FF: We are together#2-A/N Pg 142, New Thread link! - Page 27

Originally posted by: Black_Paradize

the song and feeling tht come across are so nicely putted ...so romantic love it love it love it...and akash and payal eye lock scene ...lolzzz

Originally posted by: -Shobz.TaAnu-

You've planned on making me cry buckets havent you ??

Aww.😳 Did you really cry?

How amazing it was written...The words woven so neatly..the chapter had an amazing flow and I could feel myself floating with it.,...

Omg! That compliment so made my day.😍 Thanks a dozen dozen times for that.🤗

the dance...It literally made me cry ...

Dont tell me you seriosuly cried, I would bang my head, to have people crying while reading my FF.

And I just love the way you engulfed the song into the story...
Their feelings...Especially the way Arnav begs Khushi to share it with him

Aww..Thankyou.🤗 I was touched too when I wrote all of that.😳

And the ending...where Khushi feels weightless...I guess you'd feel that when your heart breaks...
loved it yaara

Well, you really do feel like that when your heart is going through betryal.

Thanx for the PM
waiting for the next part sooner

You are asking for too much. The next update wont be very soon.😆

Originally posted by: Mysticnavya

That was a superb update !!!!!!
The dance sequence was beautiful !!!!
The way you described their emotions according to to the lines and the eye conversation which they were having was simply WOWW !!!!!!

Thanks alot love.🤗

I am really glad to recive such a overwhelming compliment.😃

Very interesting precap !!!! He finally asked payal !!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!! Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !![

Yeah, you all had been waiting for that, I finally got into wriiting that.😃

Originally posted by: Water.

OMG

Beautiful yet painful

Happiness was there, yet so far away

Serenity and peace present yet unable to reach

The snake and his ever present aura😡, such a %&*, I hate the snake

Cannot wait for the next part though...

Originally posted by: ytanuja

Awesome, u have put up their emotions towards each other so well, wonderful job.

Originally posted by: ChocoBloc_12

What a beautiful and emotional update...whilst reading it, it felt so real...i love how they both understand each other... and the way they talk through their eyes... honestly the way you describe their emotions is phenomenal :) Thanks for the PM... can't wait for the next update... hopefully Khushi tells Arnav everything :)

Originally posted by: niru273

beautiful part ! the song was so appropriate and the emotions were very nicely described !
beautiful update !

Originally posted by: lil_kuri

The update was fantastic it was beautifully written plz continue soon can't wait to read the next chapter
Thanks for the pm :)

Originally posted by: moon_mine

okay this part ws nice!!!!

loved it!!!!!

bt the precap is scaring me a lot!!!!

hope tension b/w the bros don't arise nw!!!!

Originally posted by: subiscs

that was super good!!! awesome update 😊