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Posted: 13 years ago

wow pihu tere creative dimag ka jawab nahin...*clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap*
sirf tere us anmol gift k liye what a thought sweetu main to abhi bhi tere amazing idea mein khoi hoon...aur mehndi se maang bharna was really touching n beautiful...haye mai to mar gayi is nautankibaaz maan ki adaaon p...
chalo yaar ab us pyari si song sequence ki bhi baat kar lete hain warna main to gift mein hi kho gayi hoon...
beautiful song sweetu n angel gud choice...luved d start where no one noticed but geet felt maan's presence...sooo romantic...
maan's reaction after seeing geet was beautifully described dear...
yash n adi ka reaction hilarious bechare...lolzzz...
par hamara maan kuch bhi chori chhuppe thodi kar sakta h to sahab finally apni geet p khul k pyar barsane k liye burqe se bahar aa hi gaye aur lol geet ko utha k terrace p bhaag gaya...
maan ki to har baat nirali aur hat k h to gift bhi hona tha aur wo tha...marvelous job sweetu...tum is shaadi k har pal ko waqi bahooottt special bana rahi ho...
truly enchanting n mesmerising update sweetu...muaahhh...
luvya loadzzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for not commenting on previous parts
lovely upd
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update.Maan is mesmerized by Geet's beauty.No wonder.Adi is so funny.Last part was so romantic
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved his gift...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
what a gift
nice selection of song
Precap is exciting
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congratz 4 new thread di...luvd sangeet prt..
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Posted: 13 years ago
So beautiful n melodious sangeet di...awsome
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Posted: 13 years ago
😳 hauee kya haldi rasam hui maaneet ki...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omggg...di u r superbb
I luv u di...gajab part..
its simply amazing n beautiful...never ever heard or read such prt
its brilliant...muaaah di 4 writng such beautiful prt..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support friends. Here is the next part I hope each one of u would enjoy it
love-Piya
PART 63

Maan:

"Roshni humse puch rahi hai k kya khushiyoon ka ujaala karne ka mujhe haq hai

Barsaat ki pehli bunde humse puch rahi hai k kya dharti ki pyaas bujanne ka mujhe haq hai

Chand ki chandni humse puch rahi hai k kya andere ka saaya mitane ka mujhe haq hai

Pathchad k baad khilthe hue phool humse puch rahe hai k kya iss duniya ko baharo se sajaane ka mujhe haq hai

Meri zindagi mujhe puch rahi hai k kya apni amanat par haq jaatane ka mujhe haq hai

Haan tumhe haq hai tumhe haq hai"

[Luminosity is asking me do I have the right to spread the light of happiness.

The first shower of rain is asking me do I have the right to quench the thirst of the earth

Moonlight is asking me do I have the right to remove the shadow of darkness

The flowers that are blossoming after the autumn are asking me do I have the right to spread the magic of spring in this world

My life is asking me do I have the right to claim its possession

Yes u have this right u have this right]

