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Loved da update.so sweet.truely amazing..so new year in malaysia,lovd dat..lovd dat flower arnie gave khu$hi..nd all dat hand holding

Beautiful story!!

they won a ticket!! i really hope they go together !! and have some romantic moments there!! aww relly awesome update!! CANT WAIT FOR NEXT

wow its simply AWESOME w8in eagerly 4 ur next update...

i luv the way arnav cares for khushi... n hw u portrayed khushi's innocence... wow nw she'll realise maybe she also luvs him... i want to no hw she's going to behave wenever he's around nw that la tld hr abt asr's feelings!!!

woww... khushi comes to know asr loves her !! loved it !!

Originally posted by: ArhiDeewani

Beautiful story!!

and superbly written!!

Well done!!!

Must say thanks for writing out so many OS and keeping us entertained!!

Thank youuu! sooo muchh

The chapter was mind blowing

Arnav was restless he was trying to work but was not able to khushi face was coming in front of him again and again. "i should call her ask her how she is "he picked up the phone then drop the idea "i cannot show are i am desperate for her" he just again started working .

it was 10 at night they where having dinner

Op:bhabi ji ha want to talk to you

Anjali : me

Op: ji

Anjali: ha Payal ji

Payal: was crying

Anjali: what happen why you are crying like that?

everyone at the table stopped eating

Anjali: what happen to her ?you dont cry i am sending chota

Arnav was just looking at her .

Anjali: please you both go at once

Arnav: his heart was restless ? why payal called "kya huwa ha Khushi ko"

Anjali: how you know Khushi ?

Arnav: tell me what happen to her everyone look at him

Anjali:she is having high fever , buaji and their amma has gone to someone funereal,Payal is just scare .she just saw Arnav was not there .

Akash just ran behind him.

Mami ji: yeh Arnav ko kya huwa ha

Shyam i have never seen him like this

NK: naanav wait i also want to come

Anjali: didnot reply, she just recollected how restless was he since evening ,roaming here and there ,she had just force him to come down to have dinner.

Arnav:you go and bring Dr he just got out of the car and ran to their home.

Payal just open "dekha na iss ko, i am waking her up for so long"

Arnav: just sat next to her placed his hand on her fore head "bring cold water "

Payal: just ran

Arnav: khushi just hug her in his arms

Payal: just walk back he made her lay

Arnav since when she is having ?

Payal evening

Arnav: i think Akash is back as he heard car .,payal went out."it is my fault i was again and getting her thoughts why i didnot call?" rub her hands look a the rose placed next to her.

Payal &Akash came with their family Dr

Arnav :just didnt move from her side

DR: check her "i am giving her injection , it will decreased with it then you cont with the medicine "

Arnav: just: hold her arm

DR: did she has some infection

Arnav: no she was complain about head ache

Payal:look at Akash

DR: any kind of stress or tension .

Arnav: yes

Dr: then it is because of it , she is just stress out, he checked her BP ."you just solve the problem ,as it can lead to a nevus break down"

Payal: just sat on the bed ,Akash placed his hand on her shoulder.

DR: call me if it doesnot decreased ,he saw Arnav was placing wet cloth on her fore head.

Akash: just see off the Dr and came back after closing the door

Arnav: with eyes ask him to look at Payal

Akash: she will be fine

Payal: just started crying."to make other happy she is tolerating all this"

Arnav: felt iron is hot " do you trust us ?"

Payal: look at him"yes"

Arnav: if i am your elder brother tell me what is bothering her so much?

Payal: i cannot tell

Akash sat next to her "payal tell us "

Payal: i cannot

Arnav: is that so important to hide , you know you are risking her life . he caress her face

Payal: started crying badly ..

Akash: hug her

Arnav: let her she will tell

Payal: she is saving your Di and her JI marriage .

Arnav: and Akash look at each other as they didnot get.

Payal: now i dont care if i dont get married to you , i cannot risk her life .

Arnav: tell dont decide your self

Payal: " the guy whom she was engaged was your jiju "

Arnav and Akash got shock of their life..

Payal: she thinks you will not trust us , and think she try to trap him ,she just narrated the whole story from day one.

Arnav was feeling he could not breath, he just recollected she was crying at the puja day ,she wanted to tell him but could not, and today she was frighten , she request him to come with her down stairs as his jiju was standing in the study , and how she quickly changed his side came on his other side.when Anjali said she go with him ,her face became pale. he just link up everything. he just look at her she was sleeping like dead no idea what is happening around her .

Payal: Khushi ka koi fault nahi ha

Arnav: it is our fault , mostly my fault , i was the first person she ran to , i even got she is having some problem with her fiance , i instead of finding out the reason keep on taunting her , not knowing i am hurting the person who i love the most.

Payal and Akash look at each other .he was in to tears ,Akash asked Payal to leave him with her let him take care of her .they both walk out

Arnav: kissed her forehead , "a 8 months old baby recognized who is an angel among thousand people , i could not , i am a fool really Laad Governor .i talk about power and money .i think gold will make you happy but this flower which i haven't even buy for you ,just select for you is so important . "his tears was running down his eyes " you are very right i would trust you as i think my jiju is the best man on earth" his cell rang.he looked at it is was Anjali

Arnav: Di pray she is not fine her temperature is not decreasing .

Anjali: chota i am coming

Arnav no di no need to come i am here

Anjali: no i am coming i can see your jiju face next year . i am coming she just cut the call.

Arnav: just kneel down next to her bed " look at me once please open your eyes please requesting you khushi "he just loss hope he sat back next to her placing dam cloth on her forehead. he felt she was murmuring his name he just try to listen

Khushi: please don't tell arnav ji please he will get sick.

Arnav: just shocked he look around ,he found her cell he just check the call history . Last call was from Shyam . he felt like killing him ."khushi "kissed her softly "i am here i am here "he heard voice he just move away .

Anjali: walked in "how is she now?"

Arnav: i have just check same

Anjali: did you scold her?

Arnav:no i didnot

Anjali: then

NK: Naanav how is khushi ?

Arnav: just pull blanket on her cover her "same "

Anjali:"What happen to her suddenly? "she sat near her started rubbing her hand.

out side

Akash: stop right there

Shyam: look at him

Akash: you cannot go in

Shyam:look at payal

Akash: as khushi brother i dont want you to go near her.

Shyam: just shocked

NK: what happen

Akash nothing .

Arnav:DI

Anjali: Kya baat ha

Arnav: you go home

Anjali :felt he want to be alone, you have something please

Arnav: i will have

Anjali: just got up "Chota"he look at her "she will be fine"he gave a weak smile.she look at his eye its was tear.

she walked out

Akash :DI

Anjali stay with Payal & you both take care of them , force him to eat something.she walk out .

Arnav: Placed his cheek on her forehead hold her hand in his." i am sorry" Kissed her forehead

Khushi :open her eyes look at him ."aamma babuji "

Arnav: khushi

Khushi: just try to get up

Arnav: what ?

Khushi Amma babuji she pointed at star

Arnav wait he just wrap her in blanket picked her up.she placed her head on his shoulder

Akash: kya huwa

Arnav Open door

they all walk out he sat on bench

Arnav: see Khushi amma buaji

Khushi open eyes "mine yours "

Akash & Payal look at each other ,

Arnav:Our ,tell me is maa happy or sad

Khushi sad as you cried

Arnav: just got up to walk in, he smiled as was happy she in second guess he had cried.

to be cont comment is must or i 😡am updating this ss as i have to finish it before 8thjan ..i will update my other ss in btw

that was amazing one i loved it