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Posted: 19 years ago
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FANTASTIC!!!! n i mean it!!! i look forward to this fanfic so keep up the good work n cont. soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Re-cap:

Prem gets a call and when he answers it he is notified of a problem. The camera stops at his face.

Now:

Mukti looks at him with curiosity as he shuts the phone frustrated. "What happened?" she asked soothingly.

"There has been a problem…big time." He answered her.

"Well.…what happened?"

"They have caught hold of our transportation."

"Uf oh U.D." she said, with the ease and familiarity of using his nick name a privilege few had; "so what is you're point? It is just a truck…what is so huffy puffy about it?"

"It is the one we send our weaponry in idiot. The one from Kanyakumari witch was ported in for the Kashmiri groups. If we get caught then that is it we are dead."

"Where is it healed?"

"A check post in Mangalore. The police are too honest and…"

"Won't find anything sweet heart."

"But then Mukti this is a huge stocking…it is worth near 18 cores…"

"Budu what did you think? Such large stock's will be sent through a check point like that and information won't leek?"

"Mukti…that is the problem with you take everything a bit too easily you can not – especially with our stuff."

"Police won't find any thing except what is documented to be there manufactured products."

"Explain." He demanded, folding his hands across his chest.

"Well if you insist darling I called to pull the old switcher."

"Duffer do you know how long it will take to take the goods, change the products and what if there is an error?"

"Not products dodo the number plates." Prem looked at her with a practically blank look. She patiently continued, "Listen…I had arranged for two trucks in the exact same model and colour to meat at a particular daba for food. Got it?"

"So?"
"Who would get suspicious darling?"

As Mukti spoke the seen shifted to a daba where many people where eating a man in a dark shirt was eating. A new lorry pulled over and slid another man slipped down an ordered himself some food…both men exchanged looks. Not a word more…just then two scavengers where near the lorry that just pulled in two other near another just like it…in ten minutes the number plates had been successfully changed. The scavengers went near the new diner and called out to the owner; "Ara baiya sahb…do roti do naa book paat ka raha hai…Kaam katham karnaka lia aj kal waqth kabi teher tha nahi. Us kattu malik ka pass wapas hum jana hai tho jaan nikal gaya." He stressed upon the word kaam katham. (Translation: brother [respectfully] gives us two breads, hunger is eating our stomach, work is over now a days time does not stop. We have to go to back that crazy owner otherwise he will kill us.)

The owner responded, "Bechara tum log…lo achi thara paat bara do aur kuch chaha tho manglo…" (Translation: poor you guys take eat well and fill you're stomach if you want anything else ask.)

The initial diner called out, "Are bai sab ya loo ap ka kanna ka paisa…kaana bohoth acha tha…dill kartha hai kaana bana haath ko sona ka kangan penau…kya kara…kismath saath nahi hai." (Translation: Brother take you're money for the food…it was wonderful I wish that I would present the hand witch cooked it a gold bangle…what to do…fate is not with me.) Laugh at his own joke and goes away, smiling and then goes away. He wakes to the other truck where the keys are kept and drives away in his old root…they other diver too quietly pays the bill and takes the other truck and goes away too.

Back at the party…

"You played the switch, brilliant." And hugs her sweetly. Then taking her over to the adults summarizes what she just did. Bajaj pats her cheeks and says, "Sabash bata sabash…I am really proud of you." Prerna beams at her. Anurag looks at her half affectionate and half proud look with a smile. Sampatha hugs her and says, "You are growing so fast." She wipes the tears out of her eyes and Prem immediately jokes.

"Step-mom…don't shower her with so much tears she will get drenched." Every one laugh…just then Snaha takes some Kajal out of her eyes and says, "Kisi ka nazar na laga." and places it on her temple where it is not very clear. Mukti blushes and bends her head…the camera shows Prem tightening his grip on Mukti's hand and gives half closes his eyes as though he agrees with what she did…she paces another hand on him and leans on his shoulder in a friendly manner. Sharath and Prerna notice this act and smile knowingly. Their friendship is deep rooted…very deep rooted…

Krishi

P.S this is just to show Mukti's briliance...wait for more.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Guys small request RESPOND + and -

Precap:

Some one's 😡 and jealous

Krishi

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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Recap:

Mukti stops a great problem from happening with her pre-planning attitude for one of the many businesses she takes care of and everyone is proud of her.

