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Prologue...

She was sitting on a bench in a park. It was relaxing for her. After almost 5 years she was getting such relaxation but somewhere down, she was hurt, deeply hurt. She was closing her eyes and her head was resting on the rim of the bench.

Why was life so hard on her? WHY, WHY, why she was left behind. She had a peaceful life. She had Wonderful n loving family, Caring n Sincere Friends. She inhales a long breath n sight a sad sigh. She opened her eyes and GOSH! What beautiful Hazel eyes! A lone drop of tear drops from her eyes.

Two cute children rush to her. 1 gal n 1 boy, she gave a fake smile to them. Boy comes in her lap.

Boy- G-T why are u crying?

Gal- G-T I know u were missing us Na?

Awe!! How can she be sad in front of her life? Boy n Gal kisses her cheek from both sides.

This was it! The tough businesswoman is melting and turning into a 24 year old gal. Yeah she is only 24 years old, but she is an achiever. She is a business tycoon.

Boy- G-T u love Jeh na?

She- of course I love Jeh, I love u my prince

Gal- G-T this means u don't love Jia?

Awe... she asked it soo cutely. Of course she loves them. She loves them more than anything. She wishes that they live a happy a prosperous life unlike her' she wishes that they never make a mistake a silly mistake like her.

She- Awe my Princess of course I Love u...

Gal munching her chocolate- leally?

She- really

Jeh- Jeh loves u G-T,

Jia- Jia loves u the most G-T.

Jeh- can we go home please'

Jia- yeah G-T can we go home'

She- nodded

Her smile vanishes after listening home. But how can she refuse them?

They reached home.

The most magnificent mansion ever' yes they are richest in India' THE HANDAS' that was craved on the entrance of the Mansion.

A girl (26 years old) comes down from the stairs wearing an elegant blue sari.

Jeh n Jia rushes to her.

Jeh- mama!! it was fun'

Jia- yeah G-T is very nice.

That gal smiles n comes to G-T.

Gal- thanks Geet that u gave your precious time to them. I am very grateful.

Geet closed her eyes in pain' she never has time for them n her family'

Geet- what are you talking Pari? They are my life...

Pari smiled, she knows that she loves Jeh n Jia more than anything'

A boy in late 20's maybe 28 or 29 enters the mansion; he was handsome and dashing Rajveer Singh Handa that is his name. Husband of Pari n father of Jeh n Jia and a big brother of Geet, a father figure of her.

Raj- Sweetheart cant you forgive me.

Geet- bhaiya aisa mat kehye, u did nothing ' It was my fault'

Jeh-dad what is fault??

Jia- Jeh you stupid, Jia knows what is fault?? Fault is fault right??

Geet smiles!!! Wow what a beautiful smile' a million dollar smile'

Pari n Raj saw Geet smiling first time in these painful 5 years!!!

Pari n Raj smiles whole heartily'

It was a story of a young girl who fell in love with the hottest dude of collage without knowing his intentions' that there was true love between them' it was total bliss' then what happened??? It turn soo vulnerable' will they meet again' will she forgive him'???



Hey Guys.,, dis is Aanya .. Aanya Khan..

dis is my first ff..

i know its crap... plzz give me suggestions do leave ur comments... itz a request...😭


Index...

for character sketch scroll down...

Part 1... page 3

Part 2... page 5

Part 3...

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kkiddoo thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey awesome start ...
interesting story ...
do add me in u r pm list ...
continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing!
Geet is an acheiver ,intresting
Jeh and Jeiya are so cute
Cont soon :)
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beautiful man...awesome start...lemme guess hot dude...maan???...

awww jeh n jia r so cute ...update soon n pm me------> =D
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A Hope...
Character sketch...


Geet Handa...

Before 5 years.

She was beautiful yet bubbly... an achiever... Best student... She was arrogant yet sweet... Only 4 friends were her life... Yash, her friend cum brother... Meera... Her companion in every mischief...partner in crime… Nisha... Her best friend n her guider in fashion sense … Ranbir... a sweetest friend n a protective friend... But she never knew life changes soo fast…


After 5 years

She is a business tycoon… she is soo smart... She never smiles...But her life revolves around Jeh n Jia... She only smiles in front of them or on their cute talks or their mischief... Her heart is full of sorrows... She is regretting her past … But there is a hope….



Maan Singh Khurana...

Before 5 years…

He was a heart rob... a Greek God... a basket ball champ… his only friend was Annu... He only knew 1 adjective on gals SEXY... N knew only one phrase JUST USE AND THROW….

After 5 years…

He is a business man... an arrogant business man... A ruthless person... who want a chance too seek someone's forgiveness... But he has fears in his heart. His heart is full of Remorse... Remorse... But there is still a hope... he never smiles… he has no one now with whom he can share his heart… he lives in Khurana Mansion… he is Khurana heir… he is a diamond in his Dadima 's eye



Rajveer S. Handa...

Raj... Is his nick name...Elder brother of Geet, her father figure... a good person...He thinks dat he is responsible for her past... has a beautiful wife... Pari...


Pari Handa..

Pari, wife of Raj... bhabhi of Geet... a beautiful yet elegant lady… a well wisher of Geet... Really want her to live her life...


Jeh Handa...

Soul of the family… a wonderful boy... really loves her G-T.. son of Raj N Pari..


Jia Handa...

Soul of family… cute little gal... really Luvs her G-T.. sister of Jeh...


Meera Singhania...

A darling friend of she Geet... was in collage as Geet... her childhood friend... but after the misfortune lost ad contact of her... she is a bubbly gal while she is in relationship with Yash.


Yash Malhotara...

A studious boy... yet serious... he is an orphan… but he takes Geet as her own sister... Luvs Meera n really protective towards Geet… her childhood friend


Nisha Verma..

often called Nish...A bubbly gal yet she is fashionable... her fanda is to look beautiful. Take Geet as her Best friend... a charmer... attract all boys except Ranbir… she is a guider of Geet towards fashion sense…


Ranbir Sinkad...

A flirt... a charmer... a good yet bad boy... a best n childhood friend of Geet yet very protective towards her... Attracts gals towards him .. Yet he is still single..


Annurag Ganguly...

A best friend of Maan n only well wisher of her… A good boy unlike Maan... Really respect Gals..












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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey
interesting intro.
Cont soon.
Add me in 4 pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start

waiting for an update

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting...
thanx for the pm...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nyc concept do continue soon...n thanxx for the pm...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice character sketch
continue soon...
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