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Posted: 13 years ago
i hope u continue after exams and all the best for u r exams
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chsripriya

awesome update yaar cant wait for another episode


Originally posted by: chsripriya

i hope u continue after exams and all the best for u r exams


Aw, thanx a lot !
Next episode - soon !
Yes, sure !
Thanx a lot ! 😆


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Posted: 13 years ago

Surprise :

Recap : Kria cries. She calls Sam.

Episode 12 : *The Memories of The Past* -

First time- no reply. She tried and treid but still no reply. Then she broke down. She just cried and cried. She looked up and could see the reflections of her past there. Woh bachpan ke din, Skool ki sharatein, Paagloin jaise jhoomna, Full on masti, College ki mazedaar life, Jungliyoin waale dances and most of all woh har waqt saath rehna. These flashbacks were followed a by a picture of her group. The last reflection. The perfect one. She moved forward, towards the mirror. She raised her hand and dropped it half-way. She gained courage and raised her hand again to touch them - their faces. But where she should have touched them, there was nothing but cold glass.With a dyzzying jolt her dream abruptly became a nightmare. There were no friends. There was no Sam. That were just plain flashbacks. Flashbacks on the mirror.

She turned and was about to move out when she saw a music player there. She keeps her bag and things aside. She took out her i-pod and connected it to the music player. She played the song "Let It Be" from the movie Desi boys. She goes, stands in front of the mirror and takes her position. And then the song starts along with her passionate dance.

(P.S. - Guys, I selected the song Let It Be, because if you listen carefully, the wordings suit Kria's situation a lot. At least a few lines. And I'm going to list those few lines.)

[Some lines]

Let it be, Let it be ab jaane de, Roliya hai zara muskuraane de.

Itna toh hak banta hai, Mujhe ik chance toh dede Zindagi.

Galtiyoin waali list mitaane de, Story mein ik twist toh aane de.

Itna toh hak banta hai, Mujhe ik chance toh dede Zindagi.

Meri majbooriyoin ki hai tujhko kasam, tujhko kasam.

Chodd bhi de ab yeh naaraazgi, Apnoin se kab tak yahaan koi rootha hai.

Kya sahi kya nahi yeh sikha de na, Bhoole ko raste pe to aane de.

Itna toh hak banta hai, Mujhe ik chance toh dede Zindagi.

Let it be, Let it be ab jaane de, Roliya hai zara muskuraane de.

Itna toh hak banta hai, Mujhe ik chance toh dede Zindagi.

Kaanoin ko kheech ke do lagade na, Naasamajh ko zara samjhade na.

Itna toh hak banta hai, Mujhe ik chance toh dede Zindagi.

Let it be, Let it be ab jaane de, Roliya hai zara muskuraane de.

Itna toh hak banta hai, Mujhe ik chance toh dede Zindagi.

Na na na, na na na, na na nana na.

Na na na, na na na, na na nana na.

Itna toh hak banta hai, Mujhe ik chance toh dede Zindagi.

Na na na, na na na, na na nana na.

Na na na, na na na, na na nana na.

Itna toh hak banta hai, Mujhe ik chance toh dede Zindagi.

The last step is, a jump split open it the air and then down on the floor with split open and a posture with a friends.

Rey and Swayam were dumbstruck. They both were just staring at her with their mouths hanging open. Rey was lost in his dreamland. However, Swayam recoverd.

Swayam : Wow man. She's the best girl I've even seen. So hot

Rey : What ?

Swayam : Ya man ! She's hot.

Rey : Yar bahut ho gaya. Control mein reh na tu. Jyada ho raha hai.

Swayam : Arey, tujhe kya ho raha hai ?

Rey : Mujhe -- Mujhe -- Mujhe kya hona hai. But she (Looks at her and is lost again)

Swayam : (confused) She what ?

Rey : She - She- she, she woh ek ladki hai. Have some respect.