Now:

Baja's are at home discussing Mukti and her achievement. The whole family, Mr. Bajaj, Prerena, Tushar, Kuki and Vishaka. Mr. Bajaj is talking, "I can not believe Mukti is taking up so much responsibility. It seems like yesterday that she was still in her seventh grade and was working on a project. Remember Prerna, she would use every single factor to the maximum. She her library cards, taking notes making a list and on top of all that she would also use the Internet to her complete capacity."

"Yes Mr. Bajaj…" Prerna spoke up, "how could I forget? Even in that age she began taking interest in all our businesses and also began working on them. After a point some of her linking had given us great money."

"You and Kamini aunty have done a good job with her mom." Tushar commented.

"Thank you beta…" Prerna replied.

"Yes mom she has come out beautifully." Vishaka also added.

"She will continue to do so…I can't believe how she pre-planed everything like this. She uses her funds very well." Mr.Bajaj mentioned the black money she was spending on such acts. Kuki listened to everything quietly she did not really listen her mind was else were. Vishaka though was going on blabbing…Mukti's childhood and what not. After a point Kuki said she was sleepy and left…inside her room she did not go to sleep but wept softly. Looking at herself in the mirror she said "Kuki just look at you're self to the outside world you are such a star but inside your own family you are practically nothing at all…just nothing. Mukti, Mukti, Mukti, that is all they think of why she is brilliant she is just brilliant." Saying so she cried her sat down and took a cigarette to her lips just then came a voice, stern but affectionate. "Don't you dare." Prem stood there and smiled at his sister walking and closing the door asked her, "What happened sis?"

"Everything seems to go against me…stating from my family to…"

"Kuki what happened to you? All of us love you so much and still…"

"But they care for Mukti more…and she is so talented."

"Kuki so are you just look at the fans you have…all of us are proud of Mukti because she is very responsible for her age and on top of all that she is also working on many important projects."

"That is my point everyone trusts her and gives her such important…"

"It is because she has a knack to do that just like you have a knack to make any audience dance with you're beat or hum to you're tunes. You can't compare you're self to Mukti she is different and you are different." Prem looked at her in a worried tone he knew Kuki more than anyone else. "There is so much towards this than what you think Kuki when you work on certain things you are good at everyone praise you too. Besides trust me one day you will see this for you're self." Kuki smiled though her tears…she knew Prem was right. "Thanks a lot bro…"

"No problemo..next time come strait to me and not go to a cigarette."

Next day:

Prem is jogging and Sharath and Snaha join in, "Morning brother-in-law, morning sister."

"Morning Prem…so how did you like the party." Sharath asked.

"Loved it…man all the hot…"

"Prem…" Sneha began but Sharath cut her words.

"Hay what are you going to do today? Big plans?"

"Not at all just need to slip into office a bit and then go out shop for my collage clothes." Prem replied.

"Great…" Sneha took on, "Mukti needs to go too…hay why don't you two?"

"We already are sister that is why I am coming to pick her up my nine." Prem told her.

"All right then we will see you latter important meeting to work on." Sharath mentioned and they left on separate paths. In the car Shena and Sharath where saying, "So are you going to order it today?"

"Yes wifey we will organize the whole thing. No error…he says we can pick it up around a day before so no problem at all."

"Good." Sneha smiled and leans on Sharath and cuddles him sweetly. "Just two more weakes."


