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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Gud decision nad... i luv it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
thanks di for the wonderful update but plzzz write more in english plzzz
that was a fantastic encounter it was gr8 to see khushi in bridal dress ripping and supported by arnav's arms continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63


Arnav: just kneel down and gave her his hand

Khushi: look at him " i am fine" she try to get up

Arnav: look at her for head it has a bump as her head bang with the step that was between the room an living room. he just placed his hand on her fore head and press it hard with out look at her or caring for her reaction.

Buaji: kya huwa

Arnav: she can never see, give me some thing .

khushi : look at him she just sat

Buaji: wait i will bring

Arnav: just blow his sweater sleeve and kept it on the spot. he felt her lips touch his neck, he look at her.both were lost in each other eyes when buaji came back

Buaji: yeh lo beta she gave him a handkerchief

Arnav: just picked her up with out listen her . walk to the bed room

buaji: sanka devi cannot you see.why you have zip your lips?

Khushi just look at him his warm hand was on her bare waist and his breath was touching her neckline , she was feeling his gaze on her face .

Arnav: just placed her on the bed .slowly remove her hand off her "choro " his lips touch her fore head ,or he intentional kissed her blue bruise

Khushi: just quickly removed her arm which was warp around his neck and pull her self away she look at her duppata which was laying on the corner she stretch her hand to pull he just read her eyes pick it up and throw at her as he saw buaji and Garima coming , it landed on her head and covered her face

Buaji"NK "

Arnav: look at her

Khushi: just quickly removed it and fixed it .

Buaji: was in shocked "waise pari lag rahi ha Garima ,yeh bhi sub ko beshoon kar dagai"

Garima:Nazar na laga she just placed her kajal mark behind her ear. and kissed her forehead

Arnav: just look at her she was dress in his Favorited color."acha mein chalta hoon"

Payal: wait your tea

Arnav: oh i was just kidding

Payal: i thought she will ask you , but is ka to pata nahi ha , ab iss tarah dulhan ki tarah kya sharmari ho make tea ( why you are blushing like a bride)

Khushi: ha jiji hum banata ha she just hold her lenhga and got up walk to the table where she placed the tray

Arnav: just look at her

Payal: drag a chair for him

Arnav: oh i was fine

Khushi:jiji aap na sugar kis mein nahi dali

Payal:oh because of you i forgot kon sa cup tha.

Khushi:wait i will make other.

Arnav: leave it i will take with sugar may be then i can arrange a better party

Khushi: just look at him with teary eyes .

Buaji:"beta why you will take with it sanka devi will make other" she walk out as Garima called her.

Arnav: check kar lo .as he saw her walking out of the room

Khushi: look at him

Arnav: check .

Khushi: just took a sip from cup ,she felt it was with out sugar she just passed it to him.

Arnav: hold it

Buaji: sanka devi hum na tailor se bol diya ha kal iss ko tumara size ka kar da , betwa achi lag rahi ha na ( sanka devi ,i have asked tailor to fix it for you)

Arnav: sambhal ka rakna paraga muhje iss ko (then i have to protect her ) he said to him self

Buaji: kya nahi lag rahi

Arnav: nahi nahi she is looking perfect he just kept the empty cup on table "i better leave now"

buaji:yeh sakan devi tum ko har waqt tang karti ha .

Arnav: smiled"iss ka paas koi aur kaam nahi ha"

Khushi: what i did ?

Payal: you drop mobile in car

Khushi: look at him .

Buaji: go leave him out .

Khushi : just walk to the door she was about to step out he turn back she just bump in to him

Arnav: "go in no need to come out like this" his hand was on her waist as he again catch her for losing balance.

Khushi: look at him

Arnav: you are looking horrible everyone will faint .just touch at the kajal dot with his index finger behind her ear . step out and close the door.

Khushi: just came back to life when payal poke her

Payal"khushi why you are looking at the close door?"

Khushi:" jiji am i looking horrible "

Payal: kis na bola

Khushi:walk to the room "buaji i will not wear this ?"

buaji"why?"

Khushi: arnav ji na bola hum acha nahi lag raha ( arnav ji was saying i was not looking nice)

Buaji" per un ki nazar tou kuch aur bol rahi thi "( but his eyes was saying some thing else)

Khushi: kya buaji

Payal: "tum ko tang kar raha hoga khushi"( must be teasing you)

Khushi:hum un se pocha ga ( i will ask him)

Buaji: go and change she walk out of the room.

Khushi: just look at her self she try to link his sentence but could not . she look at her fore head ."did he" placed her hand

Payal: you are still standing like this ..

