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Posted: 13 years ago
Dear Mufffin...
below was my reply to ur reply to my post :)

Originally posted by: monsi08



What happened Muffin 😕 Actually you are writing such serious stuff.. i am sure that's taxing... but you are writing it so well.. it's like it's all happening in front of my eyes..
I shud say all this in your post though... but couldnt stop myself..

If my post brot smile on ur face... my job's done 🤗



And will repeat again... i have no words to praise your writing yaar... every update is just mindblowing... it is so intense... every emotion is crystal clear ... !!!!

Thanks so much for such treat ...
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Cheers,
Monsi


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Posted: 13 years ago
really an emotional update dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am a newbie to IF and this is my first post here. I have hardly been on this forum for a couple of weeks and was trying to catch up on the various ipkknd fan fictions. Some are good, some are not so, and then I stumbled upon this exemplary piece of work. You are very talented writer. I have been reviewing amateur writer's clubs for a long time now, and I must say you are one of the most gifted writers I have had the pleasure of reading. The plot, pace, poignancy, background, characterization, everything flows together beautifully. I commend you on a job well done and thank you for sharing it with us. You have also made me a happy woman with your super quick updates. The last few days have been spent eagerly looking for your updates and relishing in the pleasure brought on by your written word.

I hope you continue to entertain us :)

Cheers!
Satya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awwwhhh the ending bit was soo emotional, and love Arnav for taking care of Khushi like that. Seems like Vidhya and Dadiji noticed as well. Glad Akash is alright, and lets hope things calm down...what happened was terrible and horrific, and I feel for all who suffered. Youre a great writer!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing good to know tht akaash is well and khusi and arnav are safe for the time being... i hope things do not worsen anymore for them !!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
another hear wrenching update..i still have tears trickling down my cheeks..i started crying at the point of burial..i sobbed through the entire update until i had to wipe my eyes several times to clear them enough to read..
the thing u say abt being disjointed, felt perfectly flowing for the moment..cz it was such a moment..where broken destroyed remnants lay about..

i loved how Arnav shielded her..and the way he made that promise to Nalia about how her sacrifice will not be in vain..and finally the gentle care he took of a broken Khushi..and how his own mom could see it in his every caring gesture...

amazing narration..kudos to u for a splendid piece of writing..
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Posted: 13 years ago
He grabbed a fist full of soil, the soil that had demanded the price of thousands as payment for breaking it in two and made a promise to Naila that he wouldn't let her sacrifice go in vain...

wow..wht lines..like button aint working...but it would be enough either..you leave me choked muffin!

i really dont know what else to say...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update; didn't see anything wrong with it :) I'm all about damage control so I love reading anything to do with it lol.

I really liked how Arnav asked Khushi to be strong for him <3 I'm so relieved that Akash is alright, phew! And thank God that the rest of the Raizadas are ok, too.

The burial scene was very touching. I'm glad Arnav went there and made those promises. At least Khushi still has Noor </3

Take your time with the other updates! You've been chugging them out like a factory belt 😆 You deserve a break :)

P.S. I also think you should defo think about publishing this!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Munchy...heart wrenching.so beautifully crafted.no melodrama.So real and touching.love ya.


Ash.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi muffin. Really loved this part. Glad that akash is alright and finally khushi broke down. Waiting for the next update.

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