Mukti is trampling her closet on what to ware for her shopping today…luckily it is not much work in office so she can be very casual. After all it is a Friday…she glances at her calendar when she tells her self, "Just two more weakes." Finally she decides to

along with some silver jwellery

Looking beautyfull. Prem pulls over and goes inside yelling for Mukti and she comes running down. He looks at her and is dazzled at how nice she looks. "Close you're mouth U.D a fly is going to go inside it." Prem shoves her comment away in good hummer and taunts her… "Come on Ms. C.B.I we have some work before our leisure time…we do need to hand over a lot of responsibility to those two goons."

"Prem they are nice besides we will drop in now and then to check on them it is not like we are dumping the company."

"What ever…let's go."

Prem and Mukti are in the office and are seen sighing many papers and talking to two men. It takes them half an hour to set everything right and then they step out with a huff. Next they ride to the shopping mall where they practically shop and buy out many things…clothes, (they don't have much with them because in school it was uniform and rest is formal were) shoes and a few music albums. Deciding that their phone was getting bad get new mobiles. After a point they end up also getting some cool glances, watch and jewellery. Mukti buys some make up and other stuff and Prem helps her out in them. Prem on the other hand gets him self some deodorant, after shave and more nonsense. This goes on till lunch time when Prem gets very hungry…they go. Mukti gets her self salad with diet coke. Prem gets himself sandwiches with bear…Mukti scowls at the bear but does not say anything. After lunch they do the very heavy work…getting necessary stationary. They knew they would need a terms worth as time would not be available. They get highlighters, book marks, post its of various sizes, a large set of pens, pencils and erasers check their list again. "We still need to get some…" Muki rummaged, to the attendant "barites, permanent markers, some notepads and…"

The attendant decided to intervene… "Mam you can get all the items witch you got so far with the batteries and marker once you select them and I will send them to the counter."

"O great thanks…and you do remember separate…" Prem

"Yes sir." The attendant replied.

"Great." Prem replied and finally get done with all the items and a large box of C.D's each.

"That is done…um where are the files and notepads?" Mukti asked.

"There mam…" the attendant pointed out.

Finally they get some folders and files of different kinds the labels as well as a last minuet work. Prem and Mukti are on the way out when they decide to get a pen holder and a pouch for pens and pencils. After they pay they are too tiered to work so go and sit for a coffee…just as they settle down Karan walks up to them. "Hay guys, done shopping?"

"Hay brother…no we still have to get a laptop bag."

"I thought you got it with the lap top?" he looked surprised.

"No the back pack kind buddy." Mukti told him. "Also some travel bags…I was using brothers or uncles but now I really need to get some."

"I was doing mine too…my god it is tiring. After a point you keep going back to you're car to keep the stuff." Karan added.

"Tell me about it…" Prem and Mukti groaned.

"O.K then I will see you guys at collage I need to go..by."

"By…" Mukti said and so did Prem.

They got back to doing their last bit of shopping, the bags once they where finished they drove home.

Pre-cap:

Surprise.

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Night before collage:

Mukti is seen looking at all her clothes desperately she wants to make sure she does good. All her books are ready as she had ordered them on the Internet and arrived…looking through her files. "Mmm I think I will take that one…good to slid in my materials. Fits into my bag and looks good excellent." Mukti was talking to her self she wanted to make a good impression and was desperate to do so. Deciding on a grey file with slip in folders for any extra materials. Next she begun glancing though her notepads and picked one up and slipped it in as well in her bag. Checking out another item in her neat printed list looked at the next item… "I need to put in my stationary…" placing it in again checked the list. "Make sure that you put the plug ins right? Sharath what is wrong with you?" she thought aloud. The list was made by Sharath for her first day so that she won't forget anything. Rolling her eyes checked everything again anyways…she knew Sharath says reason is there. Checklists always saved her lives and she did as she was told. Next on the list was something witch made her laugh – keep in you're planner. "Brother I always do." And she followed his orders. The list went on till it came to, "Have a minimum of 500 as cash with you." She forgot to draw hard cash today brother is going to kill me, she looked at the time, "Just eight great the ATM's very nearby I will go and get it." On retuning with the exact amount checked it as well and sighted with relief. Slowly everything was completed and Mukti's bag for collage was ready. Next she looked through her clothes and decided to were something trendy but not very flashy – "Black tops and this t-shirt should do."

