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Posted: 12 years ago

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awww so beautifull update.loved it



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Kaisa ye pyaar hai''''.

Part 58


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She came out from hug and see into his eyes lovingly'
Geet:sshhh
She hugged him and placed own head on his chest' and said

" maan''..
jo sapna apne dekhatha'.uski shurhat ho gyi hai

'hmari zindagi mein ek chothi se 'nanhi si khushi aane wali hai'."

He tries to understand her words'
She came out from his embrance' and said


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" jo aapko papa ' aur mujhe mama khke pukarengi'''."
He placed both palm on her cheeks' and said " tum sch kh rhi ho geet"


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Sch me''.
She nodded and said: ha maan''.. I am pregnant'


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Maan: geet''..bina kuch bole.. hum dono ek dusre ki baat smjhne lag gye hai'.mere mann jo khwab dekha tha wo aaj tumne pura kr diya'''.


Geet: aap hi khte hai na ki hum do jism ek jaan hai


He nodded.
Maan: ha geet
Both hugged each other''..


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Both lay on bed ' she rest head on his chest and he caressed her hairs'


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Maan: geet

Geet: hmm

Maan: tumne ye mujhe phle kyun nhi btaya'..

Geet: wo ,,,

Maan: geet wo kya?

Geet: maan aapke gusse ki wajh se

She said in one breath'

Maan: mere gusse ki wajh se

Geet tum mujhe clearly bta rhi ho ya mein daadimaa, meera aur dev se jake puchu'''.

Geet: maann

She sits on bed'. And said "ab aap gussa nhi kr rhe ho to aur kya kr rhe ho"

He came near to her and takes her into embrace'and kissed on her forehead.


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Maan: geet mein gussa nhi ho rha hu''' bs tumhari fikr ho rhi thi

Tum mujhe phle bta deti''. To mein tumhe hospital ke chakkar aur wo vrat nhi krne deta'

He cupped her face and said " misthi is halat mein itna stress lena acha nhi hai"

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Maan: aur daadimaa, dev , meera ko to is baat ka dhyan rakhna chaiye tha na

Geet: aap un sbko kuch mt khehna

He gives questioning look to her.

Geet: un sb ne bhi mujhe ye sb kaha tha' jo aap kh rhe ho

She make baby face'

Maan: geet

He stands from bed ' now she faces his back'

Geet: maan' meri baat to suno na

He turns and now both face each other.

Maan: geet tum khud maa banane wali ho ''.. aur abhi bhi tumhari harkate chotte bache ki tarh hai

Khud to apna dhyan rakti nhi ho'''.aur jb koi aur rakhe''.ya kuch kahe''..tum unki baat nhi manti''

Smjh nhi aata'' daadimaa tumhari baat kaise maan gyi'''

Geet: maan''.. You don't understand me

Maan: geet'..

Mein yha kuch aur kh rha hu'' aur tum''.. kha ki baat kha jod rhi ho'..

Geet: asa hi hai maan''aap nhi smjh sakte'''

Kissi ko kho dena ka ehsaas kya hota hai

Kissi ki har pal rha dekhna kya hota hai

Har kissi ki aahat mein ''.apne ki aahat talaash krna kya hota hai'''

Tears flow down from her eyes'''

He came close to her and wipes her tears''..

Maan: jaan

Geet: maan''..

He clutches his shirt' and said "maan''' aap har baar mujhe khud se durr krne ka bahana kyun dundte ho'''"

He tries to hug her and console her'' but she removed his hand'

Maan: mishti asa nhi hai''.. Tum apna dhyan nhi rakhti ho''. Bs maine isliye kaha

Jaan am sorry''.. Please tum ro mat'''

Geet: maan''

She faint into his arms'..

He scoops her into arms and placed on bed'.

Maan: mishti aankhe kholo

He patted her cheeks'

Maan: daadimaa

Devvv'''.

Dev: bro kya huya

Aap ase kyun chila rhe ho

Daadimaa: maan kya hua

Maan: daadi geet

Daadimaa: kya hua geet ko

Maan: daadi wo behos ho gyi

Daadimaa: meera aap doctor ko phone kriye'''

Meera: ji

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Maan: doctor geet kaisi hai

Wo theek hai na

Wo behos kaise ho gyi

Aap kuch bolti kyun nhi

Doc: relax Mr. Khurana

Geet thik hai''

Maan: fir geet behos kyun ho gyi

Daadi: doctor sb theek hai na

Doc: wo theek hai''. Bs BP low ho gya tha

Now she is alright''.

Usse thodi der mein hosh aa jayenga

Dhyan rahe geet ka BP low dobara na ho''

Take care to her'.

Dev: medicine change krni ho toh''.

Doc: dev medicine change krne ki koi jaroorat nhi hai''

Usse maine injection de diya hai

Acha ab mein chalti hu''..

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Meera: maan tum yha akele terrace pe kya kr rhe ho

Maan: kuch nhi meera

Meera: kuch to hai maan

Maan: meri wajh se geet ki aankho mein aansu aaye

Wo meri wajh se aaj behos ho gyi

Meera: maan asa kuch nhi hai

Tum khud ko kyun blame kr rhe ho

Tumne kya geet se kuch kaha

Maan: hmm

Meera: asa kya kh diya tumne

Uss se

Khi tum uspe gussa to nhi ho gye

Maan: hmm

Meera: what?

