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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: kvarsha
i read all chappys ...
they r realy awesomee ...

thnx 4 pm😃

thank u dear for taking out your time😃

ur welcome

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magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: yogini64
Wow . . . . It was lovely 🤗
shaks ki b'day pe she's alone . . . . . May be dats why she has gulped tons of icecream 😆
kunwar's surprise . . . . He' such a swtheart 😃
hearttouching gifts 😊
yummy cake 😛
agar shaks ne icecream na khayi hoti . . . Toh pura cake kha jati 😆
awww . . . He's singing too 😍
true . . . His surprise was really touchy . . . . . . Specially when she was missing him... 😊

yeahhh yogini you have commented😆😆😆

hahahhaha may be you are right it happens with me too khe khe

awww... u liked the gifts😃😃

thank you 4 the beautiful review

m touched too🤗

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putrinur

@putrinur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

hey i read all the part😃..awesome.👏.plz pm me update soon

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Himani

@Infinities

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

😳Mannuuu meri twinnie ...Sabse pehle tight wala hug ...I missed you here and your FF like hell 🤗...ArSha kii destiny nahi par hum toh unhe apne dreams mein alive rakh sakte hai ...

...Thank you jaana for updating ...Your FF reflects the true personality of ArSha ...Its a treat to read you update and to cherish every moment ...I wish these incidences would have happened ... 😍

Update 9

You know the thing that I love about your FF is way you frame and relate the occurrences in your FF... Love is something to be felt every second ...and not merely a rocket bomb which takes off once and leaves smoke behind 😆...The way you leave a mark on the reader's mind ...It leaves me in awww ...I love the way you framed the ArSha convo ...That was so cute ... Their chemistry can be noted in each and every moment that they share ...I love the way Amar gets lost in Shakti ...I love the fact he isn't a womanizer 😳...

Awww I love the way Amar expresses his concern for Shaks ...it reflects in each and every gesture of his ...Mujhe ArSha kii kabaddi sequence ke BTS kii yaad aa gayi...when Vicky tries to tease Shakti and Amar backs her ...They are so REAL ...and I am loving the fact that your FF isn't a fairytale ...its something with which I can relate ArSha 😃...

I loved the way Amar involuntarily started praising Shakti ...Hhahahah .. I can actually image that😆😳...He loves to love her every second

Awww their feelings are still fenced by hesitation ...but its kinda important ...to progress slowly in love ... And I loved the fact Shakti agreed ...😳

Btw I love chinese too 🤣

Awww I loved the end ...Amar and Shakti bade the night only to dream on each other ...And Amar carrying in her arms ...*Lost in ArShaland* ...Hayyyee

Edited by kriyansh117 - 13 years ago

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Himani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Update 10

OMG Shakti acknowledged Amar ... I have not seen DID but I know the fact that Amar requested his fans to vote for Shaks and in the finale when she won the title he picked her up with joy and pride...I always felt Amar's request to his fans to vote for Shaks , in some way , cleared the obstacles of votes between her and Dharmesh ...Mannu I can so relate to your FF with DID ...It so connectes everything ...I feel as if I am living their story ...Hayyee this part touched my heart ..Muaahz

Shakti didn't hesitate when Amar pulled her in her arms ...I love the way you have shown the feeling of trust in their relationship ...The ChaMar part always haunted me ...I felt they lack the TRUST factor ...But your FF proves me wrong ...I am glad they share a crystal clear relationship 😳

Awww Shaks sisters snatched the ice-cream from her ...Poor baby ...I feel like pulling her cheeks 😆😳

Awww Amar is such an apt boyfriend ..His small gestures reflects his pure heart and endless love ...And I loved Shakti's reaction ..these 2 are darls 🤗

Btw Belgium hot chocolate sounds yum ...okay I will stop behaving like a bhukkad 🤣

Mannu u never miss out on anything relating ArSha ...damn that mind blowing chemistry in every single convo of theirs ...You have shown it so perfectly ...