Swayam : Fine dude. Anyways, I was saying Killer ! Look at her dance man. I mean isse dekh - so slender, so tough-me-not types. You know that naazuk kali and all. And now look at her dance. That was just Awesome. I mean who could've imagined that she can dance so well.

Rey : Ya man. Batay hi nahi Miss. Dehradun ne mujhe ki woh dance bhi karti hai.

Swayam : Ya, I wonder usne humein bataya kyun nahi.

Rey : Arey, chal tujhse toh theek hai. Chalta hai. But me ? I mean Meri Miss. Dehradun mujhse bhi chupa rahi hai.

Saying that he makes a sad baby face. While Swayam is all confused.

Swayam : Miss Dehradun ? Who Miss Dehradun ? I mean who is this Teri Miss Dehradun (teasing now) ? Yahaan toh koi dikh nahi raha mujhe. Wait a sec. Kaheen woh Kria toh nahi ?

Rey : Kria ? Who Kria ?

Swayam understand it all now. Aakhir Reyam ki friendship hai hi itni anokhi.

Swayam : Who else ? Teri Miss, Dehradun .

Rey : Oh ! Toh Miss Dehradun ka naam Kria Hai ! (suddenly) Woah -woah -woah dude ! Meri ?

Swayam : Ya dude teri ! Mujhse toh mat chupa. Tere bolne se pehle samajh jaata hoon main ki tere dimag mein kya chal raha hai !

Rey blushes.

Rey : I wish ...

Suddenly they hear a phone ringing. They both check their phones, but it was not that. Hearing this sound Kria stands up suddenly, takes her phone, sees the caller ID and answers it at once.

Kria : Muffin ? Muffin ?

Rey and Swayam : Muffin ?

Kria : Arey kuch toh bolo please.

Kria puts the phone on loudspeaker and sits. Now Rey and Swayam were also able to hear some things. Only some-some.

Sanya : Um hey Kria.

Kria : Sanya tum ? Huh ! Mujhe tumse baat nahi karni. And the same applies to the rest of you. Mujhe pata hai tum log bhi yahi ho. Specially Rohan. And ya don't forget Natasha ! Bye guys.

They all : Hold on.

Rohan : Sorry Kria humein pata hai ki tum bahut naraaz ho. But you know na.

Nuts : He's right Kria. We're very sorry.

Kria : Kya you know na ! Sorry I don't.

Sanya : Fine hum tumhein sab bata rahe hain. But promise me ki tum Sam ko nahi kahogi kuch bhi iss baare mein.

Kria : Um, oka.

Rohan : So uss din hum Sam ke ghar gaye par woh wahaan nahi tha. Farmhouse gaye wahaan bhi nahi. Humne har jagar check kar li, woh kahin nahi mila. We got scared, so we traced his phone. Tab jaakar woh humein ek khandar mein mila. He was all alone there. I don't know woh wahaan kya kar raha tha !

Kria : Mujhe pata hai. (in a thick voice - jaise rone se pehle hoti hai)

Sanya and Nuts : What ? Kya ?

Kria : Main aur Sam aksar wahaan jaya karte the. We used to spend time there.

And saying this she cries.

Rohan : Ab sab samajh gaya main.

Sanya : Hey guys Sam's here. Kria chup ho ja. Please.

Kria : Hm.

Sam : Hey guys, what's up ?

They all : Ssshhh !!

Sam : That's my phone !! Kya kar rahe ho tum log ? Sach sach batao mujhe. Anyways, give it to me, mujhe Jhalli ko call karna hai.

Kria : Muffin ?

Sam : Jhalli ki awaaz ? Tumne ussey call kia hai kya ?

Nuyts : Yup. Um, we'll leave you guys alone.

Kria : Arey nahi nahi, Tum logoin ke bina humaari zindagi kahaan !

They all talk a lot. Suddenly Kria see's the time.

