SwaRon FF - WHEN CUPID STRIKES - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Hahaha I actually read upto this part :)) please pura complete kardo and I will read then and lamba comment I will post :)) I am loving it so far tho! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wwoohhooo sharon drenched in water... Par plan kiska hai swayam ya sharon... Wait wait i know humara... :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: manasie

wwoohhooo sharon drenched in water... Par plan kiska hai swayam ya sharon... Wait wait i know humara... :P


haha.. Nice cmnt! Bt it's true! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Oh Gosh!.. Nw happnd 2 our diva? I thnk it is a prank vch sharon tried 2 ply on swayam! Bt may b swayam nly taught her a lesson!.. Eager 2 noe wutz d actual reason!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
URGHH!! Isme bhi Swayum nakhare waala?? Kya se kya kar diya Swayum ka...but plotwise awesome concept and the first part was awesome!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2

The next day at rehearsal hal Sharon plans to play a prank on swayam and ask the gang for help

Nil: Y ru doing all this sharon

SH: Come on nil..please i am counting on you guys..woh swayam ka baccha ..i want to teach him a lesson

Simmi: Nilesh please help us..won't u do that for meee

Nil: Stares at simmi and then say yes sweety

SH: gr8

Sharon, nil and simmi along with rinni plan to place a bucket full of super cold water just above rehearsal hall's door and wait inside so that when swayam comes in and opens the door..the bucket falls on him..They wait patiently but rey gets to know abt the prank as he was standing just outside the door.

SW: Hey rey what ru doing here

Rey: Ssshhh..quite sharon is tryin to play prank on you..

SH: what? what kinda prank

Rey: woh dekho bucket full of water

SW: Iski toh..what does she think of herself..time to teach her a lesson

Rey: leave it na..please

SW: No way

They both enter rehearsal hall from the window and see sharon, nil and simmi waiting for swayam to enter, they quite stand behind them and ask

SW: wass up guys

SH: Turns around and gets shocked..tum yahaan..tum andar kaise aaye

SW: kyun...kya hua..and gives her a wicked smile

sh: tum yha pr kase?

sw: planing 2 play a prank on me huh?

sh: k-kon mai???

sw: haan tum !!!!!!!

sh: nhi to...

sw: to fir ye bucket kyu yha pr??

sh: v-voo

sw: SACH BOLO

sh: -*gaining her attitude again* han khelne vali thi...to??

sw: to??? tum srdi ke mausam me mere upar itna thanda pani girane vali thi??

sh: dats wat u deserve...

sw: dats wat i deserve?

sh: haan

sw: to ye lo...he throws the whole bucket on sharon...!!!!!!

Sharon jus stood there drenched in water...

Sh: AAAHHH!!!

Rey: Swayam...yeh tumne kya kiya???

Sw: Wat??...i jus did wat she wtd to do to me...

Rey: But u cant do tis to a gal...she must b freezing...

Sw: Woh..woh...

Swayam looked at Sharon...she was already shiverin...suddenly he felt bad...

Rey: Sharon...r u kay???...u betta cover urself...

Suddenly sum1 was handin a shirt to Sharon...Sharon looked up n saw tat it was Swayam...She jus pushed his shirt away...Rey saw tis n removed d jacket tat he was wearin n covered Sharon wit it...

Rey: Rinni, Simmi...u'll take Sharon to d locker room n let her change to sum dry clothes be4 she falls sick...

Sim: Come Sharon...

Sharon couldnt even walk properly...she had to take small n slow steps n Rinni n Simmi both were holdin her so tat she doesnt fall down...

Rey: Swayam...dude,tat was not cool...

Sw: ye muje kya ho gaya tha...!!! Me apne manners bhi bhul gaya... Me ek ladki ke saath esa kaise... Haaa muje pata hai.. Chudail hai.. Lekin phir bhi...

Meanwhile gals locker room...

Sh:swayam...dat creep... Me usse nai chodungi... How dare hi.. Ek ladki ke saath kaise behave karna hai.. Usse nai pata kya...

Si: sharon chil yaaa.. Hum bhi toh uspe prank karne wale the na...
Sh: haan usne prank toh kia.. Upar how dare he offer me his shirt... Dat weakling...!
Ri: lekin muje toh laga we all r frnds... Now!!!
Sh: me ek min ke liye usse miss kripa ko bear karlu.. Lekin that swayam... Aaarrrggghh neva...! He has to pay for this...

swayam thinks about what he has done and is feelin guilty..

