and keep it going sister!!

Quote

roohi_love

@roohi_love

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#516

Awesome update!!! Akash is feeling guilty, which is very sad because there was not much he could have done. 😭 Khushi and Anjali scene was cute. Lavanya wearing a revealing saree? 🤬 Arnav will tell her like it is, so I am not concerned. 😉 Thanks for the update!! 😃

Quote

Kuku

@lankan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#517

Loved it ! The cliff hanger was nice...not ! But it's okay . :)

Quote

dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#518

poor akash some help set the guy mind at ease what is tha bitch up too

loved it thanks for the pm

Quote

647669

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#519

Urggghhh lavanya is such a tramp!
Aww arnav was waiting for her
hope khushi doesnt find him in a compromising position with lavanya and misunderstand him

Quote

sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#520

what the heck? EWWW!! Now that was grosser than any of ur AHEM write ups! 🤢 what the shit? so now Khushi will be slap the shit out of Lavanya!!? since anjali has so effectively warned her off? bleh. dunno. 😔

MUNCHING ON COTTON BOOKS iBBARUN! ❤️