MN FF *Intezaar*#2* Last part..update on pg101 - Page 48

That was amazing part you wrote beautifully

It was Amazing update,finally truth is reveled and Mayank out of his guilt.so happy for him

Beautiful part and beautiful confession

awsome part..

Very beautiful part api...
Hmm so now ramesh uncle forgave him...aah im so happy for him...finally he is free from the accusation..but wat abt raveena aunty...hope she'll forgive him too...
Loved those last words api...they wr beautiful like mayur...
Loved it...cont soon...

that was beautiful part

maria wana hug u for ths...

Intezaar

"I love you Nupur"

These words fell into her ears and she felt as Time had stopped at that moment, a deep silence prevailed between them, she closed her eyes and few tears making their way wetted her cheeks she felt relaxed, content as finally she had been made her way towards his heart breaking all the walls, restrictions, all the memories flushed in her mind, how much she had waited for him, waited to be beloved, Mayank leaned back his head at wall and closed his eyes listening her silence, he knew he had taken too ,much time to say those words ,he had taken too much time to realize how much he loved her, she was the girl who thought him how to love? She thought him living again. She had filled colors in his colorless life, she was his life..

Neither she spoke a word nor he demanded confession back they just wanted to savoring that beautiful moment in their heart when finally Their WAIT had been ended..

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"She is fine now we are going to shift her in general ward after that you can meet her" coming out of the ICU room Dr.Shah informed them and Mayank and Ramesh took sigh of relief.

"But what had happened to her??"

Dr Shah titled his head to look at Mayank, "she got shock and due to that shock she got unconscious but now she is fine, she needs rest and proper care"he added further informing them about her condition, "Thank Doctor,we will keep your instruction in mind" Ramesh shook hand so Samrat and Mayank and thanked him..

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"I want to talk to Mayank!"

Those were first few words which Raveena said to Ramesh after getting conscious and he could not reject her request though he had feared in his heart to take her condition..

Mayank hesitantly stepped in the room after Piya's death it was the first time he was going to meet Raveena Aunty.

"You don't need to be fear" her soft yet weak voice brought him out of his thoughts and he lifted his eyes at her who was signaling him with her hand to come close to her while a slight smile on her lips gave him strength..He walked to her and sat on stool beside her bed, his eyes were lowered but in his heart he was praying for forgiveness.

"I am sorry beta for taking you wrong, please forgive me" few dears tricked down on her cheeks.

Mayank held her hand and wiped off her tears, "please aunty don't cry, you are like my mother, if you scold me, abuse me then there was reason and reason was your only daughter Piya whose death had shaken your life, may be if I would in place of yours I would've did the same, but today I am happy you have been realized I am innocent and you forgave me..It's enough for me."

Raveena smiled in between her tears and kept her hand on his head, "I pray Mayank you get all the happiness"

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Although now Raveena condition had been better than before but Doctor had advised them to take her abroad as if they will live here in India Piya's memories will haunt her and she could not come of that trauma.So they went back to abroad..

With their forgiveness Mayank came out of his guilt and again started living his life as a normal person..

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"Papa,look it,Ayan ne meri drawing kharab ker di hai"A five years old girl came to his father complaining about his brother, with silky black hairs, dove shaped eyes her features were similar to her mother and one could guess easily she was Nupur's daughter.

"aww ,mera bacha,main abhi Ayan ko danta hoon"keeping aside his files Mayank picked her up in his lap and kissed her cheek wiping off her tears with his palm, "Ayan!!!"He called out his name and he ran towards Mayank hearing his father strict yet angry voice, "ji papa"

Ayan was one year younger to Soha but was very naughty boy and Mama boy..

"Ap ne Soha ki drawing kyun kharab ki'soha ko sorry bolo'."

"haan ap toh hamesha mere bete ko hi daante hain"

Nupur glared at Mayank entering in room and Ayan rushed towards his mother and she picked up her in his arms giving him sloppy kiss on cheek.

"Nupur pehle tumhare bete ne meri beti ki drawing kharab ki hai"picking Soha in his arms Mayank came close to her glaring at her and she glared back, "ap ki beti ne hi mere bete ko tang kiya ho ga..isliye us ne drawing kharab ki"saying this she looked at Ayan who gave her pout hiding his smile, "dekha ye hans raha hai..isi ne shararat ki hai"Mayank pointing towards his face and Ayan made sad face , "ap abhi bi mere bete ko daant rahe hain,hum dono ap se baat nahi karain ge"

Saying this they both divided into two parties as usual, Mayank and Soha,Nupur and Ayan..But with this little fights and sweet moments their lives became heaven.

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"Abhi bhi naraz ho"Mayank crawled his arms around her waist whispering in her ears she smiled and turned around in his arms, "main kabhi ap se naraz ho sakti hoon??"She stared in his eyes and he nodded his head negatively pulling her close to her, "kabhi nahi.." They smiled and he captured her lips for a deep, passionate kiss showing his love to her and she closing her eyes savor the moment in her heart..

Time had passed but their love, trust on each other increased day by day, they completed each other, filling their lives with happiness. it was Nupur love who gave Mayank new life, though she had waited for long but one day *Intezaar*(WAIT)had to be ended..

The End

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