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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dazzling_Smile

Awsm and thx for the PM

or jaldi update karna


Thanx a lot and you're welcome ! 😊
Sure !
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanx a lot !! 😊 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Recap : Kria's dance. Swayam and Rey decide that they will do something to get Kria into "The Louians". (P.S. - Guys I will be using the name "The Louians" again and again because it is the name of their dance team unlike Weaklings or Dazzlers.)

Episode 13 : *It's Important* -
It was after their college got over that they all proceeded towards the parking area, together. Mind you together. They all were talking to each other when suddenly Kria called up her driver and asked him to come. They all were giggling and talking. 😆

A bright yellow Porsche screamed to a stop a few feet infront of wherethey paced, the word TURBO scrawled in silver cursive across its back. Everyone besides Kria (also her friends - new friends) stared at the car. Eventually the driver got off the car and opened the door. The interior was black leather, and the windows were tinted dark. 😲

Sharon, Rinni, Simmi : O.M.G. !! Wow !!! 😍
Kria : Um. Guys, I'll take my leave now. See you guys tomorrow.
They all : Oh, Bye Kria.

She looks at Rey and Rey is looking at her. (Background tune - Oh ho ho) They stare deep into each others eyes. When Kria comes back to her sense, she gives him a smile and looks back at others. Who were looking at her. Swayam was looking at what was going on between her and Rey and he smiled at Rey who grinned back. 😉

Neha comes forward and hugs her. Kria hugs her back, breaks the hug, turns and throws herself into the car. The driver closed the door behind. He went to his door sat in and swiftly moved away. 😛

Neha : Wow yar, What good car Kria has.
Sharon : Seriously yar. I mean it's sooo nice. I wish main ek baar..
Vishakha : Usmein baith sakoon right ?
Simmi and Rinni : Absolutely right. 😍

The boys were just staring at their respective girls. (except Rey who was lost again.) 😛

Swayam : Rey ? Rey ? (pushing him a little) Rey !! Bahaar aaja apni sapnoin ki duniya se. Idiot.
Rey : Kyun chila raha hai ? Behra nahi hun main. I can listen. Bolega bhi ab kuch ya bas mujhe dekhta rahega ?
Swayam : Tu kuch bolne dega tabhi toh bolunga.
Rey : Arey haan haan. Ab bol bhi. 😡

Meanwhile girls start moving towards their cars.

Swayam : Abe oye Romeo! Yaad na ho toh humein sabse kuch important baat karni thi. Right ? Dekh sab jaa rahe hain.
Rey : What ? Aur tu yahaan khada hai ? What's wrong with you dude ? Rok ab unhein.
Swayam : Hm, What ? Par ismein maine ..
Rey : Ssshhh ! Rok Unhein.
Swayam : Paagal !
Rey : What ?
Swayam : (ignoring Rey and shouting) Arey guys, listen.
They all turn and come back.
Simmi : Kya hua dude ?
Nilesh : Haan bolo kyun roka meri ... I mean mujhe ? Bolo ?
Swayam : Guys, chill. I wanna discuss something..
Rey : Oh Mr. I nahi We. Samajh aaya ?
Swayam : Haan wahi. We wanna tell you all something. So see you all at Rey's place today.
Rey : Nahi at Swayam's place.
Swayam Raises his eyebrows at Rey and Rey makes a pleading face.
Swayam : Um, theek hai, my Place. 😊

They all agree and move back. While going.

Bharat : Yaar mujhe toh gadbad lag rahi hai.
Nilesh : Hainaa ? Mujhe bhi aisa hi kuch lag raha hai.
Amar and Vicky : What ?
Vicky : Kya app kasht karke humein bhi batayeinge.
Nilesh : Whatever dude. Mujhe lag raha hai kaheen Rey aur Swayam saath... (Lol)
Amar : Chee !! Nahi. Swayam aur Rey donoin mein se hi koi aisa nahi hai !
Bharat : Fir bhi ..
Nilesh : NO dude, I think yeh donoin sahi keh rahe hain.
Vicky : Exactly. Anyways, I gotta go. Shaam ko milte hain. Bye.
Bharat : Ya, same here. Chal Nilesh.
Amar : Bye. 😆

Rey : Chale ?
Swayam : Haan, chal.

