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Siva

@siva2901

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

WOw Brilliant Superb os

i loved it

thanks for the pm

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

There's no ArHi in this, but still its screaming ArHi from every word! Too good!!!!

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

awesome os...too good...👏

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Very wll written
and love happy ending

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

hey
very nice update...loved it a lot...
love how u connected the one shots..:)

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Orion_N

@Orion_N

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Simply AMAZING!!!! I got so worried when it started off with her getting married to someone else... thank god she confessed... but he is such an idiot... couldn't he have stopped the wedding??? Its kind of funny because ASR always says that he writes his own fate... but actually when it comes to Khushi he doesn't even make any effort to actually get her and yet fate brings them together!!! So clearly he is wrong... hehe... just an analogy :)

Thanks for the PM ... hope to read more of your stuff soon :)

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WittyKitty

@WittyKitty

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Brilliantwa!

Payal tho hug ke baad fainteya gayi hogi!🤣

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BarunSobtiLover

@BarunSobtiLover

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Awww, this was damn sweet! Loved it! You wrote so well!!

I'm going to read another OS now! :D Thanks again for that other thread with the list of your FF's and OS'!

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Mihika

@banditqueenn.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

This is probably The First OS Of You Nayika ( That I am reading ) ! Sry ...although you sent me Pm's ...I wasn't Able to reply to any of them giving you feedbacks Neither I was able to Read Them My formatives were going on...was really busy with Them...gotcha easy subject's FA tomorrow so thought of catching up with this Os ! And Believe me I was Speechless When I read It ! Each and everything You mentioned In he Os was too descriptive ! it was easy To be read ( at-least all The Words were In my vocabulary ) ...I was not supposed to take any help from Any Online Dictionary ! And I loved to Read how Arnav Became Really Jolly to Think He's Gonna Get her LADY LOVE "KHUSHI " Back...Aw...I so Damn loved it ...👏