FF-OUR JOURNEY BEGINS...PART 4 UPDATED PG 30 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz update soon and plz pm me and plz hurry the update cant wait till they meet and swaron shaadi and viha entry
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yes more likely on friday
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PART 2:
"OH Universeji aaj bhi late",said kriya 2 herself running on the railway platform...suddenly she bumped into sum1(any guesses...???of course d cool dude reyaansh singhania)
kriya-arey o linecutter
rey-excuse me!!!!wat did u say...
kriya-english me babadane ki zarurat nhi...tum jaise ladko ko achi tarah jaanti hu...
rey-wowowo...dekh ke tum nhi chal rahi thi takrai tum mujse aur muje keh rahi ho ki main kaisa ladka...hu
kriya(in her mind)-chod kriya abhi tym nhi jagadne ka...train miss hogayi to ?????.she said a big "huh" and went away...
rey-hello ...excuse me!!!!!!!badi ajeeb hai...he shook his head and walked away his way...
kria had gone in d wrong direction...after sum tym finally she finds out d rite train coach...
she found her seat...
a person was already there with his back 2wards her...keeping his bag on the upper berth...
kriya thought'isse maine kahi dekha hai...
and wen he turned...ALAS...HE WAS THE SAME BOY SHE RAN INTO...
kriya-TUM...??????
rey-TUM...?????
kriya-mera picha karte karte yaha bhi pahuch gaye?????
rey-excuse me!!!!!get ur mind clear...waise bhi yaha pehle mai aaya...us hisaab se tum mera picha kar rahi ho...and ya mujhe tumhara picha karne ka shok nhi...mera seat no.35 hai.. n here it is...he said pointing 2wards his seat...
kriya-to mai bhi tumhara picha nhi kar rahi...mera seat no.36 hai...then both of dem thought in their mind"kaha phaas gaye,".
rey sat on his seat n kriya turned 2 keep her bags on the upper berth...but as she was keeping her bags...the train started with a dhakka and kriya lost her balance...and fell on rey(they were in a sleeping coach train in which seats r big enuf fr a person 2 sit)...rey also lost his balance and fell straight on his seat...with kriya on the top of him...1st LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA...SUDDENLY kria stood straight and sat on her seat...she didnt wanted 2 fite ..anymore she kept quite...
their was pin drop silence in d coach...train ws really very empty...only the trains sound came "dhichuk dhichuk"...
kriya took out a novel book n started reading...rey was getting bored...he plugged d head phones inhis year...started a song which was very loud...he starte singing
"i gotta a feeling"
"2nites gonna be a good nite"(oh really)
"2nites gonna b a good good nite"
kriya shouting at him-excuse me!!!!!!stop singing...but d music ws so loud he cud nt hear kriya...kriya was getting frustrated she got up almost shook rey off...
rey(stoping d music)-hello wats ur problem!!!!!...
kriya-aap yaha akele nai ho...i m getting disturbed ...
rey kept his ipod in his bag...he ws in no mood 2 listen music...dis girl...ws making him angry...he took out a cane of coke...and ws abt 2 open it...but d dhichuk dhichuk train...rey ws sitting in a train fr d 1st tym...as he opened d coke...due 2 the dhichuk dhichuk...the coke slipped frm his hand and fell on kriya...
kriya-ye apne kya kiya...mera pura dress kharab ho gaya(she stood up)...aap ne kya thaan li hai mujhe pareshan kar ne ki...aap jaise ladko ko mai achi tarah jaanti hu...
rey also stood up-excuse me!!!!dnt start this"aap jaise ladke again"...ok..it was an accident..
kriya-acha accident huh...
as she said this the train achanak stopped eith a big dhakka...rey lost his balance n fell over kriya...(vice versa...hehe)...
...bothh stopped fighting...look look hawa hawa...both stared into eeach others eyes...dey heard sum noise outside...der eyelock broke n both went out on d station 2 see wt d matter was!!!!!!!there wer many other passengers...they all marched 2 d station masters(s.m.) office...(ok so d tyms around 8pm)
s.m.-(2 all passengers)dekhiye aap sab shant ho jaye...ye train mai kuch technical problem ho gayi hai...to ye train kal subah hi chalu hogi...tab tak aap sab waiting room me ruk jaye...
ok,said all passengers except two...
"hame kal subah tsk to shinghad pahuchna hai,kisi bhi haal me"yelled rey and kriya 2gether...and then luked 2wards each other...
sm-dekhiye train to aaj chalu hone se rahi...subah tak aur koi train bhi nahi...ek kaam kijiye aap dono by road chale jaiyee...i m extremely sorry for d inconvenience...they both walked out...
kriya thought 2 herself-raat hai,by road akele kaise travel karu...(akhir she is a girl)...looking 2ward rey...ye ladka itna bhi bura nahi...atleast shinghad tak saath mai to hoga...rey was walking away...
kriya ran 2wards him n said-hello can v travel 2gether????
rey-excuse me?????
kriya(making a baby face)-dekho raat ho gyi mai akeli kaise travel karu...
rey-see its ur problem...and walked off...he walked a few steps and turned backwards...kriya was standing der...thinking wht 2 do...rey saw a awara type guda walking 2wards kriya...kriya ws nt aware...rey quickly went 2wards kriya and said ok chalo...kriya started jumping lyk a child n said thank u!!!!!!!
rey started smiling..he didnt knew y???
they walked 2gether on d sumsaam rd...trying 2 find a lift...
they saw abus coming...rey waved fr a lift...d bus stopped...a man came down
man-kya hai?
kriya-dekhiye humari train ruk gyi ...hume kisi tarah bhi shingad pahuchna hai kal tak...plz hume lift de dijiye...
man-kya aap dono shadi shuda ho????ye bus mai sirf shaado shuda log hi chad sakte hai...aaj kal ladke ladkiyo ke bhagne ke kisse bahut ho gaye hai...
kriya(without luking at rey)-haha hum shadi shuda hai...
rey-wht d...
kriya looked at him wid a "do as i say"wala expression...and dragged rey inside...
kriya took a window seat..and rey sat beside her...
they started talking in whispers...
rey-ye kya tha???
kriya-dekho lift mil gyi na baas...she asked a man-bhaiya shingad kab aayenga?
man-subah pahuch jaoge...waise aap dono ja kaha rahe ho?shingad honeymoon manane ja rahe ho kya????
b4 kriya said anything rey said-nhi nhi...waha hamari kuldevi hai...shadi ke baad unke darshan karne ja rahe hai...
man-acha!!!!!!!