They both get into Rey's car and moves to Swayam's house.

In the way :
Swayam : So what was that ?
Rey : What ?
Swayam : Mere ghar kyun karwa diya ?
Rey : Abey yar, ghar par guests aaye hue hain. Possible nahi tha aaj. Bas isliye.
Swayam : Ok.

Evening (7 p.m.) - Rey and Swayam were watching their favourite show on channel [V] : D3 when suddenly the bell ringed.

Rey : Tu jaa.
Swayam : Nahi tu jaa.
Rey : Tu
Swayam : Tu
Rey : Tera ghar hai, tu jaa.
Swayam : Ruk jaa fir, main toh break mein jaunga.

But then the bell rings again and whoever it was din't remove his hand from the button. So the bell rang continuosly. Rey and Swayam got irritated and both got up at the same time and ran towards the door. Swayam opened the door in once and the bell stopped. It was none other that Vicky ! 😡

Vicky was there with all the others. All.

Neha : Why you taking so long for opening ? Huh ?
Swayam : Woh...
Amar : No woh sho.. Chal hat.

They all move in and sits on the sofas and couch. Swayam brings drinks and snacks for them all.

Sharon : Swayam ?

Swayam looks up and then LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA. ❤️

Swayam to himself : Kitni jyada pretty lag rahi hai meri Siren aaj. Par pata nahi isse mere alawa saare ladke ache lagte hain. Par par jis tarah se yeh mujhe abhi dekh rahi hai, ata nahi kyun I can see something else also in her eyes.

Sharon toh herself : Kitna sundar ghar hai iska. Koi bhi ladki iske saath hokar khush hogi. Aur yeh bhi sab ladkiyoin ko bhav deta hai. But fir bhi yeh meri taraf dekhta bhi nahi ! I wonder why is it so ? Kya tumhein sach mein meri koi parwah nahi hai ?

Swayam : Haan bolo Sharon.
Sharon recovers and blushes. ☺️
Swayam : Sharon ??? Bolo !
Sharon : Wo main yeh - yeh keh rahi thi ki tumne hum - hum sabko yahaan kyun bulaya hai ? 😳
Everyone else : Exactly ?!
Swayam in his mind : Haaye blush karte hue kitni cute lagti hai.
Rey : I'll tell you that. 😉

They all look at Rey who was standing near a window looking out.

That'a all for now guys. Sorry but mere exams chal rahe hain. Can't give more than this time to writing FF. I hope you guys understand. And I hope you like this update. Do hit the like button and give your valuable comments and Sorry once again.

Precap : Kria enters the college in her car and is surprised.

Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

aww aww u updated thankk u😛



read n then comment :D😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks a lot for the pm and loved this update and will wait coz u have to wait to get the fruit i dont know it is a hindi syaing i think?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -sofiya-

aww aww u updated thankk u😛



read n then comment :D😳



Hehe, You're welcome. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

thanks a lot for the pm and loved this update and will wait coz u have to wait to get the fruit i dont know it is a hindi syaing i think?


You're welcome.
Thanx a lot ! :)
I also don't know. I'm not that good in hindi. :P
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanx a lot !! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsme update aditi...as usual i loved it..
n specialy i loved d suprise or maybe shock every1 got seeing kria's car...
that part was just amazing..
loving d reyam friendship..

abhi bhi problm theek nahi hui hai pta nahi kab hogi..but got a loophole..lol..so m here...
as usual m waiting eagerly for d next update...
update soon but to ur convenience as i can understad d exam stress..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsummm...update aditi...n sply dis tym we fans rlycwant da dose of dese ffs after hearing such a bad news 😔...bt ur ff bring a smile on my face 😊

n kriyaansh HAWA HAWA LUK LUK scene...awww 😳...luv it...n reyam always rock 😊

thnx 4 pm...n ALL DA BST for ur xams 😊

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