FF-OUR JOURNEY BEGINS...PART 4 UPDATED PG 30

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Nikki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

this is awesome so far please pm when you update it :D

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ArSha_Forever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Can't Wait For The Update soon n thanks for the pm

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Anyaa_012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

heyyy... really nice concept yaar...:):)
vry nice CS ...:)
plzzz pm me..:)
update sooonn...,,:)

Edited by Anyaa_012 - 13 years ago

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Smriti

@dazzlerfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

wow.. amazing intro!! sounds great.. let's see!! waiting for it do update soon!!!!😃😊

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kuhu bhatta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

nyc concept,,,,,,,,,,,,,,plz plz plz pm me

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anamika143..

@anamika143..

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

thanks all of ya for ur lovely comments...here's part 1

PART1:
REY'S CABIN:
"What is this",Rey shouted at his P.A.,"how can u do such a mistake?".The P.A.(pinky)totally latu patu fida over his boss stood in front of him.
pinky-sorry sir.(dreamingly)
rey-maine tumhe flight ka ticket book karne ko kaha tha, railway ticket nahi!!!!!oh god!!!!
pinky-galti hogayi sir!!!!dobara aisa nahi hoga...
rey-dobara main tumhe aisa kaam hi nahi doonga...

Rey walked away from his cabin, and went home
AT HOME:
Rey sitting with his mom and dad for a lunch...
rey- dad us pinky ne to aaj had hi kar di...maine usse ticket book karne kaha, aur usne train ki ticket book kardi.

dad- rey aap itna pareshan kyu ho rahe ho,ab bhi to flight ki ticket book karwa sakte ho na!!!!

rey - dad i have already checked.swayam ki engagement sunday ko hai...train ki ticket saturday shaam ko hain, and monday tak ki sari flights booked hain...

mom-par beta aap ne to kabhi train se travel kiya hi nahi...

rey -pata hai mom, par mera jana bhi to zaroori hai...nahi to swayam naraz ho jayenga...

dad- acha hi hain apko train travelling ka bhi experience ho jayenga,main to kehta hu rey beta, aap shaadi karlo, dekho swayam bhi to ab shaadi kar raha hai...wife aayengi to aapki sab chiz settle ho jayengi

mom- sahi kaha apne...beta jaldi se hamare liye ek pyaari si bahu laado...
Rey does'nt answer but is thinking in his mind"abhi tak mere takaar ki koi ladki mili hi nahi...jab milegi tab..."
suddenly rey's phone rings...he gets up and goes to his room

mom-suniye wo meri astrologer frnd hain na pata hai usne kya kaha!!!!!!
dad-kya?
mom-yahi ki jald hi reyaansh ki zindagi main koi aane wali hai...
jo uski lyf ka imp part ban jayengi...
dad-bhagwan kare aisa hi ho,hum to use saamjate saamjate thak gaye...

REY'S BEDROOM:
TALKING WITH SWAYAM ON HIS PHONE.
swayam-dude, tu kab aa raha hai?
rey- baas sunday mrng pahuch jaunga!!!!!

NEXT SCENE- TICKET COUNTER
kriya-mujhe ticket chahiye!!!!
man on the T.C.-dekhiye madam maine kaha na koi ticket nahi hai...sab full hain...
kriya-aise kaise ho sakta hain?
man on the t.c-madam aapko jis train main ticket chahiye wo full booked hain...
kriya-dekhiye kuch bhi ho jaye par mujhe ticket chahiye...

kriya ke piche line lambi ho rahi thi...
man behind kriya-dekhiye madam ham sab yaha ticket ke liye khade hain aap agar is tarah khadi rahengi...to ham kab ticket lenge...
kriya- main bhi yaha ticket ke liye hi khadi hu...
seeing this d man at the counter says- madam suniye, ek nayi holiday special train hain, usme aapko ticket mil sakti hain...par train thodi khali rahengi...
kriya-koi baat nahi aap bas ticket de dijiye

the man with a sign of relief gives kriya d ticket...

kriya calls sharon
kriya-heya sharon how r u?
sharon-i m fyn.,...but u wont bhi fyn if u don't reach here
soon!!!!!
kriya-arre issi liye to call kiya hain meri train saturday evening main hain, sunday mrng main pahuch jaungi!!!!dont worry!!!!
sharon-i m not worrying ...but sunday ko agar tu tym pe nahi pahunchi na then u will have to worry...
kriya-ok sharon...bye!!!!!!
sharon-bye!!!!!cya soon.

so this was the 1st part...
kaisa laga????i know acha hi laga hoga...
plz give ur beautiful comments and yup hit d lyk button...

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Neethu Uthaman

@-Neethu-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Wow very nice ami. Ruka kyun, continue kar dete... Wow rey aur kria train me milne waale hai, interesting. Plz next part bhi jaldi update karo. Can't wait for kriyaansh first meeting. And thanks for the pm dear.