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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

nice start..thnx for the pm

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Suman

@Suman786

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Hiya, this is really good, please add me to you PM list if you have one

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AquaBluez17

@AquaBluez17

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Very nice start to a brilliant FF <-- I am psychic you see. I can see the future and see this being a big hit 😃

I loved the details of all of the characters and how you involved Payash into the plot! Very well done!!

Awesome job Munchy! It was a dhamakedaar start!! Can't wait for more😉

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

I love how your ffs are always so different from what is normally written, but are put together magnificently. This is a really unique yet interesting concept and i really liked how you developed each character and their stories. We got to learn so much about all of the different people in one update, and it sets the tone for the rest of the updates. Arnav will be the harsh one, anjali the sweet one, payal the lovesick and shy one, while khushi is khushi. Btw, i liked how lhushis initials stayed the same and how this time her family is the influential one. Also, i found it interesting how in the show, arhi first met when he caught her, and they meet in the ff when he catches her. Cant wait to read how the story progresses!

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kkg-asr

@kkg-asr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

This looks interesting... Can't wait for more...😊 Thanks for PM...👏

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soni_md

@soni_md

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Lovely Munchy ... you get me hooked with one paragraph, let alone having to read the whole update 😆 Update soon, I love the concept, and you've got one reader right behind you all the way ... bring on the history!