SwaRon FF - WHEN CUPID STRIKES - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Love the concept !! Please pm when you next update!!! ;)
*waits impatiently!*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
wowowowowowow
niceee imagination...👏
good going...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Chapter 4

Rey goes to ask Kria out...

Rey: Kria...kya tum...kya tum...

Kr: Aap kya kehna chate hei???

Rey: Woh...Wil come out for a date wit me???

Kria culdnt believe her ears...she always imagined tis moment but she didnt expect it to really happen...

Kr: Seriously???

Rey: Haan...toh wil u???

Kr: Umm...yeah,sure...

Rey: Toh Chale???

Kr: Aab???...Theek hai...

Rey n Kria leave d canteen n Rey turns around n smiles at Sharon be4 leavin...

Sh: Chalo...luks like its gonna work out between Kria n Rey...Thank god...I shuld let Swayam noe tat everything worked out...but where did he go??

Sharon searches for swayam but could not find him anywer..

Sharon to herself: ab yeh bandar kaha gayab ho gaya...!!!
She was walking as if she was in her own world and did not notice the water spilled on the floor...
And was about to slip... She closed her eyes.. Waiting for herself to fall but she sensed sum1 was holding her hand... And waist too tightly... She slowly oepned her eyes...! To see it was swayam... Look-look hawa-hawa... *pehla nasha*
Sh: tum! Tumhari himmat kaise hui muje chuhne ki... Chodo muje.. Leave me...leave me i said...
And her leaves her and she falls down... Sharon's mouth wide open.
sh: huh..!
Sw: hahahahahahaha...
Sh: tum.. Tum mujpe hass rahe ho..! How dare u...
Sw: tumhare irritation ki priority kya hai...? Mene tumhare help ki iss liye ya mene tumhari baat mani iss liye...!

Sh: Owh god!!!

Sharon tries gettin up but slips bac dwn cus of d water...Swayam gives her his hand to help...but she jus pushed it away...

Sh: I dnt need ur help...

Sw: Fine...sit here d whole day..i dnt care...

Sharon tries gettin up one more time but fails again...Swayam jus smiles at her...n again offers his help...Havin no choice...Sharon held his hand n Swayam helped her up...

Sh: Thanx...

Sw: No prob...i'm always at ur service...*n winks at her*

Sharon stares at him in shock...

Sh: R u tryin to flirt wit me???...Cus let me tel u...I aint gonna fall for it...

Sw: Plz...meh itne bhi desperate nehi hoon...ki tumhare saath flirt karna padega...

Sh: Wat!!!...Hello,main iss college ke sab se Hawtest ladki hoon...all d boys here flirt wit me...

Sw: Sorry babe...I aint one of them...

Sayin tis Swayam walks away...Sharon jus stands there in shock for awhile...then realises tat she still hasnt tol him bout Kria n Rey...

Sh: swayam wait...

Sw: wat now i told u i m not interested in flirting wid u...!
Sh: aare par...
Sw: par wat... Do u think every1 is just despo to talk to u and try and cum closer to u.. Then i must tell u jungli billi i have betta thing to do...
Sh: wait! Bahot hua... Me tumse sirf itna kehna chahti thi dat kria has agreed to go on a date wid rey... And runs away...
Sw: oh no! Me kuch zyaada toh rude nai ho gaya na...!
Nil: Tu yaha kya kar raha hai...! Tu toh rey ke saath tha na.. Rey kaha hai!
Sw: vo vo..! Vo vicky ke saath hai
vicky enter...!
Vi: hey guys... Rey kaha hai..?
Ni: tere saath hai..
Vi: aaye pagal ho gaya hai kya.. Me toh aaj rey se mila hi nai hu..!
Ni: toh rey hai kaha...???
Sw: vo me vo me.. Batana bhool gaya rey was not feeling well dats y he left early...!

Nil: U shuld hav jus tol me...y did u lie???

Sw: Ummm...mazak tha yaar...

Nil: Wasnt funny dude...

Sw: Sori yaar...Guys,i gotta go...Sharon se kuch kaam tha...

Vic: Ahem Ahem...U're goin to c Sharon...tats new...

Nil: Wats goin on dude?? *winks at Swayam*

Sw: Woh CS hei...Main ACS hoon...toh ofcourse i hav to c her yaar...

Vic: Haan Haan...

Sw: Chal guys...i really hav 2 go nw...

Swayam leaves in a hurry...He felt really bad for bein rude to Sharon...n jus wtd to c if she was alrite...Then he thought to himself...Y do i suddenly care??...He passes by d rehearsal hall...n finds Sharon there...she was jus warmin up be4 her dance...n for d first time Swayam jus stopped n stared at her...

Sw: She's actually not bad...beautiful toh hei...Wat!! Dude,tis is Sharon u're talkin bout...u crazy or wat...jus go, say sorry n leave...

Swayam walks in to d rehearsal hall...Sharon sees him n jus looks d otha way...

Sw: Sharon... gusse main ho kya?!

Sh: shii... bilkul nahi tum jaise ladke se kaun gussa ho saktha hai?