Khushi: ja rah ha


on other end

Arnav: with her thoughts reached home his mood was fine and their was a smiled at her face

NK "Di lagta ha NAANAV apni taraiq se mil kar aai ha " ( di it look like naavna have a meeting with his date)

Arnav: just didnot listen or he was lost

Anjali look at shyam and with ask him to take his class

Shyam:"saala sb what is the reason behind your this smile?"

Arnav: what he just look at them

NK:Naanav you went on a date right he just came close to him and look at his him all around .

Arnav: what the

NK: di di come here see he is smelling like jasmine and see here is a hair ...

Arnav: just look at him .

NK see it Di it is long it cannot be Naanav .

Anjali: kon ha chota .

Arnav: koi nahi he just took the hair from his hand " it is thread " he just twisted it on his finger.

Anajli:wait let me see

Arnav: just walk away...

NK: naanav

Arnav: what now ?

NK: lips mark at your neck

Arnav: just recollected her lisp touch him "stop it ok " he just wipe his neck .

Anjali yeh kya chota you are hiding the evidence.

Arnav: come no Di

Anjali: kis ka ha

Arnav: khushi ka khush

Shaym freeze

NK: khushi ji our khushi ji.

Arnav: what do you mean by our.?

Anjali: khushi ji

Arnav: stop it now

Anjali:asked NK to stop"tea"

Arnav : no i had at Khushi place .

Anjali: acha

Arnav: Di kya nazar lagti ha while going up

Anjali kya

Arnav: evil-eye

Anjali: ha why you are asking?

Arnav: bujai was saying

Anjali: kya

Arnav: khushi fall down ,she got a big bruise on her fore head .,like ma use to place warm cloth i did but she still got it

Anjali : oh i will call and ask her and till few tips so the bruise go away.

Arnav: walked up left Shyam and NK in shocked.

Anjali: look at them " you both are crazy and made me too , i just became party with you guys and started pulling his leg , didnot you see how worried he was, who else will be with him other than Khushi ji " she just picked phone and started calling khushi .

Anjali: khushi ji how are you?

Khushi: bit shocked "i am fine"

Anjali" chota was tell you fall down aap ko naazar lagai

Khushi: just dont have answer to it .

Anjali: chota was saying you got a bruise at your forehead .

Khushi"ji"

Anjali: i will make a haldi paste for you when you will come tomorrow i will apply , it will go ok don't take tension you will look perfect on the wedding day"

Khushi: thek ha Anjali ji

Anjali: hum chota ko dekta ha he was so much worried for you .

Khushi: acha ..

Anjali: cut the call.

Khushi: shocked itni is choot thi aur Arnav ji na iss ko itni bari bana di. look her self in mirror."i should call him and say i am fine"


Arnav: just look at his hand her hair ,and he look at his finger tip he saw her lipstick mark. his cell rang

"khushi, ab kya huwa ha " he picked "kya "

Khushi: i called you to tell hum thek ha

Arnav:acha muhje ko pata ha

Khushi: then why you said to DI that i got hurt

Arnav: because you left no choice for me ,

Khushi: hum na kya kiya

Arnav: next time when you kiss me dont leave your lipstick marks on me or dont use lipstick .

Khushi: hum na kab

Arnav: my neck still have it aao dekha na , i know you will not believe me , waise you can ask Di and NK

Khushi: oh she cut the call

Arnav: had a laughter ,

Anjali: just heard his reply "chotey aur khushi " her eyes twinkle with joy she just straight walk to the worship place to pray


to be cont


to be cont sorry for mistakes will edit later ... as it is time of IPKKND , comment comment and comment if you want more and please bit big comments what are you liking as i feel like i am writing for myself

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
OMG! What a beautiful update

omg i am getting so excited about what's going to happen next hehehe

It's too goood! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
di it was awesome and superb
i loved the way arnav wiped off the evidence from his neck and hair wow
the update was so cute and i loved it i am fully happy for the update kya teasing hai ??? from anjali and NK i loved anjali for eaves dropping and gone to pray for ARHI couple
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
I really like this part, it would be nice if you included pictures aswell to get an idea of what the lengha looked like on khushi.
I wanna know what happens next! Cant wait, hope khushi and arnav become a couple soon! :D
And im glad that shyam and nk know about khushi and arnav!
Edited by sweetfairy16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
GREAT UPDATE!
CV's shud take idea's from ur OS.😊
Thnx for the pm...update soon
Edited by zaniax - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
really good !!!!!! love ARHI !!!!!! thnx for the pm !!!!! update soon !!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Again a Beautiful update yaar👏
thanks a lot for the pm 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
beautiful update naddiya liked it a lot

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