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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
GR88888 Story Jasmine 👏
continuee soooon dear
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hay kya yaar......kashish in mental hospital......aur plzzzzzzzzzzz he killed piyush not sujallllllllll
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
Part-17....AGAIN BACK 2 PAST

Piyush:I'll get Tia back.she's my daughter & I'll get
it at any cost.4 that I'll do anything.
Kashish screams:no
Sujal:Tia is not ur daughter.she's my daughter.
P:its very easy 2 tell that.but u can't 4get blood.
K:one cant simply become a father thru blood relation.
P:do u think I'll not luv Tia?
K stares at him. P:I can luv her more than ur hubby
sujal.
K: shut up.I'm Tia's mom.i'l decide who her father is.
P:kashish,u r in a dreamworld.i assure u that I'l luv U &
Tia more than sujal.
S is stunned.
K:its very easy 4 u 2 tell.no 1 can luv easily.u cant
beat sujal in luv.u r nothing b4 garv in case of luv.
P controls his anger:now I'm going.but I'll take my
daughter,also u.
S-K-Esha r shocked.Ks goes.K cries & runs 2 her room.S
goes there.He sees K kissing Tia.
K throws away the doll given by P with anger.It falls
on S's feet.
T:what did u do mama?my sweet doll..
Tia is about 2 cry. K:sweet doll?its an ugly doll.don't
accept anything given by that devil.i'l destory that
doll.
T starts crying.
Feels sad & gives that doll 2 Tia:u play with this doll
T smiles:thanku papa
T runs away with the doll. K:gsujal,what did u do?
S:kashish,ur anger shud'nt b with that doll.it'll hurt our
innocent child.
K keeps silent. S:kashish,don't u feel like going back 2
piyush?
K is shocked:sujal?
S:I mean…piyush is ur child's dad.so…
K loses her control:what DID U SAY?TELL sujal.how dare u
talk like this?
S becomes upset. K:don't u think I & tia r a burden 2 u?

S:what r u saying kashish?I can't liv without u both.but I
was tensed whether I'l lose u both.
K:I can't liv without u & tia..
K hugs S.she cries:plz don't leave us sujal.plz …
S weeps.

Piyush files 2 get Tia back.S-K r shocked.
S consoles her:don't worry,we'll win.we won't lose tia.

P meets psyciatrist Swayam;his friend who came from
US. P:I need ur help,I want kashish too along with
Tia.u shud make sujal believe that kashishis abnormal.sujal
wil desert kashish & I'll get her.
T smiles:ok. P laughs.

Sujal is alone at home as K & E hav gone 2 Tia's
school.Callling bell rings.S opens the door.it was
Sawayam with a smiling face.
Swa:if I'm not wrong,u r sujal.kashish's hubby.rite?
S was wondered:how du u no me?u no kashish?
Sw:u r rite.i no kashish.
S:ok,cum inside.
SW gets inside:where is kashish?
S:she has gone out.
Sw thinks:I no that.that's why I came here.
S:u were kashish's classmate in US?
Sw:no,I'm kashish's doctor.she was under my psyciatrist
treatment.
S is shocked.

DO U THINK SWAYAM IS LYING?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
nice part...ur story z pretty kewllll...keep it up....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
jasmine what a past life history......yeh kya ab yeh piyush kya kum tha ki ab us tarzan swayam ko bhi le aayi ho........ 🤢
aur yeh kya ab kya sujal us swayam ki baat par yakeen karega...... 😡 plz let sujal not believe that tarzan..... 😊 😛 😃 mere hisaab se woh swayam jhoot bol raha hain... 😡
kashish ne sahi kaha tia ko sujal se zyada pyaar koi nahi kar saktha woh piyush bhi nahi....
😊
plz sujal , kashish ko milwao....aur tia ko unke saath rakho.............. 😉
agla part jaldi likhna.................. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
hey jasmine gr8 gng.... 👏 nice twists... 😉
but this is toooo much swayam???? 😡 😕
nywys cont soon dear... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
Part-18....Swayam:u no..kashish had 2 go thru severe
sufferings in life & thus she was gling out of track.she
even used 2 become violent.
Sujal:no Sw:I understand ur feelings.every husband is
lyk this.
S:if so,kashish wud've told me.
Sw:4 that kashishdoes'nt no about this.bcoz she was not
normal at that time.she may not b ABLE 2 remember
anything
Kashish,esha & tia cum.K stares at Sw.
S:this is….
S does'nt no how 2 introduce T.
Sw:I'm Dr.Swayam;Sujal's friend.
S smiles. K keeps staring at sw. S:kashish,go & giv tia sum
food.mama..u too.
E:ok K keeps looking at Sw while going.
Sw:sujal..is kashish having any particular tension now?
S thinks:how can I tell that kashish is tensed about
piyush,case & tia
Sw:I feel so,as I can see kashish becoming like b4
S:what do u mean?
Sw:yes sujal.i'm a Dr.i can recognize patients.
S:u r going 2 say that kashish is…?
Sw:relax.u see,kashish was an interesting patient.i mean I
used 2 giv a special attention 2 kashish.bcoz she was very
special & diff from other patients.that's why I came 2
see her.otherwise why shud a DR care about a patient who
has already gone.i want kashish 2 b ok.
S:so? Sw:u plz bring kashish 2 my hospital.let me
check.let me see how her condition is
S becomes angry:enuf Dr
Sw:I'm not forcing u.but u miust understand that it's a
disease that shud b treated in the beginning
itself.otherwise u can guess what wil happen.u might
even lose ur wife.can u think about a life without ur
life?
It touches S's mind.Sw goes.

