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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

good one smita.. gosh she is so naive!!!!

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princezsafa

@princezsafa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Is there a part two PM meee :)

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: princezsafa
Is there a part two PM meee :)

Added part 2 to part 1 to make one OS.

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Haha she was being straight forward! N way to ruin romantic moment lol! Can't wait to read more

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-Mayuri-

@-Mayuri-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Love it!

Great job! 😊

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vasiraju

@vasiraju

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Simtha🤗

is this Mixed version of both parts😲...What did you learnt the trick from the CV's how to drag and to how to put us In suspense😆 😉,hanging us to think what happens Next..

Loved the part where Arnav Questioning himself about his feelings and weakness when it comes to kushi..

😆 😆😆..Kushi at the end i think you got inspired by Dhak Dhak and acidity scenes of Kushi🤣🤣..Loved the Hilarious ending ..

Edited by vasiraju - 13 years ago

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: vasiraju
Simtha🤗
is this Mixed version of both parts😲...What did you learnt the trick from the CV's how to drag and to how to put us In suspense😆 😉,hanging us to think what happens Next..
Loved the part where Arnav Questioning himself about his feelings and weakness when it comes to kushi..
😆 😆😆..Kushi at the end i think you got inspired by Dhak Dhak and acidity scenes of Kushi🤣🤣..Loved the Hilarious ending ..

Thank u, Lucky darlin'

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

loved d way you've described arnav's thoughts...beautifully written...plz continue and thnx for d PM😊

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365166

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Smita honestly tell you are you one among the CVs... leave it to you for that humor touch.. thats so unique.. Loved it dear. I was awesome to say the least...