FF ArSh: Devil's Bride..!! NOTE pg 88

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Sonbull; Sonu

@Amadora

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: aish_loves_KaSh
first of all, sonu, u made me fall in love with ur style of writing!!

I mean its so flawless man..
Update was beautiful
I loved how u described shilpa's feeling...brave yet frightened..lol:D

Omfg!! DAB is hawwt hawwttt☺️...hayye main mar jaawan shakkar kha ke🤪

And loved ArSh meeting
Omfg!! DAB hottie is gonna teach shilpa lessons☺️

Eeeks!! wonder what he will do with her☺️

hi dear

I'm so glad you liked it..

and thank you so much for your sweet comment

ahaha Just wait and read n you'll find out 😛

Edited by SA_KA - 13 years ago

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nightstar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Hey amazing part, though i would appreciate longer updates..cant wait for romance to start...cont supersooon

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

The start was amazing ...

Totally loved it ...

Great work ...

Cant wait to read more ...

Plzz update soon ...

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RomanceChocolat

@RomanceChocolat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Wowww That was a mind blowing start👏👏👏👏👏

am totally hooked to it...Its very intriguing...I am already in love with this DAB😳...U gotta write soon😳

Thanks for the pms... oh if aish is the push button for ur writing then am gonna push aish if by any chance we get an update late😆... kidding... thanks aish🤗 for asking her to write this on ArSh😉

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tulsi agarwal

@spicyheart

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

wow i love armaans character

he is sooo hawt even his character

amazing beginning

continue soon

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Sonbull; Sonu

@Amadora

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: RomanceChocolat
Wowww That was a mind blowing start👏

am totally hooked to it...Its very intriguing...I am already in love with this DAB😳...U gotta write soon😳

Thanks for the pms... oh if aish is the push button for ur writing then am gonna push aish if by any chance we get an update late😆... kidding... thanks aish🤗 for asking her to write this on ArSh😉

Thanks,

Ahaha😆 I'm glad you like it

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

what an beautiful update was that ..😊..

too good 👏

i can just picturise everything...

good work..

thanks for the pm :)

cont soon

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S.B.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

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Anu

@DulceAmor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Great first chapter! I was swept into from the first sentence itself. You have created a brilliant atmosphere through your description of the castle and voices whispering to Shilpa. The whole thing is very myseterious and intriguing and had me wanting to read on and on. I could picture it all quite clearly, like one of those fantasy shows on TV. Loved the little dialogue between Shilpa and DAB - I had this very clear picture of him kissing her hand with so mucb flare. I am intrigued to know why she needs his help. Can't wait to read on. Do update soon. And thanks for the PM.