Prem's seen doing a similar stuff Sneha had sent him a copy of the list. He groaned but respected his sister and followed what she said. When he too scanned down and got towards the five hundred cash raised his eyebrows but did not say anything. Soon his bag too was ready and decided to throw on anything in the morning. "Hay Prem…" came a cheery voice from the door, turning around and looked shocked picking up a shirt…he was in nothing but a genes and was embarrassed, "Sister can't any one in this house knock?"

Sneha smiled at him sweetly, "No Prem never."

"Great so how 'bout you brother-in-law?" he demanded to Sharath.

"She opened the door I didn't." Sharath replied hurriedly.

"What an excuse she opened the door it seems." Prem was angry.

"Anyways what are you going to were tomorrow?" Sneha asked.

"Hmm I don't know…talking of clothes sis that top with this skirt looks horrible." Pointing to her clothes, "And my clothes just anything and I will make girls faint."

"What ever…Prem did you get that tape recorder as I told you to do?" Sneha demanded.

"Sure I did…see." Holding a tape recorder up.

"Good boy…do take it to you're collage tomorrow it will come in handy. Now for you're clothes were something…"

"Sister please not this Mother India representative I have had enough all ready just something I like so don't worry. Now go home it is getting late."

"You too we are going for dinner together all of us with mama and papa…" Sneha instructed him.

"Witch one?" Prem asked jokingly he knew who she meant.

"My in laws as pre-planed." Sneha snapped at him.

First day of collage: Basu residence. (Bajaj and Prerna are out of town and Prem was staying over at Basu's in the morning he wakes up gets ready and eates…all the usual stuff and says) "O.K guys I better leave…I have to go to collage."

Dadi stops him saying, "Wait Prem, we will prey for you and then you can leave…" when dadi is praying and Prem is rolling his eyes Sam and Anurag step out. They return and Dadi is feeding Prem his favourite dahi having a few extra spoons finds his car keys missing. Anurag steps in and says, "Prem you're car is waiting for you outside come on." They step out to find a beautiful …

standing out Prem is too happy for words and hugs Anu and Sam. Running down the stares and drives away to collage.

First day of collage: Gupta residence. (Kamini and Shalandar are also out of town and this work is done by Sneha and Sharath for Mukti) Sneha is praying for Mukti, gives her prashad then dahi just as Mukti starts to leave Sneha says, "Mukti we have a surprise for you."

"Really?" jerking around, "What is it?" Sneha hold her by the shoulders and takes her to the door. Sharath ties a cloth around her neck and then opens the door…when Mukti's blinds are opened out she finds a car standing there.

Happily hugs Sneha and Sharath and she too runs of to collage.

Krishi

Pre-cap:

New characters…would they brake the dark world or would it sustain against their acts.

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Five dark hooded people are seen with lit candle in their hands. They step in and kneel before a stone in a circle formation. "He destroyed you…we will avenge you. He and all involved with him in this game and save all those who are involved with him. In temptations he pulled you and destroyed you're body and mind. We will avenge you're death, and give you the justice you never had when you were alive."

They get up and make a ritualistic dance around it by stepping right till every one were opposite to their initial place. Raising their candles they say… "Listen to us great lord…give us strength in our venture and success fail us not." With this blowing out their candles they remove their hoods. Revelling their faces…

Sakshi


Prathap



Reema

Jai



Hari


Who are they? What are they capable of?

Keep reading.

Krishi

Pre-cap:

Danger

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG!!! tht was brilliant!! now i am dying to find out who they are!!! take care n cont. soon!!!
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Mukti and Prem reach their collage and wait for Karan near the gate. A black biker is seen riding though the road from above, he takes a bend and then reaches the main road. Few minutes latter pulls over at the collage he takes of his helmet and we see it is Karan. A few seniors come to him and slap his back and he talks to them in low voices…Camera zooms in on their hands and a financial transaction is being made – he count them and then hands them a small box with some white powder. They move away from him a few girls take their place some hug him and others kiss him…hear too there is a financial transaction and he gives them some package. Getting off goes to Mukti and Prem.

