ArSha FF- daNce 2 thE rhYthM oF lYf #1

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#381

it was so lovely n cute
really bliss full one
update soon

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payal sood

@love_arsha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#382

*RES*

IT SO AMAZING UPDATE...

LOVED IT SO SO MCH...:)

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singhkhusboo

@singhkhusboo

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#383

i m soo happy that u are back... loved the update

its one of the best arsha ff.update soon and thanx for the pm😊

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#384

This is mind blowing
loved it
i was having a 32 inch smile on my face while reading this
eagerly waiting fort he next part and thanks for the pm

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achuAR

@achuAR

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#385

Amazing mania...👏

so good to see u after a looong time 😃

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#386

aw such an cute n romantic update!!liked it!!

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Aditi

@NxtRockstar..

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#387

Res*

will unres raat ko...xciteddd

Unres*

Now I know why this FF is my favorite because it's effortless to read it...It doesn't ache my mind to get the meanings and doesn't stop my fluent eyes to find the logic behind the words.

THANK YOU MANU FOR CONTINUING THIS STORY!!🤗

No doubt you are my star writer.⭐️

Starting from those beautiful song lyrics which were delighting my mind prior for a beautiful update, you are amazing girl.

GOD BLESS US!! OMG!! This is most cutest statement ever by a boy. I love Amar. The way he is in your story, I love him more.

Their fluent talks and effortless time together, it's the essence of your story. I love the way they were arguing over GOD BLESS thing...so cute.

I loved it when she walked away and then stopped. I love their walk and the way you describe Shakti from Amar POV. Her shadow...Manu!! I am in love with that now..hehe

The way Amar was trying to stop her by saying anything...the way she was repelling but still staying to listen...awesomely put!!

And finally EYES...he said it..he almost said poem without rhymes about her eyes and she blushed...awww..

And when I thought the night is over..you left me surprised with that dinner date...Shaks loves Chinese...yum yum!!

And in last...she hurt her ankle..I am worried that how she will dance now...but I love the way he like a gentleman asked her before lifting her in arms...I can feel the tickle..hehehehe😉😆

Can't thank you enough for this update..that's why you should write it always.. because you can engage a poor reader like me for every bit of your story...

Love ya Manu!!🤗

Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 13 years ago