MG-New FF-Spread your wings-Part 10-Pg 55-8 May - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

307

Views

31.2k

Users

68

Likes

935

Frequent Posters

punam2712 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#41
GREAT START
CONGRATS ON THE NEW FF

WHEN WILL THEY MEET
Little_Mermaid. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#42
new year scraps, comments, cards, images for Orkut, Myspace, Facebook, friendster
sona-rai thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#43
awesome start yar loved this new maan a lot continue soon
Sri_Radha thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Congratulation for new ff👏
Interesting ..
Part 1 amazing👏
Continue soon😊
-Crayon- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: neha5058

spread your wings...

wow..!! i found it interesting...really different...
👏

MSK is not the MSK😲...fun loving and ambititious boy.😃...his bike lol...doctor for his bike...😆...lovely...
wow both are trainee...making their future...
and geet is my darling...always fun loving girl...😊...hmm rajveer is her boss and jiju too..i think asmi is rajveer's daughter...may be...and
geet's sis dead kya?😕

sorry like button was not working...

seems very different...not typical maaneet's story types...love it...😛...and thanks for pm and continue soon...


Thanks a lot dear 😃
and yeah MSK is not "DA MSK"😆
-Crayon- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Namratha, Happy & Prosperous New Year to you and your family...

Happy New Year 🤗
-Crayon- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#47
First of all
I wish you all a very Happy New Year🤗🤗


-Crayon- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#48

PART 2

Hey friend ..there's a small change Maan Geet are not Trainees...they are entry level staff writers

Sorry for the change ...Hope you enjoy this part

All the best Maan

Thanks yaar Adi ,bye ...aur haan ...Yezdi

Haan Maan tu chinta mat kar...main karwake use office ke bahar hi le aaunga and then I'll call you.

Thanks a lot yaar bye

Maan went in and met Shaina for some briefing.

Meanwhile Geet was busy in talking to a Senior staff writer about her work

Maan came from Shaina's cabin and went to his desk to read a report given by her.

Maan and Geet didn't meet each other they were busy in focussing on the details of their job.

It was lunch time and Adi called Maan

Hello Maan ,how's your work going on??

Good buddy

And guess what ...??

Maan did guess and almost shouted with excitement ,tune theek karwa diya

Haan dude!! Come out and see

Maan rushed out ,to find his yezdi with Adi ,and Adi stood there smiling

Adi...mere yaar, he hugged him...thanks a ton buddy!!!

It's ok yaar...It wasn't a big problem ,it was a minute problem he repaired it in 10 mins ,so relax now!!

Thank God!!! He sighed!

Okk okk Maan now go in and carry on with your work.

Ok ..he smiled and again thanked him.

Accha theek hai bas bas ..Bye!!

Bye.

Maan was more than happy as his bike was now fine ,he read everything with full concentration while noting down some points.

He soon completed his work .

On the other hand Geet too completed all her work and left from the office.

She started her scooty and she decided to give lift to one of her newly-formed friend.

And just when she sat ,the wind blew and the papers that were in Geet's friends hand scaterred all over.

Geet...saare papers gir gaye!!

Oh NO!!!

Gayatri let's collect them as fast as possible so that they don't get misplaced .

Geet's scooty was between two big cars.

Maan came towards his bike .. his bike was placed in such a place where taking it out was very hard ,he couldn't take it out until the scooty infront of him moved and just then he saw the scoot moving.

Ohh thank God...that girl is moving her scooty.

Geet moved forward and even Maan moved a bit forward ...she moved foward and so did Maan...but suddenly Geet moved back with her scooty after ringing the horn to pick up a paper but Maan who was behind her couldn't balance it as she suddenly moved back and his bike ended up crashing he scooty!!!

HELL!!! Maan screamed!!

OH Gosh!! Geet screamed!!!

They both got down from their respective vehicles!!!

What the hell!!!

Maan hurriedly got down and checked his bike ,his head light was broken

And even Geet checked the clashed portion of her bike ...It wasn't that damaged...they were a few scars.

What have you done??Maan was shocked to see his Yeadi in such a position

Meee??? Excuse me Mr...I rang the horn before moving back

What?? rang the horn ,do you really expect me to stop?? Can you see here ...I'm between two huge cars..and how do you expect me to just move back just like that suddenly!!!

So you should have waited until the whole path got cleared!!!

Cleared!! Excuseme!!

Mujhe kasie pata hoga ki aap peeche aane wali hai!!!

Look Mr aapko itni jaldi kya thi??

Jaldi??I mean It's natural agar aap yaha se chali gayi..toh main nikal hi jaunga na!!! I'll definitely not wait for few more hours until the whole place gets vacant

Huh , maine aapko ghanto wait karne ke liye nahi kaha ,a matter of few minutes what's the hurry and that too when there are two huge cars on both the sides!!!

The argument was catching more heat

Geet...yeh..he is our collegue!!!

What??

Maan and Geet said in unison.