Awww Amar wasnt concerned about the ice-cream ...That was her smile that made him restless ...awww

I loved the "Mene jo khilaya tha " line ...Thats so cute ..It reminds me of a friend of mine ...🤣

Shakti won't miss a chance to pull his legs ..lol

Mannu I YTed the song and I just loved it ...it suits the situation so damn well ...😍

Shakti has slowly and gradually started to adore their relationship ..and I am so loving that ...😍

Edited by kriyansh117 - 13 years ago

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Himani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

update 11

Awww Amar knows Shaks so damn well ...He can whats wrong with her just by her actions ...

He knows Shakti hates to show ppl the delicate side of her ...I am loving Amar ...He is so damn understanding and untangled ...That is what makes him different and charming 😍

I can understand Shakti's situation ...even I hate to cry ..lol ...I am glad Amar was with her at this time of need😳

That jerk ..I don't even feel like mentioning his name ...He has always been a barrier between ArSha ...

You know I always felt Amar hated the fact that Shaks was with puneet ...even though they weren't in a relationship ...Mannu you are my vision ...you are actually giving life to what I always felt otr wanted to see ...Muaaah twinnie ...You have an amazing power to hold the writer to the story ..I am loving Dance to the rhythm of life ...😃

I adored the way Amar made her feel better ...yep punit doesn't deserves Shakti ...

I always feel love can't exist if you can respect your soulmate ... And yes Amar respects Shakti in every aspect ...May it be her dreams , her passion , her goals , her emotions and even her vulnerable side ...I , in a way feel bonded to your Story ...I feel a sense of relief when I read your work

Shakti appreciates and loves Amar for what he is ...I loved the way she spoke her heart out ...😍

Edited by kriyansh117 - 13 years ago

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

awesome update...thanks 4 the update...

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Himani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

update 12

Shakti's birthday and she is getting a feeling that something is incomplete ...awww ...

OMG mannu I love that song ...It reminds me of KriYaansh /ArSha ...and it is ironical to the situation ..something like paas hoke bhii paas nahii...Serene calm and perfectly absorbs the atmosphere 😍...

Awwwieee ...Amar is so sweet ...The message on the card so suits ArSha's relationship ...They always behave as if they know eachother since a lifetime ...

And hayyyee Amar cooked for Shakti ...Humara multi talented munda😆

I loved the "Tumse pucha meine " line ...They don't feel awkward ...their relationship is strengthened by friendship ...and thats what makes ArSha special ...They remind me of the friendship I share with my friends ...Twinnie you are awesome in giving a realistic view to the convos😳

Awww Shakti loves ice-creams😆...But yet she agreed to have a little just to make Ammy happy ...How sweet ...we all know how restrictive is Shaks on grounds of weight ...😆

I love this Shakti too 😳

Lolz the tum sacchi mein gaane wale ho part was shooo cute hahaha😆

i love Shakti's dialogue lolz

Shakti's best birthday according to her ...I wish Shakti kii harr bday special ho jaye and amar uske saath humesha rahe 😍

Twiniie hugs for the last part 🤗...Amar said they are special friends ...and they slept in their own heaven ...Twinnie jaldi update karr !!!! I can't wait

Twiinnniee loved each and every update ...

Love you Mannu 🤗

Muaahz

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yusra hashim

@yusra.hashim

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#559

wow... ilove ur ff... loved it...

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar
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First of all sowieee for late comment...

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OMG!!! You pinch me first...How can you make them that delicious so that I can start kicking my feet to get them in real life😍??!! Manu!! Aisa birthday mujhe bhi chahiye...uaan uaann🤪...

She was alone on her birthday..awww...why her family went on vacation..it hurts when your family is not around on your special day...but nevertheless, it made Kunwar that delicious...he came half hour late..OMG!! I thought Shaks would hit him hard for that..but those big surprises...how can any girl resist hugging Kunwar..a pendant...aww...that's so thoughtful gift..really you write it so well⭐️

Shaks ate ICE_CREAM in grief of Kunwar forgetting her b'day..hahahaha..uss bechari ko kya pata tha that he has made a cake for her..now shaks khaooo...hahaha😆

Kunwar said it..OMG!! A special friend...hayeee..I can see the future..😉

It was such a cute and short update..lamba wala update kar..I am dying to read more...

As always, beautifully written..👏

Keep surprising me with this story..😃

Love you🤗