Geet: Mujhse vaada kijiye Maan jabtak main na kahu aap mujhe chuoge nahi [Promise me u won't touch me until I permit u to do so]
Maan: Ye gift hai ya phir saza khair jobhi ho main tumse vaada karta hoon tum jaisa kahogi main bilkul waise hi karunga [Is this a gift or a punishment? I promise I will do what u want me to do]
Geet signalled Maan to lie down on the floor Maan followed her instructions
Geet: Maan apni aakhein bannd kijiye aur jab tak main na kahu aap apni aakhein nahi khologe [Close ur eyes and u won't open them until I permit u to do so]
Maan closed his eyes immediately
While reading the next part listen to this music
Geet made herself comfortable on top of Maan. Maan had always made her feel special in different ways today it was her turn to shower him with her love
Her hands were Mehndi clad hence she could not touch his face but that didn't stop her intensions she moved her silky hair gently on his face while doing so she deliberately started blowing air from her mouth on Maan's face
Maan had a smile of satisfaction but Geet wanted to give him more pleasure
She moved her body in such a way that her br****s were placed exactly on top of Maan's face
She started massaging his face with her curves. Maan had not expected this from Geet he let out a groan
Geet moved her curves from his cheek to his forehead she traced the length of his nose with the tip of her curve Maan was going crazy as this sweet torture was too much for him to handle
Geet: Maan open the hook of my blouse
Without opening his eyes Maan followed her instuctions. His heart was beating rapidly as he undid her blouse
Geet moved her curves towards his mouth
Geet: Maan remove my bra with your teeth
Maan drank his saliva after listening this
She adjusted herself in such a way that it was very easy for Maan to slid her bra from her curve
He placed the lacy material in between his teeth and slowly started pushing it in a downward direction while doing so he comes in contact with her ni***e oh they were rock hard
He wanted to taste them at that very instant but Geet had prohibited him from touching her
With great difficulty Maan removed the bra from one of her curves
Geet lifted herself a little so that Maan was not able to touch her second curve she observed Maan's condition he was breathing heavily his body was oozing out tremendous heat as if demanding more
She moved her exposed curve to his lips she started tracing the border of his lips with her ni***e she started with his upper lip and then she took her own sweet time to reach his lower lip
Maan was dying to touch and bite her tip but Geet was in no mood to stop. She traced the partition of his lips with her ni***e. Maan opened his mouth and automatically her tip came in contact with Maan's tongue
Geet: Lick it Maan
Maan started tasting her tip passionately he was extremely wild as from such a long time he was controlling his urges. Geet wanted him to love her with his passion he always thought of her desires but he never paid attention to his needs hence Geet had decided to torture him to such an extent that today he will love her in his own way
Geet moved her second curve near his teeth he removed the material harshly and cupped both her curves in between his hands and started sucking and biting them
Geet started moaning his name. The sweet notings from her mouth were just increasing his desires he opened his eyes and with one swift movement he placed her under him and started biting kissing licking and sucking all the bare part of her body that was accessible to him. Both of them were totally drowned in the passion of their love when they heard a knock on the door which brought both of them back to their senses
Geet immediately adjusted her dress and Maan tried to calm down his breath
Geet might have been bold but now she was feeling extremely shy to face Maan. Maan knew her dilemma he comes and hugs her from behind
Maan: Thanks for the Gift Mishty it was indeed a special one
Geet turned and hugged him
Maan: Par mujhe merawala gift abhi tak nahi mila [But I did not get my personal gift as yet]
Geet encircled her arms around Maan's neck and invited him for the kiss
Savitri: Maan bete darwaza kholiye [Open the door Maan]
Maan: Geet ma bula rahi hai hume chalna chahiye [Geet Mom is calling we need to go]
But before Maan could move Geet smashed her lips on top of his giving rise to a soul searing and passionate kiss at that moment of time nothing mattered to them the only thing that was important was their love for each other
They parted after a while. Geet immediately lowered her gaze
Maan kissed her forehead
Maan: I love u Mishty
Geet: I love u too Maan
Maan finally opened the door
Savitri: Hmm...toh agar tum dono ka romance khatm ho gay ho toh neeche chale ladkiyaan dulhe ki pitayi karne k liye bekaraar hai [If u both r done with your romance then shall we go down the girls are very excited to beat the groom]
Geet: Main bhi dekhthi hoon mere rehthe mere Maan ko kaun takleef paucha saktha hai [Let me also see who can dare to hit Maan in front of me]
Maan and Savitri started smiling.
As soon as they reach the hall Maan remembers that he had brought Yash and Adi with him and it was just because of him that both of them were holding their ears and doing sit ups
Meera: Chalo ladkiyon ab sab milkar Maan jijaji ko saza dethe hai [Come on girls now let us together decide a punishment for Maan]
Geet: Khabardaar agar mere Maan ko kisine haath bhi lagaya toh [Dare if any one tries to touch my Maan]
Meera: Toh thik hai Geet tumhi Maan ko saza de doh [Ok Geet then u decide the punishment for Maan]
Geet: Maan yaha aaye hai toh meri khushi k liye aaye hai aur agar inhe saza milni hi hai toh mujhe jo theek lage woh saza main unhe dungi[ Maan is here because of me and for this act he deserves any kind of punishment then that punishment would be decided by me]
Savitri: Toh saza kya hai Geet? [What is the punishment Geet?]
Geet: Maan aaj mujhe apne haatho se khana khilaenge [Maan would feed me with his hand today]
Savitri: Wah kya pyar bhari saza dhundi hai tumne [Wow what a lovely punishment]
Meera: This is cheating
Geet: Isse cheating nahi isse pyar kehthe hai [This is not regarded as cheating but this is called love]
Meera and all the ladies start smiling
Savitri gets the food and Maan feeds his Mishty lovingly and inbetween he went on teasing her with the romantic moments that they had shared on the terrace causing her to blush occasionally
PRECAP: Bachelor Party ☺️☺️☺️
So guys how was Geet's gift?😳
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Love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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