So please stop fighting..it'll not look good if any of the employees saw you both fighting , people might be coming here anytime ,sab yahi pe jo park karte hai!!

But ...

Maan please

Let him complete gayatri

But what?? Haan

Geet please!!!

After that they both stopped their fight for the sake of their reputation .

They both left the place angrily after giving each other some angry glares!!

Maan directly went to a mechanic.

The mechanic told him to wait for some time ,Maan sat there while waiting for his turn ,and the patient before him no no the bike before him scared him...it was badly destroyed and all the parts were crashed and the mechanic said that there's a very little hope , tears almost rolled out from the eyes of the bike's owner.

Maan felt bad for him ,he thought of consoling him but soon the mechanic called him ,Maan went near him ,his heart was beating fast...he knew that fixing the parts of Yezdi is not so east as the parts are not easily available.

Maan took the bike to him ,the mechanic checked it for a while...

Kitna hoga bhaiya Maan asked slowly

7000

WHAT???!!! Bhaiya yeh aap kya keh rahe ho???

Hum theek hi keh rahe hai sahib..dekhiye ye bhi damage ho gaya hai aur yeh part bahut mushkil se milta hai...it's light but ver costly!!!

Bhaiya!!! Thoda to rehem karo mere pe ,abhi abhi naukri lagi hai

Saahab aap bhi na..hum kya kar sakte hai ...aap to jante hi hai ki iske parts kitne mushkil se milte hai!!!

Bhaiya dekhlo na...thoda sa!!

5500 kar lo

Aap bhi na saahab

Chalo 6500 kar lo isse kum..me kaam ban hi nahi sakta

Maan frowned but had no option but to agree ,because he wasnted his bike back in it's normal position.

Maan was very disappointed.

That night he sat with Adi ,sharing all the incidents .

Adi had no words to speak ,he sat there silently

Maan yaar...mai kya bolun!!

YAar...woh ladki na!!! Aargh mujhe bahut gussa aa raha hai uspe..

Areh bhai uski bhi kya galti

Adi...tu nahi jaanta ,kya yaar aj uski wajah se 7000 ka loss ho gaya!!!

Oh God!!!

Maan you should be happy that the bad things went away with a small loss of 7000 otherwise

Hey philosophy baba...please yaar ,don't start it again!!!

Relax yaar Maan...it' just 6500

But I lost them for no reason yaar!!!

Aargh that girl.

What was that yaar.

Main toh first day acche dost expect kar raha tha and milli kaunn! Huh!!

Maan...relax relax yaar...let's on the radio

A song was playing on the radio.

Pehli nazar mein kaisa jadoo kar diya...

Oh God...just shut the radio up..JUST SHUT IT UP!!

Pehli nazar mein,...Maan imitated!!

Pehile nazar mein meri zindagi ki villain ban gayi!!! Huh!!

Milte hi 7000 loss!!!

Aur woh mechanic...he had good plans of looting me...poor me!!! mana ki hum mechanic nahi hai but still ...aaj kal na log apne knowledge ka bhi faayda uthaane lage hai...I'll defo write an article about this!! bas ek mauka mil jaaye!!!

mil jaayega mere bhai now stop over reacting yaa for Yezdi's saker...relax !!

Okk ..stop thinking about it ,jo ho gaya so ho gaya!!

Hai na ...so relax!!

Kuch acchi baat karte hai!!

Waise bhi tomorrow my boss is coming back from London...we have a meeting tomorrow ,I'm scared yaar

Maan started laughing?? Your boss wahi na jinke saamne you stammer

Maan said while giggling!!

Haan wahi!!

God Adi...you must be given an award for working under him ,he is such a strange insaan ,he never even laughs na..I mean that's crazy !!! how can anyone not laugh ...crazy dude!!

Uski entry toh guiness book of world recored me honi chahiye!!!

Maan but he is a good person

--Geet's house---

Mama Asmi chali gayi kya ,Geet asked while entering her house

Haan Geet ...Rajveer just took her .

And why are you so late??


Aargh mama don't ask ...I went to the mechanic scooty check karwaane.

Scooty mechanic???

Hey bhagwan but that's a new scooty..what happened to it???

Please mama don't ask I really don't want to rewind those incidents.

Mama me going to jiju's house ,I wanna meet Asmi.

Theek hai sambhal ke jaana

Mama ,jiju ka ghar paas me hi hain

Haan haan but still beta

Okk mama bye

But eat something and then go

I'll eat jiju's place mama.

---Rajveer's house---

Geet knocked the door.

Rajveer opened it.

Hello jiju

Hello Geet ,welcome...

(to be continued)

*******

Precap : Maan Geet to work together for an article😲

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
.Sam. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Loved it...👏
Though it was bit weird experiencing maan in such a cool atitude...😛...but it always seems unpredictable...👍🏼
looking forward for the next part...😍
seemamary thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Amaizing loved it, continue soon.

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno · 3 months ago

new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington · 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish · 6 years ago

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary · 11 months ago

Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter)

Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".