nite tym all in d bus slept...subah hui...
the sun rays started entering thru d window...rey rubbed his eyes n woke up!!!!!kriya ws sleeping on his shoulders...he smiled but sumthing ws irritating her...rey saw that d sunlight fell straight on her eyes...he kept a hand between kriyas eyes n d window...first tym he noticed hw beatiful she was...such an innocent face.
a couple ws luking frm behind..."dekho kitna khayal rakh raha hai..apni biwi ka...
suddenly..kriya woke up...
the bus halted...
driver...-chalo chalo...dhaba aa gaya kuch kha pi lo...bus yaha paitalish minute rukegi...rey kriya got down...rey saw a dhaba fr d 1st tym...they bth sat on a khatiya...kriya asked d dhaba wala fr dal roti...saw rey...asked-aap kuch nhi khaoge???
rey(talking 2 d dhabawala-bhaiya yaha sandwich milegi???
d man shook his head...
rey-jane do...suddenly kria got up ...went into d dhaba...whispered sumthing in d dhabawalas ears...went inside ...and came after 15 minute...with a plate...came 2 rey n said-ye lo sandwich...
rey-sandwich par yaha...???
kriya-dekho maine unse kaha ki mere pati sandwich hi khaennge and i made it myself...tasty to nai hogi,,,,but...
rey-its ok...and ate it...
chalo chalo said d driver and they aall went into d bus...
soon singhad arrived...rey n kriya got down...d bus went away
rey-bye...
kriya-bye...n thank u!!!!!
rey-kyu?
kriya-mera yaha tak saath dene ke liye...
rey its ok...
den they both walked in opposite directions...

(ok nw all u have to imaing dat d music of d song kuch to hua hai frm kal ho na ho is playing)
rey(walking,luked behind)smiled-pehli baar aisi ladki mile...he again luked in frnt...
kriya(luked behind)-pehli baar maine kisi ladke ke saath itni baat ki...
remember bth r walking in opp. directions n talking 2 themselves
rey-itni bhi buri nai thi
kriya-acha ladka tha...
rey-bt y was i caring fr her so much????
kriya-mujhe uske khane ki chinta kyu hui???
rey-wait !!!! maine to uska naam hi nai pucha...
he turned around...but kriya ws nower 2 b seen...
kriya did d same...but they hd reached far frm each other...

rey n kriya both thought"kya wo mujhe wapas milegi/milega????

so frnds here ends part 2.kya kriyaansh milenge...see i hv spent 2 much tym thinking of dis part so plz comment n lyk...well luved ur all ppl comment fr 1st part THANKS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesome plz updateee moreee i luv it nd do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gr8 effort...loved their convo...and their journey..thaanks a lot for the pm and plzzz update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
awsum 👍🏼😃 update fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
woww...hhmmm seems somethng is cooking up...pehle jhagda...fir sath mein safar...n dono thinking abt each other...hhmmm
nicey niceyyy...
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow beautiful update. Congrats ami. U r an awesome writer. Kria ne rey ke liye sandwich banayi... Cho chweet. Plz next part bhi jadi update karo...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ekdum dhinchuk dhikchuk update tha lolz...aww there were so near yet so far...lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Awesome work.
And plz plz plz update d nxt part soon...

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