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o teri maan tumhari geet to drink bi karti hai...na yakeen a raha meri baat par..wae me bina suboot ke kuch nahi kehti ye deekh
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next update I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it
Besides this I am extremely grateful to each one of u who have nominated me in the FF awards I was surprised to see the names of my FF in the final list of selected nominations 😊 and I am extremely thankful to all my readers who have nominated me in the Most Descriptive Writer and Most Poetic Writer category😊
Guys just getting nominated means a lot I promise to continue entertaining you'll with loads of Maaneet stories
If u think I deserve to win then do vote for me. Here is the link for the FF awards
love- Piya
PART 69
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After a blissful start to their morning Maaneet come downstairs to meet Savitri

Maan and Geet take the blessings of Savitri

Savitri: Kya baat hai Maan aapne ek raat mein aisa kya jadu kar diya k humari Geet k chehre par itni khoobsurat raunak cha gayi? [Geet has a beautiful glow on her face what magic have u done in one night Maan?]

Geet started blushing profusely and hugged Savitri

Geet: Maa aap bhina kyun ched rahi hai mujhe? [Mom why r u teasing me?]

Savitri: Geet humne toh ek seedha saadha sawal pucha tha par aapki sharmahat har ek raaz par se parda utha rahi hai [Geet I had just asked a simple question but your blushing is removing the curtains from all the hidden secrets]

Maan: Maa Geet k chehre par mere pyar ki chamak hai aur ye chamak puri zindagi bhar bani rahegi kyunki har ek gusarthe hue lamhe k saath humara pyar aakash ki bulandi ko chutha chala jaayega [Mom the glow on Geet's face is due to my love and this glow would continue to be there on her face throughout our life as with every passing moment my love for Geet would go on touching the heights of the sky]

Savitri: Hmm' wo toh hai par aaj aapki Geet ko dekhne k liye koi aa rahe hai [U r right but do u know that some people are coming to see your Geet today]

The possessive side of Maan Singh Khurana was awakened

Maan: Kismein itni himmat hai k Maan k rehthe hue Maan ki Geet ko dekhne koi aa sake main unn logo ko nahi chudunga Geet ko dekhne ka haq sirf mera hai Geet sirf meri hai aur humesha meri hi rahegi [Who has the guts to look at my Geet; Geet is mine and will b mine forever I won't spare the people who will dare to look at my priceless possession]

Geet and Savitri started laughing

Maan: Aap dono has rahe hai? [ Why are both of u laughing?]

Savitri: Maan bete lagta hai aap humari beti ki muhdhikayi ki rasam hone nahi denge [Son I feel u won't allow the muhdhikhayi rasam of Geet to take place]

Maan: Aap muhdhikayi ki baat kar rahi thi? [Okay so u were talking about the muhdhikayi ritual]

Savitri: Toh aapko kya laga? [So what did u feel?]

Maan was embarrassed

Savitri: Sach mein Maan humari Geet ko aap jaisa chahnewala mila ye sochkar hi hume jo khushi milthi hai wo hum bayan nahi kar sakthe bus aap dono humesha yuhi khush rahe humari yahi dua hai [Really Maan I cannot express my happiness in words whenever I see u with Geet; my daughter is indeed lucky to have got someone like u who loves her unconditionally and beyond any limits may ur love continue to blossom with every passing moment]

She blessed both of them

Savitri: Chaliye Geet [Common Geet let's go]

Maan: Main bhi chaltha hoon [I will also accompany u ]

Savitri: Maan bete shadi k baad pehli subah dulhan apne haatho se kuch meetha banathi hai humari jaankari mein rasam aisi hi hai humne aaj tak ye nahi suna k dulha bhi ye rasam nibhatha hai [Maan as far as my knowledge is concerned the bride has to make a sweet dish on the first morning after her wedding I never knew that this ritual has to be followed by the bridegroom as well]

Maan: Wo maa main toh'[ Mom I was']

