M&G FF ' TISHNAGI' ' part 16@86 23/02/2013 - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago
CS
very nice...
what is Geet's age?
and also Pari's...
if Anwesha's age is 21 and friends with Geet, then is Geet and Pari 21?

prologue
interesting...
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till part 8
nice story...
cont soon and pm me...
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" Tishnagi "
" part 9 "

" BECAUSE GEET NEVER FORGIVE AND NEVER FORGET "


With that geet leave for her room with any and ridzy , leaving a baffles sam behind who's whole existence shiver with geet's cold answer . Sam looked at everyone the gang is still very hyper but they did not speak a word to sam . But their eyes speaking volume giving her a clear indication to nat to mess with geet or else it will b very dangerous for her . She turn towards maan but he is busy watching geet going in anny's room so she decide that its better for her to leave as soon as possible . Sam meet Svetri Devi and leave from there hurriedly .



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Ridzy and anny brought geet in anny's room and make her comfortable on bed who is still angry but they dont know on whome . They try to talk to her but geet show them off , Sensing her bad mood they know its bettre to leave her now and come back after a while . When ma'am will be in her control mood so both girls leav her quitly .



Geet is angry on maan for his behaviour that is irritating her . From the time she have come he did not talk to her , not even a simple hi hello nothing . She is here to save his life and he is Mr attitude not ask her about her health . He is become such stranger for her . and she will see him lets time come .


Geet close her eyes as always and she land in her world that is not blong to anyone just GEET & MAAN are their . Geet try to give her self diffrent reason about maan's behaviour but it seem nothing is working this time . Her mind and heart fighting their own battle . Where heart say something and mind reject it and if her mind give her a logical reason her heart refuse to agree on it . Geet get tired from her heart and mind fight so she stop both of them with her high voice .



" I know he did not come to meet me in hosptal because he is changed now " Geet is giving a reason to her mind and heart but a voice stop her


" I want to come there and meet u , but you brothere did not allowed me " Geet knew that but she fought back with same tone and little bit taunting one also


" But u have ur phone na from that you can call "



" Your brothere also take it from me " a baby tone voice come


" But u got an other one on next day so what happen with that phone did it too costly to talk to me . Geet again speak making baby angry face


" Yeah i know but u were not alone there . There is alllways someone with u "


" ummm " its all geet said in return still making face pouting cutely ,then she remember something and ask with more angr twisting her lips .



" But what happen in morning is there cat got your tangue that y did not even say hi to me " Geet is more angry now .


" Oh yeah that time i am shocked sorry " Geet did not agree on that and retort back snorting her sute nose



" Oh yeah i know you did not talk to me because of your girlfriend i know that "


" but she is not my grilfriend " come a sudden panic voice as someone don't want her to think like that . But geet fought back with more angr



" I know she is your girlfriend and you both have a relation " This time maan cant hold himlself back and come out of form door . And sit in front of geet . He held geet's hand and told her


" No geet its not true she is not my girlfriend " Geet open her eyes and she is too shocked to react him back . Till now she is in her own imagenry world that she always created when ever she is hurt or tens and in that world there is no one just geet and maan .


Yes in geet's survivel this is a most important part that make her alive till now . But its also true that no one know about this its just her and maan's secret .


Its a time after their first meet and all that happen made geet so quit spacially in front of maan . Maan try his best to make a normale relation with her . If not friendship then only a simple relation . But geet is not ready for that also mostly she will keep mum or or hide behind karan and answer his question in yes , no , hmm or just a nod .



" FLASHBACK "



That day is normal for all everyone is busy in their own work . Maan come to meet karan as per his daily routine . He inter his room but see him sleeping as usual first maan wnt to pull him out from his comfy bed and want through him in cold water . As maan is going to pull poor karan from his dreamland he hear a sweet malodouse voice a soft gigglie and his legs start moving in their own wish without permission without thinking . Maan walk in a trance and reach in terras where a beatiful site stop him in his trance .


there is geet gigling and playing freely with little birds and butterflys . Maan is first time watching her like this so peaceful so pure like an angel . For a moment Maan feet she is an angel in realy the way butterflys playing with her and thos tiny birds are not scared from her they are freely flying here to there just they all are here to please her to make her happy to let her forget who is she what is she everything is so pure so perfect as there is no need for anyone else .


Maan is observing her every move very carefully , He was loving every thing about her . Maan never seen like this before , she never smile infront of him forget laugh . Her laughter is so soothing for maan he don't know but he feel a strange conction with her yes her indiffirent behaviour with him irritate him . Geet is so much busy with her birds and butterflys that she forgot where she is going to catch a beautiful buterfly she climb on railing and try to catch butterfly again but her foot slip from railing and she loose her balence . its when she realize where she is and when she look down its scare her so much that her voice caught in her loungs out of fear . Geet looked around in horrour in order to catch something for her rescue but when she did not find any thing she just slose her eyes tight waiting for her destiny or her deat .


But she never feel the pain she assuem that going hit her body instead she felt two arms hold tightly in hug . And heart of other person going mad its beating so fast . Unknowingly she hug back to the person just to sooth his heart just to assure him that she is fine . Her hands did their magice and his heart come in peace but the person did not leave her . Geet try to come out of hug but person just hold her more strongly geet did not fought back and remain in hug for some more time . Strangely its not feeling odd or not scaring her till now she is sure that its not Karan or yash ant not her dad , But who else the person is her heart and mind feel peace and content the fear that never leave her side whatever she do or with ever she stay this fear from that day never leave her. But today this time the fear is not anywhere near her she is relax so much relax .


She took deep breath inhaling all the aroma of other person filling her lungs with his strong scent. she again try to come out of the hold and despratly want see the face of the person who hold so pease for her . For whom her feel so much contentment . But the person is not ready to leave her his heart still come out the shock the scene is still fresh in his choclate brown eyes . He again hug her more tightly stoping Geet's little atempt to come out from the hug . geet thought of tell the persone that she is fine may then the person may leave her so she speak in he sweet malooudiouse voice . that bring maan in present and he leave her thinking she will again got scared from him more . Maan leave her and step back leaving geet in shock . When geet looked at maan's face she got shocked how can she hust hug him and she did not feel any kind of fear instead of that she feel so safe so much scure and contented . What is all that . Geet is so much shoked to react . But when maan close his eyes to say sorry to geet all scene of geet falling from railing play and if he did not present here then what will happend . The mare thought of geet faling from railng give a strange fear to him and he blast on geet . Maan held geetfrom shoulder and pull her towards him


" Cant u see what r u doing where are u going . Kam se kam neeechy dekh kr to chalaa kro . do u ever think if u fall from here what happen . You never use your brain bass kuch na kuch galt krna hota he tum ko . Cant u walk properly there is always u need someone to hold u . Why cant you take care of your self at least for those who care for you . " Maan shook geet more strongly not getting an answer from her . Geet whinch in pain but the pain she is seeing in maan's eye is more strong then her so she did not try to free her self . But her almond eyes fillind with tears that realize maan that he is bit harsh with her with words and with hold also .


He instantly leave here and muterd a sorry to geet

pre-cap :- their first talk
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Posted: 13 years ago






di..😉








dear..😛









what an update..👏













just loved it










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Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..







di..😉








dear..😛









what an update..👏













just loved it










very much...😳










Flower Scrapsfor this update...👍🏼








and lota of kisses...😳







cont soon..😃





















so sweet dear
love u
its awesome
i just loved it
love u
seher
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was so cute and shocking update...
Beautiful one..
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*Babaji* Maneet romance ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update...
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Awesome Update
Continue Soon
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