M&G FF ' TISHNAGI' ' part 16@86 23/02/2013 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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" updating "
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" Tishnagi "
part 1

2 cars stoped front of a huge building . gaurds come out from a car and take there positions and the other car driver open the door for a man whon can rule the country on his figer tips the name is MAAN SINGH KHURANA . maan come out with full attitude he looked around and find only one car with him " Sir other car brokdown but they are coming anymint " said a body gurd whos face is pale with fear he want to stop his boss but could not have guts to speak he knows if he try to tell anything he will b dead with his family before he speak a word so he stay quit and praying silently for his boss life that now will b end any momment
" hmmm " maan gave him his normal cold answer and proseed towards the building where he come for an urgent and important meeting . He just took few step when he heard some kind of noice he stop in his track and turn to have a look about the sittuation but before he could understand anything someone hit him with a sound of bullet and push him towards the ground . Maan laid there try to think what happend with in a mint when something caught his attention something hot and wet soaking his shirt he looked down and find a girl on top of him with eyes close .
Maan turn the girl and see her white top now change into a red colour of blood . Then reality stuck in his mind the bullet in girls body for him and she save his life at the cost of her own life . He looked around and see the sittution is under controle now the person who attack him is now just a deadbody lying on flour . Gaurds towards him make a shield around them.
Police and his other gurds come with an ambulence he took girl in his arms and walk towards the ambulence . Police mens and the gaurds asking him to leave the girl and sit in his car and get off the sight as soon as possible may b there is other one who will try to attack again but maan's one glare is enough to make them shut and run towards there cars and al the way maan sit beside the girl . He is in a deep thought he look at girls face who save his life so many questions ringing in his mind first who is she how can she come so close to him when his gaurds never allowed any strenger come close to him . Doctors and nurses trying to control blood .
Hospital security is high alert and doctors is all ready for them . This news spread like fire in the forest and all the media is front of the hospital gate to get a glimp of the person who is the one who saved MAAN SINGH KHURANA'S life but to there utter dismay the ambulannc and other car zoom pass them and police close the gate no one can go inside without permission and security check .

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Its 7:00 pm when maan deside to go back home . Its going to be almost 8 hours to the incident but his mind is still there he try to engorrs himself in office but no use his mind again and again diverting towards the strange girl . He contineously thinking why she come there and moreover why she put her life in danger because of him when he know nothing about her he did not even remmember if he met her any where but his mind saying somehow he know the girl but in all day thinking go in vain some blure picturs come in his mind but its not clear .
In all these thoughts he inter in KM when he see his daadi maa already to go some where . He stop in his track and greeted daadi maa . Savetri devi greet him back and tell him
" maan beta hum uss larki ko dekhny ja rahy hn jiss ne aj apki jaan bcha kr hm per bohat barra ehsaan kiya he " maan noded and start to move when he stop with SD voice " maan hemein lagta he k app ko b unse milna chahiye or thank b kena chahiye . if u r not busy now u can come with me " maan think for some time then agree to go with SD and both left for hospital .
Its 8:00 pm when there is some movement in geet the duty doctor who is present at that time see this . the file in his hand fall from his hand in fear but he catch it before it land on the flour he wisper in duty nurse's ear " run and bring dr armaan here tell him she is gaining her consciouse now hurry up go fast " dr is shievering in fear now and think ( Oh GOD ye kya kr rahy ho app she has to sleep till 9:00 but what is this how can we handle this devil please do some thing and make her sleep for one more our please 😆) but he dont know his bad time is star now and who will save him .
Geet looking at his pale face in ameuse . she is sure he is praying for his life and she love to play with him in her own style but now she want to know just one thing that is what is the time now
PRECAP : . NOW WHATS GEET'S PLANE
OK GUYS I AM DONE WITH FIRST PART OF MY NEW FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART ONE ......
AND ME FIRST ONE...
TO REPLY ...
REALLY HAPPY...
SO MADAM GEET SAVED MSK...

WAITING FOR NEXT PART
UPDATE SOON DEAR...
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ossum part dear
so geet saved msk
a great cop geet
hope maan learns it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow geet save maan's life update soon and let maan know this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh wow!
geet toh badi sher nikli..!
nw waiting to c d real geet..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GEET IS INVOLVED IN SOME PLAN
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome part dear...
i loved it truly...
pls cont soon
dont be so late...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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can't wait for the next part... update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gr8 update...
do continue soon 😊

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