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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: pranita1202
congrats for the new ff
amazing character sketch
different story
underworld backdrop nice
different from rt mc lovey dovey ff
one question is mugs character is kept 2 yrs older than purposely?
looking fwrd 4 the updates

yes its purposely

i guess only u noticed it😳

@all

thnkuuu guyz for the lovely shovely coments 😊

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

awesome start...👏

nice concept...n character sketch...😊

totally different plot...this will be a bang...i am definitely sure...👍🏼

i always wanted a this type of story...i just love this type of stories...😃

moreover i liked ur background music n the title of the story...👏

''...Meri adhoori kahaani

Lo daastaan bann gayi
Ho Tune chhuaa aaj aise
Main kya se kya ban gaya

Sehme huey sapne mere haule-haule angdaiyaan le rahe
Thehre huey lamhe mere nayi-nayi gehraiyaan le rahe
Zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
Karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane

Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi hai
Aankh num kyun naa jaane O Saiyyan...

Odhu teri kaaya
Solah sigaar main saja loon
Sangam ki ye raina isme tyonhar main mana loom
Khushboo teri choo ke kastoori main ho jaaun
Kitni pheeki thi main sindoori main ho jaaun
Sur se zara behki huyi meri duniya thi badi be-suri
Sur mein tere dhalne lagi
Bani re piya main bani baansuri
Zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
Karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane

Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi hai
Aankh num kyun naa jaane O Saiyyan...

Mere aasmaan se jo hamesha gumshuda thay
Chaand taare tune garrdishon ki lay badal di
Laut aaye aaj saare...

O Saiyyan...😍

too good amazing...

loved it very much...

do continue soon...n do pm me...thanks...😃

update soon...

luv u...😊

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Anuja

@anu93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Amazing Character Sketch Khushi di...Very Different and Interesting Plot. Waiting for ur 1st update. Curious about the story. Thanks for PM

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

nice concept do continue soon

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Congrats on the new plot...

Very beautiful...

Do continue soon...

And PM me when you update next...

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Simran_14

@Simran_14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

congratz on da new ff dear

interesting

superb plot n cs

loved it

plz cont soon

will be waiting

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megha

@megha01

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

ohhhooo awsum diii

ab smjh aya ki volume on krne ko kyu bol rhi thi... extraordinary idea dii

char sketch is really gud

w8ing fr d 1st part di :)

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

for the new FF... it is very interesting. continue soon.

for the pm

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

congrats for the new ff di...

sounds really interesting...

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

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YekChaturNaar

@Charu21

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

OMG!!!!

Kya BG Score hai!!! makes ur FF even more awesome yaar!!! loved it sooo much!!!

Damn good character sketch n plot yaar!!!!!

👏

Mast interesting story!!!

All actors are perfect for resp characters!!! but mere Manish ji ko selfish kyu bana diya!!!!! 😭 lol!!! i know it's just a character so i m coming out of my rona dhona avtaar!!!😆

loved it serioulsy yaar!!!

I wish i had time to read ur chapters u will update!!! I really really loved da story!! never ever read such story before!!!! 👍🏼

Will surely read all ur parts in future if at all i get time in future!!! really loved it... 😳 I m not saying just for da sake i really loved it!!!! 😛

All da bestest best darling!!!!!!!! Muahhh!! 🤗

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