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Anu

@anuandavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Soni, read RA again kaj and aaj me. Ab to new update dedo.

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: had2bu
kya hua tera waada...

keeping pooja ki thali back on the shelf...

SilSila yeh chahat ka na maine bojne diyaaa 😳

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
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kamini mere phone ko kuch hua to yaad rakhiyo😡

Mein to dim raat us ke tootnay ki dua kerti hoon 😉...woj tootay ga to tu aaye gi naa grp pe. 😛

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Aashu tujhAy bavarian chocolate ka waasta is kamini soni ko aik laat maar meri taraf se ...

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Lagta hai yeh eternal flame wala candle hai...

Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Soniii ... Kamini update de de ab kya bachay ki jaan le gi

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
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Aash ki dhamki kuch kaam nahi kar rahi hai 😈

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

This story was the hardest to put down. I should never have started it.

I have dark circles under my eyes catching up with all the updates. Beautifully written, every chapter, every character, every situation. It felt like reading a screenplay. Amazing amazing writing. Loved the use of songs in all the right places.

Can't begin to say which couple I loved the most...

Anu and Geet absolutely... when they met again I was crying for that scene

Vicky and Sasha.. totally adorable

Adi and Pinky .. the bhai bhabhi everyone has and loves

Rano and Mohinder .. taking ideals and principles to a new height

Gurvinder and Channi .. just a couple passsing through who gave humanity a new meaning

Yash and Anu .. friendship turning to love.

Geet and Maan...

This Geet has got to be the topmost Geet that I have ever read... So brave and strong even when she was crushed, even when she was left alone to fend for herself after losing everything. I absolutely love this girl. The change from the playful to the despondent to the strong and then to find love again.. You have penned a character that made me feel pride in being a fellow woman...

Maan from the beginning to Maan upto now. I am glad you did not make him over the top. What circumstances does to a man who has lost his faith and then found it again. The way he is now is absolutely perfect for all that life has thrown his way.

Anu is my favorite character through out because she is so relatable. The chulbuli friend who is your jaan, who wants to set up her brother with her BF. Loved the guts and the heart that this girl has. Shattering her own dreams and even as she broke she helped her friend conquer. She has the most heart I have read. Absolutely loved loved loved her.

Did not get to read the comments along the way but I can understand why your story is nominated in every award thread. You are a very gifted story teller.

I said I wish I had never started this story only because now I will keep hounding you until you continue.

In line with the rest of your fans for more.. Do continue please.

Thanks for a wonderful story.