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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh960

Theek update tha... hahahahaha !! Are you kidding me I loved it the da core and u know it !!!
Awww !!! Ice cream and chocos mereko bhi chahiye :( lol !! Shoo shweet amar just fell in love !! Ab dekh I commented !! Yay !! And after 10th lol !!! So now update jaldi :p

hhahahahha alis tu mujhe zarur kisi din heart attack degi 😆😆
icecreams n chocos kahan se lauuu😭
yesss 10th is over n now alis apni shapit hahahahaha pura karegi 🤣🤣
updating in few mins😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
UPDATE 11
Ab chahe ho khushi ya chahe ho gum
I'll be there for you
Yaari teri meri kabhi na hogi kum
I'll be there for you
It was party time. Time to celebrate,time for get together. All the contestant decided to celebrate for their present & for the upcoming future.
Party was in full on mood,when I entered through the door. Shimmering lights, loud music welcomed me in the party. It was good to see people who had been a part of your life. My eyes were searching for someone, may be someone special, which I spotted, running out from the other door.
I followed her and took a halt when I saw her standing, her head in her hands. That's what she always do when she was upset. Shakti was not the one to cry. She was tough, noble and vulnerable. I know she never wants anyone to see her like this. It was difficult for her to escape because of my presence so she just sat still as stone where she was.
She was wiping the tears from her cheeks.
I denoted her "Shakti?"
She looked up to face me and said, "Kunwar, tum yahan kaise?"
"Meine tumhe party se jaate hue dekha so..."
I sat down next to her and put my arm around her shoulder "kya hua, what made u cry?"
"No, I'm not..its...just."
"jhoot bolne ki kohish bhi mat karna because you are not good at that, I know you've been crying. Its okay to cry and you need to know that" though I said her, still her tears were stroking against my heart.
"I hate crying." She snapped at me fiercely.
"I know..aur tum rote hue bilkul bhi achchi ni lagti." I said matter-of-factly. She didn't respond.
"Ab kya hua? You know it very well, I won't go until you tell me the truth..trust me..u'll feel light." I shot at her a pleasant smile.
She looked at me as I felt tears start to form in her eyes again. "He is a jerk"
I nodded understandingly and squeezed her shoulder. She didn't need to say anything else for him to get what had happened.
"Mujhe pata hai Shakti; Puneet is not apt for you; I knew this before but was afraid to tell you. You both have different aspects to look."
"I broke up with him"
I looked confused, "To tum upset kis baat se ho?"
She looked at me in the eye, "Kunwar he played me." her lips trembled, "All along there was another girl. And I never knew. He always used to find some lame reasons to fight with me. How could I be this stupid?" Shakti sobbed as she put her head in her hands again.
"Shakti you are not stupid, stupid to wo hai jisne tumhari importance ni samjhi. And I mean it. You are smart, brave, tough, beautiful inside and out, fiery as your hair, considerate, loving, caring and thoughtful. Tumme wo sab kuch hai jo shayad usne kabhi notice hi ni kia."
She looked up at me.
"Shakti you are not a random girl. You're some kind of special. You are extraordinary in your own way. A way only true friends and people who truly love you notice. You never care what other people think about you but you care what happen to them. You laugh like there is no tomorrow. Shakti, you are an epitome of courage. A quality so many people lack. You have the courage to be yourself and this is what I like in you the most. He doesn't deserve you at all. And I'm sure one day, u'll find someone that will see for who you are and not in which spotlight u enter. I couldn't care less what u've achieved. All I know is that you are some kinda special, Shakti."
Her eyes gleamed as tears running down her cheeks went away. "Thanks Kunwar I needed that." She smiled at me and leaned her head against my shoulder. Not in a romantic kind of way, but of course in a friendly one.
"Anytime, chalo ab bahut ho gaya, we should move inside. You don't have any need to watch him jab tumhare saamne itna handsome guy khada hai." I smirked.
She playfully hit my chest.
"Promise me you'll behave all normal." She watched as she stood up and I looked behind me to say if she was coming or not.
"Kunwar'"
"Hmm??"
"You're the best in this world"
"Kyu..."
She cupped my cheeks "Because you make me laugh so hard, because you're there for me even before I ask...Because u value me even when I'm a loser...Because u understand me, even when I don't understand myself...Because thing were never as much fun as they are now. That's why at the very least; you are the very best." We smiled at each other and with that, we walked back to the party, arms wrapped around each other's shoulders.
Okay guyz i have something to tell you...
Firstly, thanku so much for taking your valuable time and leaving comments. it really makes my day...just because of u guyz i m able to continue this story 🤗 🤗
Secondly, a note for the silent readers...guyz i know u must be busy buh if u can take out some time to read the update, i m sure u can manage some to put down a review
n if u don't want PMs don't hesitatae to tell...thank u😊
Sorry to all the Puneet lovers if i've hurt ur feelings...but its just that i had to do😊
Promo: Love is taking a flight😃
Luv Mania😊
Edited by magical_mania - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Mania!
I started reading your FF now from chapter 1... and its just too good!
I really liked it!
you write so brilliantly! 👍🏼

Please PM me!
and update soon! (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update
luvd it
rocking👏
luvd da way hw kunwar madde shakti smile 😊
no wonder he's da best
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing waiting 4 the nxt one
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fab update...!!!
Loved it...
Loved d way amar consoled shakti...super awesome...:)
n all d lines which he said...so true...direct from his heart...which touched my heart too...:D
n punit's a jerk in dis...although i like him...but here he's a creep...how can he betray shaks...achaa hua shaks broke up with him...
Waiting for next part...:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...loved it very much
loved the way kunwar cansoles shakti
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update . . . Mania 👏
all the things he said to her were just beautiful 😃
he said that to take her out from her gloomy mood . . . . . But it was all truth 😊
& even she must be knowing dat he mean it 🤗
he see her as a justification of her name itself in all the aspects... 👍🏼
& she is overwhelmed wid his care & friendly love . . . 😛
& his respect is definitely increased in her eyes as she call him best . . . . .
Who stands by her side,,, understands her troubles before she tell,,, motivates her 😊
I did'nt watched DID2 . . . . & abt shakti-puneet,,, I came to knw 4m D3 forum only . . . .
is it true that they were dating??
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww sweet update
Loved the way they both described each other
Thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
mera first comment nahi tha 😭 😭 uaan uaan !! mera first hona chahiye tha !!
coming back to the update !! that jerk !! ugh !! i never liked him ! LOSER kahi ka !! acha hua !!
tune uss ki wajah se shaks ko rulaya ! buri !! huh !!
ans Kunwar is shoo shweet in ur FF !! hahaahaha !! Real Kunwar ka tou maloom nahi but he is just so damn shweet !! lolziez !!
and precap !! just one word can't wait ! that's two actually 🤣
ab update jaldi !! hehehe !!

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