"Hay brother." Prem greets him, "Hay buddy boy." Mukti greets him as well happily at seeing him…

"Hay buddies…man I love coming to collage." Karan shoots at them winking. They both laugh at what he says knowing what the real meaning is, lowering his voice Prem asks him, "How is the business going? Good?"

"Too good." Karan asked, "Why do you want to see some clippings? Latest…you can't believe the clips they place out to you…not just ordinary ones man they are like **** those girls. Especially when they are just drugged up and passionate…"

"Kidding bor?" Prem asked him mockingly.

"No…even I could not keep my eyes of them when I was shooting and that too with such a mood raiser…god wish they were more than just my trades people." Karan said so earnestly Mukti started at him open mouthed, Prem was busy placing a finger in his ear and rubbing it as though he did not hear properly. Karan laughed at them and remained them they better get to classes…they walk away. Karan places his hand on Prems shoulder and he on his. Mukti initially cribbed about getting her leg of the wall she was leaning on but they guys managed to drag her.

"Hay forgot to tell you Karan…bai and babi got me a new car. So did Anurag Uncle and Sampatha for U.D." Mukti informed him, Karan stayed quiet for a second and Prem stiffened. He wanted to kick Mukti right now, they could have told him slowly. What if Karan felt bad, luckily, the reply was not so.

"The two of you will drive carefully right. You are taking it even within the city not a long drive type guys and the traffic is pretty bad…" Karan started in a very genuine concern. Mukti and Prem were his only family and he did not want to loose them, both of them knew this very well. They never took advantage of their friendship, business was business for them and friendship was friendship. Prem remembered how he and Mukti had asked his services and did it in a business manner. Even before in many illegal chemical transactions Prem and Mukti had paid him completely – he did not object either. A past memory…

Prem, Mukti and Karan are in their office and Prem had said he needed a certain amount of illegal chemicals for work. "Karan we were wondering if you could take care of the transaction for us."

Karan sat comfortably and quiet for some time, Mukti sat next to him and watched him carefully. Finally he said, "On one condition." Mutki and Prem crossed their fingers, "I want it to be a complete business transaction. I will charge you exactly how much I charge every one else. All right with you?" Both let out a relived breath.

"You read our minds brother. Done." Three of them get up and Prem and Karan shake hands on it. Mukti places his hands on his shoulder and pats him proudly. Back in reality Mukti who had seen a girl from school had gone to talk to her…Prem was looking at her intently.

Karan followed his eyes and said, "She is good looking in that dress is she not?" Prem glanced at him but continued to hold silence. "You want her?" he asked casually. Prem almost slipped the stairs they were climbing.

"You crazy that is Mukti Gupta I dare try any nonsense with her that is it Sneha and Sharath will hand me by the ear as soon as the adults are done with me." Prem practically shouted.

"Lower you're voice duffer. You are crazy I did not mean as a one night stand…I meant do you really like her and want her to like you?"

"O that…hmm I don't know. One night…" He answered and then eyes Mukti's back in a naughty manner, "Who won't…man she is really good. Don't tell her that."

"Will not…and I won't with Mukti…I consider her my sister." Karan replied.

"Poor kid her heart will be broken." And Prem started laughing.

"U.D stop it will ya…and don't let Sharath know…"

"Do I look like an idiot? Sneha will kill me even before I get towards the first stage…"

In the shadows someone is listening

Krishi

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After thought:

Sneha would not let mukti were the black as it would be asubth so she makes her put on

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hai rabba!!! krishi, mein kya kahoon??? like when karan was talking about the photos, mera mann was like 🤢 , but karan and prem's conversation on mukti kinda cheered me up....i sooo hope prem RLY likes mukti!!!! n i think i can predict who was in the shadows, was it one of the other ppl ( the ones who have sworn to take revenge )???

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