Savitri: Rehne dijiye Maan aapke chehre par saaf saaf nazar aa raha hai k aap Geet ko ek pal k liye bhi apni aakhon se dur hone nahi de sakthe par kya kare hume ye gustaki karni hi hogi issliye aapko apni biwi se kuch der ki duri bardash karni hogi [Leave it Maan it is quite evident from your face that u can't tolerate Geet's absence even for few seconds but since this is a ritual u have to follow it I am sorry but I have to take ur wife away from u for sometime]

Maan makes a puppy dog like face

The two ladies burst out laughing and both of them start walking towards the kitchen

Maan: Ab Maa ko kaise samjhayu k mujhe toh ek hi sweet dish pasand hai [ how should I tell mom that I like only one sweet dish]

Geet excused herself for a second and comes back towards Maan

She placed her hand on his shoulder and turned him with one quick movement and kissed his lips generously

Before Maan could react she stepped back

Geet: Ab toh muskuradijiye Khuranaji ab toh aapko aapki favourite sweet dish mil gayi na? [Give me a smile Khuranaji as finally u got your favourite sweet dish]

Maan tries to catch Geet but she runs away

Maan: Kab tak bhagogi Geet aaj shaam ko jo taufa main tumhe dene ja raha hoon uss taufe ko dekhkar tum meri baho mein khud ko pigalne se rokh nahi paayogi [How long would u run away from me Geet? After seeing the gift that I am going to give u in the evening u won't be able to stop yourself from melting in my arms]

He smiles at his own thoughts and proceeds to plan his surprise for his ladylove

Here Geet prepares gulabjamun for Maan as she knew it was Maan's favourite

Maan relished the Gulab jamun and continued singing praises about his wife

It was now time for the formal Muhdhikayi rasam

While Geet was getting ready Maan left the house in a pretext of attending an important meeting

Geet was really angry but Savitri tried to calm her down as she very well knew that Maan was busy planning a surprise for Geet

All the ladies started arriving and the muhdhikayi ritual starts

Geet was being praised for her beauty but Geet's heart was somewhere else

These praises were totally immaterialist for her; her heart was waiting for her Maan

His one look was enough to make her the most beautiful girl of this universe

After sometime the ritual was over

All the ladies left and Geet's anger reached its peak

Geet: Dekha ma unhe meri itni bhi parwah nahi hai dekhiye aaj unki Mishti ki muhdhikayi thi aur mujhe ek nazar dekhna toh dur mujhse baat kiye bagair hi meeting attend karne chale gaye [Did u realize this mom he no longer cares for me today was my muhdhikayi and forget about looking at me he didn't even inform me before leaving for the meeting]

Savitri: (in a teasing tone) Sahi keh rahi hai aap shayad unka pyar aapke liye kum ho gaya hai [U r right maybe he does not love u like he used to do before]

Geet: Nahi Ma maine aisa kab kaha? Duniya badal sakthi hai par Geet k liye Maan ka pyar kabhi badal nahi saktha [No mom when did I say this? The world can change but Maan's love for Geet will remain unchanged till eternity]

Savitri: Jab aapko apne unpar itna bharosa hai toh khamkha jhute gusse ka drama humare saamne kyun kar rahi hai isse behtar ye hoga k aap kamre mein jaaiye kya pata shayad koi prem sandesa rakha ho aapke Maan ne aapke liye [When u trust him to such an extent then what is the use of this fake anger? Instead of wasting your time in this drama why don't u go to your room there is a possibility that u might get a message of love from your Maan]

Geet: Iska matlab [R u trying to tell me..]

