KriYaansh FF~Rolling Hearts In Deep#1(#2LinkAdded) - Page 22

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey dear, thanks for pm about this ff 😃 😃
Great story and cute story 👏 👏
They were missing each other terribly and wanted to meet eachother asap. 😍 😍
Shaks and Amar both r behaving Mr. and Ms. Attitude and wenever they come close they start to melt into eachother's gaze 😉 😉
Gud friends that they made a special meeting of them. 😊 😊 but again our KriYansh luvs to fight.
😕 😕
How cuteee the way Amar called her love was so wow, it proves how much he wants her and so as Kria rlly cute, hieee how much she loves him too. 😳 😳
Rey's dance, should i say that he was amazing and perfect and teased Kria perfectly. 👍🏼 👍🏼
Now see wat's gonna b Kria's next update 😛 😛
update fast dear

guys i also want a PM wen u update next...loved the concept and ur writing...!!!!!!update soon...

Originally posted by: Sweetheart17

guys i also want a PM wen u update next...loved the concept and ur writing...!!!!!!update soon...

Sure will pm u
n tanx v r glad u likd it

Jaan am so sorry itne late se comment karne keliye. Mujeh toh sabse pehle comment karni chahiye thi. But i couldnt. Anyways it was awesome baby. And i mean it. Tune toh greek mythological characters ko bhi mention kiya, i loved it. Vicky ke lines toh mind blowing the yar. The way he was teasing rey...hahaha. And tera song selection bohat acha tha yar. Rey ke dance hayeee, i can imagine the whole sequence. And the way he was mentioning kria as Love... OMG am really impressed meri jaan. It was too gud. Muaaahhh...love u.

Originally posted by: neethuuthaman

Jaan am so sorry itne late se comment karne keliye. Mujeh toh sabse pehle comment karni chahiye thi. But i couldnt. Anyways it was awesome baby. And i mean it. Tune toh greek mythological characters ko bhi mention kiya, i loved it. Vicky ke lines toh mind blowing the yar. The way he was teasing rey...hahaha. And tera song selection bohat acha tha yar. Rey ke dance hayeee, i can imagine the whole sequence. And the way he was mentioning kria as Love... OMG am really impressed meri jaan. It was too gud. Muaaahhh...love u.

Originally posted by: aria009hera

tujhe pata hai tere comment ke bina meko kitta kharaab lag raha tha!! ab me super khush! love u too jaan!!

Triooo hugg****** lub u both

sorry anki di!! * kaan pakarke* late comment kiyan isliye!

Originally posted by: kritid3lover

sorry anki di!! * kaan pakarke* late comment kiyan isliye!

you are an amazing writer!!! ahhh how i love your ff! rey hurting😭 really like your idea , aapko bhi greek mythology mein interest hai? mujhe bhi i thought of asking you before because of ur user name it has "hera" hehhe! i really like how you have used the greek references and the song rolling in the deep, haven't heard it but now surely will...your vocabulary is really good and how u utilise it in your writing! beautifully written 👏 rey ka aatitude!! and kria supermodel!!! i really wanted her to dance also 😭 and read rey ka shocked expression, i mean kria ka jawaab for his dance!! how could u leave her out?? * pouts* anyway...awesome idea!!!!!! just waiting for the next update eagerly! jaldi jaldi kariyo! both their ego's and attitude clash , just love their fights and arguments ...iss baar toh rey jeet gaya but next waali mein plz kria ko jitwana!!

keep writing! and thanx for this treat! 🤗

guys awesome updts