SW: What have i done?

Nil: Dude, how could u do that to such a pretty girl

SW: pretty girl my foot. and what was she tryin to do

Nil: whatever..u guys are crazy

Meanwhile, in locker room sharon changes into a pink dress

Ri: Sharon what will u do now

SH: just wait n watch rinni..he is gonna pay for this big time

Si: Sharon please stop all this..

SH: shut up simmi..how dare he does this to me..i can't spare him

Rey and Swayam talk in rehersal hall...

R: I want you guys to become frnd and ur doing all this...aisa how will u guys dance together

Sw: Please, i dunno how can u think that me and that jungli billi can ever be frndz..i hate her

Rey: But i really need u to dance wit her so tat i can dance wit Kria...

Swayam realises hw upset Rey was cus of all tis...

Sw: Fine Rey...i'll b nice to her...but dnt make us dance 2geta 2day...

Rey: But Y???

Sw: Afta everythin tat happened...v both need time to cool dwn...let me say sorry to her first...then i'll dance wit her 2moro...

Rey: Promise???

Sw: Haan yaar...promise!!!

Rey hugs Swayam...Nilesh n Vicky jus stared at them...

Rey: I love you dude...

Nil: Wat???...Rey,wat did u say???

Sw: Rey...kya kar reh ho???...Leave me...

Rey leaves Swayam...

Rey: Ntg Nil...maine kaha ki I Love Swayam's sneekers...Aacha hei nah???

Nil: Wateva dude!!!

Jus then Sharon walks bac in2 d rehearsal wit Simmi n Rinni...

Sharon gives a very cold look at swayam..

Nil: Bachke swayam.. Sharon tum par aag ke theer apne aankhon se...

Sw: Shut up nil! I need to go say sorry...

Nil: That this is what i call entertainment...

Swayam goes to Sharon

Sw: Sharon?!

Sh: Kya chahiye?

Sw: I'm So...soo...sorry!!

Sh: Kyun?

Sw: woh tum par pani giraya na?

Sh: Main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi...

Sw: Y not?! Maine kisi ka khoon toh nahi kiya!!

Sh: Mujhe aur gussa mat dila...

Sw: Whatever... Mujhe guilty feel hua toh maine sorry bol diya... Dont think main tumhare piche piche aakar sorry bolunga...

Sh: How dare you?!

Sw: Yes! i Dare!!

Sh: Aaargh!!

Nicole ma'am enters the rehersal hall for the class...

Ni: Guys ballroom dance ki practise shuru kare???

Nil: yes. Maaam...i am always ready Drooling over...
Si: nilesh... Ke kehne ka matlab hai we al r ready..

Ni: so i think yaha pe partners swap hue hai... Aacha hai... Vaise bhi i din like kria and swayam's chemistry... Lets see swayam and sharon ki chemistry aur rey aur kria ki chem kaisi hai...

Sh: hum.. Wat..! Chemistery... Humari zero chem hai test karne ki kya zarurat hai...
Sw: chup chap dance karogi...
Sh: tumhare saath neva..
Sw: muje bhi nai karna.. I'l go and tell nicole mam...
Sh: ruko.. I'll dance tumhare vaje se muje apni lessons skip nai karni...!!!

swayam and sharon start dancin,,both look super annoyed with each other

SW: shall we

Sh: Huh

SW: gawd this girl is driving me crazy

SH: Whatever

SW: lets start..he grabs sharon's hand and pull her close to him

SH: is shocked and stares at him..ladki le saath pehli baar dance kar rahe ho kya..be a little gentle..

SW: v funny ladki ke saath i have danced end number of times..tday i am dancing with a jungli billi for the first time.

SH: how dare u?

SW: Dnt u dare me sharon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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osmie osm update jaan...!!!!!!! luvd it 2 d core...meri vali jo EK update thi vo isi chap me...u noe vo swayam ka sharon pe pani girana...OL THNX 2 Me 4 DAT...!!!!! hahah
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
@Ash...Cutie,i aso jus realised yesterday u aso wrote a part of d FF...so,i jus went n added ur name among d writers...so sori i forgot!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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koi ni abi agar aap na bhi add krte toh chalta..its totally f9 vase bhi mane sirf ek update likhi thi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Amazing update... Please PM me next time when you update! I cant wait for their dance now 😃

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