Savitri: Kamre mein jaaiye Geet aap sab samaj jaayengi [Go to your room Geet u will understand everything]

Geet hugs her mom lovingly and ran towards her room

She found a beautiful painting of hers on the wall with a message

Message:

"Taiyaar rehna Mishty aaj main tumhe kuch khaas logo se milwane jaa raha hoon jinke bagair tumhari muhdhikayi adhuri hai. Aapka gulam aapka neeche intezaar kar raha hai jaldi aayeyega"

[Be ready Mishty as I am going to introduce you to some special people without whom your muhdhikayi is incomplete. Your slave is waiting downstairs come soon]

Geet dressed up in a beautiful pink colored saree and rushed downstairs

Maan was waiting for her in the parking lot

As goes and hugs him immediately and tried to convey the message of heart

Maan: Itna miss kar rahi thi mujhe? [Did u miss me to such an extent?]

Geet: Ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai? [Do u need to ask me this question?]

Maan: Bilkul bhi nahi main jaanta hoon meri Geet k rag rag mein mera hi naam samaya hua hai thik ussi tarah jaise merri palko par tumhare khoobsurat chehre ki nazakat samayi hui hai [Not at all I am aware that my name is engraved in every pore of your skin exactly in the same way like I have captured your beautiful face in my eyelashes]

Geet: Jhuth kehthe hai aap itna hi pyar karte hai toh mujhe pure 3 ghante dur kyun chale gaye the? [U r a liar if u really love me to such an extent then why did u go away from me for 3 hours?]

Maan: Ab meri Mishty ki muhdhikayi hai toh kuch khaas mehmano ko nauyta toh dena hi thana bus unhi ko bulane gaya tha [Today is the muhdhikayi of my Mishty and I had to make it special by inviting some special guests I had gone to receive them]

Geet: Par meri muhdhikayi toh ho gayi hai Maan [But my muhdhikayi is over Maan]

Maan: Abhi tak tumhari muhdhikayi khatm nahi hui hai Geet tumhara deedar karne k liye kuch khaas log kabse intezaar kar rahe hai [Your muhdhikayi is not yet over Geet there are some special people who are waiting to get a glimpse of your face from a long time]

Geet: Kaun hai wo Maan? [Who are they?]

Maan: Batatha hoon chalo mere saath [I will tell u come with me]

Geet: Ji chaliye [Yes let's go]

Maan: Hmm..hmm.. aise nahi [No not like this]

Geet: Main kuch samjhi nahi [I didn't get u]

Maan scooped her in his arms

Maan: Apne iss gulam k rehthe aapko chalne ki kya zarurat hai Mrs. Khurana? [What is the need for u to walk when your slave is at your service?]

Geet kissed his cheek

Geet: Geet k Maanji agar aap yuhi romance karte rahe toh aapke special guests chale jaayenge [Geet's Maan if u continue wasting your time in romance then your guests might just go away]

Maan: Aisa nahi hoga ji aajtoh aapko dekhe bagair koi nahi jaayega [This is not going to happen dear no one will go anywhere without meeting u]

Geet: Toh chaliye hum bhi aapke special guests se milne k liye bekaraar hai [So let's go I am also desperate to meet your special guests]

Maan placed a soft peck on her lips and placed her lovingly in the car

He started driving towards their dream house

Geet knew that something special was going to happen as whenever Maan had taken her to their dream house he had converted every ordinary moment into a unique moment for her

Maan stopped the car and scooped Geet once again in his arms and took her inside

He took her to a special room which was hidden by a curtain

Maan signaled Geet to remove the curtain. Geet followed his instructions

Geet was spellbound by the sight that welcomed her eyes

Maan:

"Ae Kudrat dil tham le

Jannat ki Pari tumhare mulck mein kadam rakh rahi hai

Ho sake toh is lamhe ko jee le

aaj khoobsurathi ki roshni apne jalwe bekher rahi hai

[Hold your heart O nature

The fairy of this paradise is entering your territory

If possible try to live this moment

As the light of beauty is spreading her charm in your territory]

Maan placed her on her feet

Maan: Jau Mishty sab tumhara intezaar kar rahe hai [Go Mishty they are waiting for u]