Sw observes K.K was talking alone in the room:no,I won't
allow
S goes out with tears:oh god,whats this?
K tells herself:no,I shud'nt allow him 2 take my
daughter
S goes near her:kashish,u r tensed & tired.we'l see a dr.
K:4 such a silly thing?
S:yes,u'l b fresh
K:no sujal S:no kashish,u'v 2
K:ok.sujal,is that swayam ur friend itself?
S becomes dull:why?
K:bcoz u'vent told me about him
S:I 4got.i'm going 2 take u 2 him K:ok,ur wish

K thinks:why do I feel that I've seen swayam b4?no
chance.but still…
SW thinks:kashish was staring at me.but I think she
does'nt remember me.once she has seen me with
piyush.that's all.

Sujal-kash enter swayam's room. SW:hi,whats the problem?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
hey jasmine... tho sujal ne us swayam ki baat maan hi li.......God........... 😡 kya kashish ki yaadasht itni kharab hain ki she can't remember the person whom she has met before... 🤢 ab swayam kashish ke saath kya karega.. kya swayam kashish ko shock treatment de kar usse pagal bana dega.... 😭 aur in sab mein sujal ka kya hoga aur tia pe kya beethe gi... 😭
plz agli part jaldi likhna... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
Part-19....Sujal:kashish feels tired.
Swayam:ok,sujal,u plz go out.let me check
Kashish feels weird:why cant sujal sit here
S:kashish,I'l sit outside.don't worry
S goes out.Sw smiles. Sw:don't worry kashish.i'l giv u a
medicine.u'l b fresh.
Sw takes a picture of a flower.Sw:how is it? K:very
beautiful flower
Sw smiles:ya,u can go.call sujal inside
K goes out. K:sujal,nothing was there.he showed me a
picture of flower.
S smiles.

S goes inside.S:is she ok? Sw:sorry sujal,like I
doubted,kashish's condition is going worse. S was
shocked. Sw shows the picture of a camel:seeing this
picture she says it's a flower.
S remembers K telling him about the picture of the
flower.S becomes upset.
Sw:I'l giv u a medicine.lets see
Sw gives him medicine.S-K go.
SW has an evil medicine:this medicine wil slowly make
kashish half crack.

S:hav this medicine kashish
K:but I don't like medicines
S:but u've 2.u r tired.
S feeds her medicine.K was so tired that she goes 2
sleep.she was talking unclear words 2 herself.S becomes
upset:kashish is becoming worse than b4.oh god!

Piyush goes 2 see Tia in the school:don't u remember
me?
T:ya,the uncle u gav a pretty doll
P:I'm not uncle,I'm ur dad.
Tia is shocked:dad? P:yes
Sujal who cums there 2 pick up her sees this & goes
angry:Tia,don't talk 2 strangers.
P:I'm not a stranger,I'm her dad
S:that court wil decide.only after that u'l b her dad.
P:ok,but thT DAY wil surely cum.it's a challege
S:it'l remain as a dream

S-T in the car. T:is it true that he's my dad?then why r
u not allowing me 2 b close 2 him?he is lovable no
S was shocked.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
hi jasmine nice parts... 👏 👏
gud gng... 😊

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