Kria : Tumhein pata hai, main pichle 3 hours se bunk kar rahi hun. Sirf tumhaari wajah se. Yahaan sab log, itne ache dost hain, I miss you guys a lot. Waise mere naye dost bane hain. Nilesh, Simmi, Rinni, Vicky, Sharon, Swayam, Bharat, Vishaka, Amar, Neha and Um, Linecut ---- No one. That's it. But fir bhi inke saath rehti hoon toh tumhaari aur yaad aati hai. I don't know what to do. Muffin sirf tumhaare uss promise ke wajah se zinda hoon main. Warna kya rakha hai iss zindagi mein, tum logoin ke bina.

Sam : Woah Jhalli. Take it easy swwetie.

Sanya : Ya ! We know exactly kaise tum better feel karogi.

Kria : Kaise ?

They all : Dance.

Kria laughs at that.

Rohan : Chalo kam-se-kam hasi toh sahi.

Kria : Anyways guys, yeh last class hai. Fir school over. Soch rahi hoon ki yeh class toh attend kar loon and laughs again.

Sam : Jhalli ki jhalli rahegi tu. He Kria ke universe ji, Usey thodi budhi dena.

Kria :Nahi universeji aap ise budhi dena.

And then starts their fight.

Rohan : Cut it out guys, Ho gaye firse tum dono shuru. Crazy Bff's !

Kria and Sam and everyone laughs.

Kria : Bye guys. Love you all. Miss you loads. Bye, take care. Muah !!

They all : Bye and same to you Kria. Miss you more. Bye. And a group muah !!

She cuts the phone, takes out a bottle from her bag, pours some water on her face, take her bag and leaves. (background tune - Oh ho ho)

Rey was staring at her and when she poured water on her face she looked really hot.

Rey : (moving forward) Wow ! Just Out of the world. Hm. So Miss. Dehradun, Meri Hogi Soon.

Swayam looks at him from behind and smiles. Then he clears his thought and walks towards Rey who comes back to his senses.

Swayam : Hogi ya nahi hogi, yeh oh baad mein deikheinge. Filhaal yeh soch ki Kria hum sab se apne tallent ke baare mein chupa kyun rahi hai ? Aur woh bhi yeh jaante hue ki yahaan par school dance team hai, jismein ek ladki ki jagah vacant hai.

Rey : Ya dude. That's a point to be noted. Kuch bhi karke humein, isse apni team lana hi hoga.

Swayam : You're correct Rey. Common let's go and tell the other's about it.

Rey : Tu chal main abhi aaya. I'll see you at the class.

Rey to himself : Kuch toh hai. I mean something is wrong with my Baatcuter. Kaise woh ro rahi thi. Aur uski performance mein bhi dard tha. I could feel it. I have to know what's wrong. And yes, yeh bhi pata karna hoga ki who is this Muffin ? (in an envious tone)

Precap : Everyone is planning to get Kria into the team.

That's it guys. Hope you all like it. Do hit the Like button and leave your valuable comments.

Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ooo luved itf awesum... u show frndship like to gud rey jesolous freking awesum haha suoper ... luved it do continue i am thinking kria as shakti
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome yaar its a wonderful surprise thank you for pm me it was cool especially reyam scene
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was amazing and cant wait to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rey : (moving forward) Wow ! Just Out of the world. Hm. So Miss. Dehradun, Meri Hogi Soon...
aww...u made me remember the whole sequence...😭
anyways it was awesome👏
keep updating!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was beautiful and awesome. tnhx for updating
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sujucoolstar

ooo luved itf awesum... u show frndship like to gud rey jesolous freking awesum haha suoper ... luved it do continue i am thinking kria as shakti


Aw, thanx a lot !! 😊
Hehe, thank you ! 😉
Lol ! Yes ! 😆
Thanx ! 😊
That's good ! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chsripriya

awesome yaar its a wonderful surprise thank you for pm me it was cool especially reyam scene


Thanx a lot dear ! 😊
Am glad you liked it. 😃
You're welcome. 😆
Hehe, thanx again ! 😉

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