The Feather of Blue Bird#2 [MN] *Completed* - Page 28

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

U know wht was the best part of this update'. Nature is back'gosh I so missed them so much

Loved that cute little birdie' I wish nature comes in his life too

Ahh this was a so loved filled update Suja.. they way he snuggled, thought he is dreaming hold her, all showed his immense love for her, tht haa strted to cum out'.

Everything in his life he has closed yet has saved preciously within himself, he hasn't let it goo..

Aahh n lastly his words'. He needs tight hug for this' so vulnerable he was'tht actually made u smile in hope he is cuming back the real mayank is cuming back..

And the feather of the blue bird said it all

Lovly update dear

Cont soon

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

beautiful update suja!!!!!

just loved it .specialy the last few lines are awsom .it realy touched the core of my heart .
update next part soon .

Thanks for ur liking😊

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Awesome update.

thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Superb part...
Loved it to the core..
Cont soon...

thanks 😊

Thanks everyone😊

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update APU...
Beautifully written.
loved it to d coreee...
so he fainted for low BP i though for fever or loss of blood...😆
bt awww...
Nupur taking care of her Husband was sooo adorable n nice...
loved d way he snuggled towards Nupur in his sleep...
i hope everthing is gonna be fine soon...
n plzzz dis time make Mayank accept her too plzzz
loved it to d coreee...
loved it lodsss
waiting for d next part eagerly...
love u APU...🤗

ps: so finally updated my comment...😆 n sryy for d delay...😳
n han maine last wala bhi edit kar diya hain so plz hv a look...😳

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Originally posted by: arhi_maneet

AWESOME ! LOVED IT ! DO CONTINUE SOON !!

Thanks everyone😊

Originally posted by: shafyyy

I AM TOTALLY SPEECHLESS...

AMAZING AMAZING.. UPDATE..

THIS IS ONE OF THE BESTES,, PART..

HATS OFF.. TO YOU...

YOU ARE JUST.. TRUELY...

VERY VERY BRILLIANT FF WRITER...

LOVELY...

SO BEAUTIFULLY YOU HAVE DESCRIBED THE MAYANK'S CONDITION...

I JUST LOVED IT...

ALL THE SYNONYMS OF

BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING AND OUTSTANDING , MINDBLOWING...

MINDBLASTING..

JI BHI..

YOU ARE JUST TOO GOOD..

YAAR..

TOO GOOD...

Originally posted by: Maria.

@sujata

Amazing update dear

'you have portrayed both Mayur Emotions beautifully,the last part was very touchy,i hope Nupur will bring happiness his life soon

continue soon

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nupur ll surely bring happiness in his life.😊

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

awesomest update...

the bestest part👏👏👏

i hope mayank start trusting nupur n become the mayank like in past...

thanks 4 the pm

may god bless u

ps- the way u expressed their feelings r too gud

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Originally posted by: drmaha

sujaa first of all a big to u,... 🤗 🤗

wht update gosh... nature is back i loved it bestest part...

how mch mayank suffered cant see him in a pain... m feelin so sad... how mch he loved her...

now nupur came to know the reason m sure she'l be settly things between thm...😊

thts birdy was shooo cute...

pls. pls update soon as i want to see maynk reaction...

love y ajani...

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