Geet took her first step

The first special guest was mother earth

Maan had placed beautiful sand made statue of mother earth at the entrance. He had deliberately kept a long tray of wet sand on Geet's path so that Geet had to walk on it to reach the statue

Geet placed her foot on the wet sand; as soon as her mark got fixed on the sand she saw something shining beneath her footprint. She took her second step and the same thing occurred

She looked at Maan as she was still confused

Maan: Dharti Maa k paas jau Geet wo tumhe iss baat k baare mein batayengi [Go to mother nature Geet she will tell u about these changes]

Geet continued walking and reached the statue she found a string attached to the statue which had a button like thing connected with it

Geet pressed the button and a message flashed on the screen

Message from Mother Nature

"Dharthi par apne khoobsurat kadmo ki chap chodkar aaj tumne mithi ko sone ki tarah khara bana diya hai tumhari muhdhikayi mein main tumhe sone sa nikar taufe mein dethi hoon"

[By leaving your footprints on the sand u have beautified this ordinary mud like a pure gold I gift u this gold as a token of your beauty on your muhdhikayi"]

Geet turned around to look at Maan

The entire path on which Geet had walked was made of Gold

Maan: Tumhari muhdhikayi par main inhe kaise nahi bulatha Geet kyunki agar dharti maa hi nahi hothi toh khuda tumhe dharthi par mere liye kaise bhejtha aur phir main tumhe kaha dhundtha? [I had to invite Mother Nature on your muhdhikayi Geet as it is just because of her that God was able to send u on this earth just for me if she wouldn't have been there then how it would have been possible for me to find u?]

Geet was just lost in the beauty of his words

Maan: Geet dusre mehman se nahi milogi? [Geet won't u meet the second guest?]

Geet walked in the direction where Maan had pointed his finger

She goes and sits on a swing which was decorated with beautiful flowers

She found another switch attached to a string

She pressed the button and within a matter of seconds she felt the shower of precious pearls on her body from all the directions

Maan: Ye taufa Falak tumhare liye lekar aaya hai Geet [This is the gift from the sky]

Again a message flashed on the screen

Message from the sky

" Aasman ki taraf apne nazro k motiyon ko modkar tumne mujhe iss berang aasman ko motiyon ki khoobsurathi se sajaya hai aaj tumhari muhdhikayi par main ek moti ko der saare paak motiyon ka taufa de raha hoon"

[By diverting the pearls of your eyes towards the sky u have given me the touch of these precious pearls. Today on the occasion of your muhdhikayi I shower a pearl called Geet with the divine touch of these magical pearls"

Geet was snowed under Maan's love

Maan: Falak ko bulana toh lazmi tha Geet aakirkaar ussi ne apni jannat ki hoor ko khud se juda karke meri zindagi ko tarashne k liye bhej diya [It was important to invite the sky as the sky parted its way from the fairy of his paradise and gifted me my Geet so that u can enter my life and decorate it with the folds of your love]

Geet was getting drowned in the ocean of Maan's love

Maan: Agla mehmaan tumhara intezaar kar raha hai Geet [The next guest is waiting for u Geet]

To be continued '.😳😳😳

PRECAP: The remaining guests and Maan's special gift for Geet

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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omg Piya...wht an amazinggg update 👏👏
i loved evrything about it frm d beginning 2 d end😃
ur surprises r totally worth waiting for😃
Geet gave Maan his favourite sweet dish 😳
n Maan's dialogue r totallly amazing..all credits 2 u 🤗

Edited by luv_GurTi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesooome...
simply beautiful..
loved it to d core..
thanx for d pm...
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thnx for the pm
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amazing update totally luvd it
eagerly w8in 4 da nxt part plzz cont soon x

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Love it graphics


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Wow what an updt.loved it maan ne jis tarah se muhdekhayi karni shuru ki woh magical tha aisa sirf maan hi kar sakta hai geet ke liye. piya luved ur style of writing n congrats 4 geting nominated hope u win

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