Maan tum uspe gussa kaise ho sakte ho

Maan: wo apna dhyan nhi rakhti ''.. bs is baat pe maine usse thoda kya kh diya

Meera: bs ye kaha tha

Maan:nhi'.. I mean thoda aur kaha tha

She laughs'

Maan: maine tumhe koi joke nhi sunaya

Jo tum asa hass rhi ho

Meera: maan geet apna dhyan kbhi nhi rakhti'''. Usse hamesha sbki fikr lagi rhti hai'..

Issi mein wo apni khushi dund leti hai

Aur tum us se uski khushi ki wajh ke liye gussa ho rhe ho

Maan: meera

Meera: maan tum dono chahe sb kuch mujhse na kaho

Pr tum dono ki aankhen kh deti hai

Tum gussa is baat pe huye''. Usne apni is halat mein fast rakha'' tb bhi uski tabiyat kharab ho gyi thi''. Wo tumhare sath hospital mein rhi'..khud ko takleef di'''

Hai na maan

Maan: hmm

Pr won hi smjhti '''..

Meera: maan kya tumhe sach me asa lagta hai''.. won hi smjhti''

Wo smjhti nhi''. Tumhar baatein'''. To tumse ab tak kyun chupati''

Wo pregnant hai''.

Maan ydi wo us waqt tumhe ye sb kh deti''

Kya tum usse apne pass rhne dete'''

Maan: nhi'''.

Meera: isliye usne nhi kaha

Maan:

"maan''' aap har baar mujhe khud se durr krne ka bahana kyun dundte ho'''"

Tumne shi kaha meera'''geet ne bhi mujhse yhi kaha tha''.

Pr us waqt mein uski baatein smjh nhi paya''..

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Geet: maan


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Maan: ha mishti

Tum kuch chaiye''

Mein daadimaa ko bhula ke lata hu'.

She held his hand and stops him ''

Geet: maan am sorry'..

Maan: mishti'' tum mafi kyun mang rhi ho''. Galati to meri hai''..

Sorry jaan''

Thoda gussa ho gya''


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Geet: wo thoda tha

Maan: hmm

Geet: kya

Maan: nhi thode se thoda sa jyada

Bs'''. Ab khush

Geet:

Maan: mishti kya huya

Geet: aap bhut bure ho'.

Bilkul nhi smjhte mujhe

Bs gussa krna aata hai

Puri baat sunte nhi'.. bs

He placed his index finger on her lips'.. Stop her for further saying anything'

Maan: shhh

Tum ek sath itna sb kuch kaise kh leti ho''

She turns her face to another side''.

He holds his ears''.. And said "sorry baba"

Maan: mishti meri taraf dekho na

Geet(think):- babaji kitne cute lagte hai na ye'''.. jb assa sorry khte hai'''..

Geet thode der aur enjoy krte hai

Maan: geet''. Tumhe meri baat nhi sunani na''.

Thik hai''. Mein ja rha hu'''

Geet: maan

Aap mujhe fir se chodke jaa rhe hai''.

Maan: geet mein to bs pani lena jaa rha tha''.

Tumhari medicine ka waqt ho gya hai''..

Geet: maan aap yhi rahiye na mere pass

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Geet: maan

Maan: hmm

Geet: aap mujh se gussa to nhi hai na

He rests the head on his hand and look into her eyes''..

Maan: mishti

Geet: maine aapko phle nhi bataya''..

Maan wo mein '..

Aapse'.

I mean''.. aap ke''..

Maan: tum mere sath rhna chahti thi

Mujhe khud se ek pal ke liye bhi durr nhi krna chahta thi

Hai na

Geet: hmm

She nodded'

He placed the palm on her cheek'

Maan: mein janta hu geet

Aur ab smjh bhi gya hu

Pr khud ko itni takleef mt diya kro''..

Tumhari tabiyat kharab ho jati to

Geet: huyi to nhi na

Maan: geet

Geet: acha baba''..mein dhayn rakhungi

Ok

Khush

Ab aap

Maan: hmm

(Whisper):- mujhe pata hai''. Kitna dhyan rakhengi ki khud ka

Geet: kuch kaha apne

Maan: nhi ''..

Mein kuch kaha kh sakta hu

Geet: kya matlab

Maan: kuch nhi''' tum ab so jayo

Geet: aur aap''

Maan: mein yhi hu geet...


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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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thanks to all my friends who hit like button and do comment on my previous post...
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hmm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayee yar me kya kahun ye maaneet mushy moments ke liye u will get 200 out of 100.. I just love it
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😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Hayee yar me kya kahun ye maaneet mushy moments ke liye u will get 200 out of 100.. I just love it



dear u like it... i am so much happy... kal mein isme pics bhi post krungi...aaj net slow hai...😛


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pixelflower620

nice update buddy
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm



😊... updated...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka




<font size="3" color="#ff0000">dear u like it... i am so much happy... kal mein isme pics bhi post krungi...aaj net slow hai...😛</font>


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u knw the update deserves a long comment bt due to fever i cant sit on pc

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