Sw: Oh toh theek hai...

Sh: Ofcourse main gusse main hoon idiot...

Sw: Kya mujhe ab sorry bolna padega?

Sh: Oh no thank you...

Sw: Thank u bolon? kyun?!

Sh: Arey baghwan!! koi mujhe isse bachao...

Sw: Tumhe mujjhse koi nahi bacha saktha...

Sh: Ab tumhe kya chahiye?!

Sw: Woh... Kam ke baare main kuch baat karna tha...

Sh: Kaho kya baat hai?

Sw: Woh RDX sir humse college katham hone ke baad milna chahtha hai...

Sh: Kyun?!

Sw: Mujhe kaise pata?!

Sh: Haan.. tumhe kuch pata nahi..

Sw : esa kyu bol rahi ho...me bohot smart hu thke!

sh : oh really

sw : ha koi shak

he moved closer to her face..look look hawa hawa

sw : koi jawab hai?

coming back to senses

sh : apni smartness apne pass rakho samje and chalo me tumhari vajah se RDX sir se dat nahi khana cahti

sw : chalo mana to sahi ki me smart hu and mujhe bhi koi shok nahi tumse yaha khade hoke baatein karne ka huh follow me now!

he left leaving sharon shocked

Sharon comes to RDX's office n Swayam is already there...

Sh: Sori Sir...i'm late...

RDX: U're here jus in time Sharon...Come in...

Sharon goes n stands beside Swayam...their elbows brush against each otha...Sharon feels awkward n moves away frm Swayam...while Swayam jus smiles at her...

RDX: So guys...i jus wtd to check up on u guys...hav u'll sorted out ur probs???

Sw: Yes sir...V're cool nw...

Sh: Everything's fine sir...v wont b fightin anymore...u dnt worry...

RDX: Gud...so,guys..if everythin is sorted...then pls start d plans for d Dance Fest soon...i want to c ur presentation for d fest in anotha 2 days...

Sh: 2 days???

RDX: Yes Sharon...is there r a problem???

Sh: But sir,tats too soon...hw r v supose to prepare all d presentation...

Sw: V'll do it,sir...no worries...

RDX: Thanx Swayam...u guys can go nw...

Sh: But sir...

Sharon jus gives up n walks out of d office...

Sh: swayam...what the hell...how will we complete everything in 2 days...

Sw: woh woh...meri jungli billie...calm down...we'll finish it..
Sh: what the hell...tum..
Sw: ( places his finger on her lips n holds her by her waist)...ssshhh..
kitni baat karti ho tum...ouch...stop trying to scratch me...tum sach mein junglee billi ho...
sharon was caught off gaurd...she was lost in his deep black eyes...they were kinda mesmerising...his touch send all these alien feelings through her.
Sw: sharon...trust me...we'll finish it...humein col ke baad milkar complete karna padega..but we'll finish it...

Sharon finally returns to her senses...

Sh: Alrite...nw,can u leave me???

Sw: Ummm...kyu???

Sh: Kyon ki i'm feelin uncomfortable...nw let me go!!!

Sw: Uncomfortable huh??...*smiles at her*...Fine...

Swayam lets go of Sharon...n moves bac frm her to create a distance...But for sum reason Sharon felt as if she wtd him to continue holdin her...n d fact tat he was standin far away frm her nw jus didnt feel rite...

Sharon thinks to herself..."Dnt be crazy Sharon...tis is Swayam...d Weakling...u dnt feel nythin for him but HATE!!!

Sw: So,where shall v meet afta college to start workin on d presentation???

Sh: Ummh...i dunno...

Sw: I hav an idea...Y dnt v go to my hse???...I hav sum of d stuff for d presentation already ready at my hse...so,it wil b easier for us...

Sh: Hmmm...fine,like i hav any otha choice...but i dnt noe where's ur hse...

Sw: Its alrite...u can follow me bac afta college...

sh: oh helo... i m the CS..!! i dun follow ACS...

sw: ohk.. madam... me aapko follow karunga.. aap muje mere ghar ka rasta dikha dena..!!

sh: aaarrggghhh ok fyn i will follow u..!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Amazing abi...!!! Just superbb...haha...it ws so cool wen he said oke mam aap mjhe raasta dikha dena...😆 eagerly waitin fr d nxt part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Superb . Its fun 2 c them fighting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
boat ride wala scene ke dialogues... I just love dem... Iss liye add kar diye the... Love it yaar...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Abby fantastic. OMG swayam is soo hazir jawab , the way he irritates sharon is so cute. plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Awesome job dude, just superb... Nd thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
awesum update abby..!!
aap mujhe rasta dikha dena ye line konsi behen ne likhi thi..!!😆😆
dis was hilarious..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Am a silent reader in the AT and i remember these were there! Awesome chapters! Swayam showing attitude one minute and then next he is falling for sharon is really nice! Please update quickly... As i had read the chapters uptil this only in the AT so i cant wait to know what happens next 😛

BTW whoever wrote the line " aap mujhe mere ghar ka raasta batado.." was really funny... Awesome FF everyone! 😃

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