FF-OUR JOURNEY BEGINS...PART 4 UPDATED PG 30

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Awesome ones ami.

it was lovely.

continue soon and do pm me.

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anamika143..

@anamika143..

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

sorry, guys i had thought to discontinue this ff...but seeing the response to the last part... i thought of continuing this ff... many of u may find it short...but i m sorry i promise i will update this ff weekly
once again
SORRY
Part 4
Kria reached her room.sharon's word kept ringing in her head..."engagement is at 7.pm SHARP..n you have to reach at the main hall by 6.30pm SHARP"... stressing on the word sharp. And kria knew the consequences of not reaching at the hall SHARP.

Kria said to herself,"i m tired rite now lemme catch some sleep, rite now its 2 pm...

she set alarm in her mobile for 5 pm and about 10 reminders in a duration of 1 minute.coz she knew hw kumbhakaran she is!!!!!!
and kria slept!!!!!

5 pm...TRIIINGGG...went on kria's alarm...

she immediately turned down the alarm..and the 1st reminder rang!!!!...she turned her phone to silent (this is my habit which i incorporated in kria...he he)

she woke up after sometime...she was in happy mood...coz she really loved sleeping...she saw the surrounding and remembered wer she was!!!!!!!!!!!
kria-SHARONN...!!!!!!!! oh universeji...she saw the tym..it was 6.00pm

k-ab to sharon mujhe pakka mar dalegi!!!!she hurried to get ready...

on the other hand every1 had gathered in the main hall for the sagai...it as 6.30 pm...sharon was getting restless..."where is kria???she is even not picking up her phone...she said to swayam...(remember her phone is on silent)...

sw-wait sharon, rey bhi ab tak nhi aaya, maybe i shud cal him and request him to bring kria along with him...

sharon nodded a yes

swayam called rey...

rey was just leaving his room wen his phone rang

rey-yup swayam...

swayam- rey staircase se left mai, 3rd room mai sharon ki best friend kria ruki hai...aur wo ab tak niche nhi aayi hai, and sharon is kinda getting restless, so will u just go and bring her along with you!!!!!!

rey-okayyy dude!!!!!

rey reached kria's room...the music player was on...he called frm the door
KRIAAA...

no reply...

he entered the room...there he saw a girl in front of the mirror her back 2wards him...

rey-hello...????

he advanced forward...

kria was trying to tie the dori of her choli...she sensed someone's presence...she immediately turned around in a jiffy...and crashed into rey...rey lost his balance and fell on the bed...he tried to catch kria's arm for support, but alas...kria lost her balance and fell on the top of rey...

k-tum??? yaha???

r- hieee kriaaa...i m rey...

k- tum yaha kya kar rhe ho...mujhe nhi pata tha ki tum itne batameez ho, tumhe pata nhi girls ke room enter karne se pehle knock karte hai...and aise hi tum andar agaye.
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r- wo wo wo!!!! maine knock kiya tha..par wo kya hai na tumhare room mai music bahut zor se chal rha tha...and if u plz excuse (he indicated her that he was still lying on the bed she was on top of him) to kya hum khade hoke baat kare???

kria felt embarassed.and got up...she without looking at rey tried to tie her dori...

r-if u allow mai tie kar doon...kria glared at him

r- no bad intentions...wo kya hai na sharon bahut gusse mai hai...and swayam called me to brng u along wid me sooo...

k-okay!!!!!

bg- dil se re...dil se rey
rey closed his eyes😳 and tied the dori in slow motion...

Edited by anamika143 - 13 years ago

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Neethu Uthaman

@-Neethu-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

*faints* Yeh tu hi hena ami? Mujeh laga ki tu iss ff ke baare me bhul gai

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anamika143..

@anamika143..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: neethuuthaman
*faints* Yeh tu hi hena ami? Mujeh laga ki tu iss ff ke baare me bhul gai

ha mai hi hoon...yaar mujhe bahut jan ne req ki...so i updated kyun acha nhi hai???????😕

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achuAR

@achuAR

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

ami...

aah...koi mujhe pinch kar lo..😲

tum ami bitwa hi hona???

hello hai bye bye

she immediately turned down the alarm..and the 1st reminder rang!!!!...she turned her phone to silent (this is my habit which i incorporated in kria...he he)...

kria toh ek baar hi kiya tha...

main toh roz 5-6 baar snooze karne ke baad utthi hoon😆😆

anyways surprise was superb👏👏

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

after soo long you updated...

loved the part...its awesome

rey tieing dori of kria...thats awesome

waiting eagerly for next update

please update soon this time

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anamika143..

@anamika143..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: achuAR
ami...
aah...koi mujhe pinch kar lo..😲
tum ami bitwa hi hona???
hello hai bye bye
she immediately turned down the alarm..and the 1st reminder rang!!!!...she turned her phone to silent (this is my habit which i incorporated in kria...he he)...
kria toh ek baar hi kiya tha...
main toh roz 5-6 baar snooze karne ke baad utthi hoon😆😆
anyways surprise was superb👏👏

ha mai hi hoon mamiji...arey kria ne reminder rakhe par silent kar diya cell ko isliye sunayi nhi diye...

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Smriti

@dazzlerfan

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

omg...just like everyone even i was shocked when i saw the pm form ami on my inbox😲😲

btw kya surprise diya hai...awesome update yaar... loved it!!!!

mujhe nhi pata tha ki tum itne batameez ho, tumhe pata nhi girls ke room enter karne se pehle knock karte hai...and aise hi tum andar agay

heheheheheheheh😆😆😆 lol

and hayeee rey tying the dori of kria ... with dilse rey bg... ☺️☺️...

and do update soon beti... dying to read the rest :)

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achuAR

@achuAR

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: anamika143

ha mai hi hoon mamiji...arey kria ne reminder rakhe par silent kar diya cell ko isliye sunayi nhi diye...

haan patha hain..par agar main silent pe rakhoongi toh meri school bus miss hogi😉

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#200

amy i still can't believe u r back... u r really back... i love u loads amy for this update... no prob if its short...something is beter than nothing...

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