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Originally posted by: jyothikrish
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Chapter 5:
Geet is shocked to listen this. She sat on the chair with a thud. Tears formed in her eyes. Now she is crying bitterly unable to face the truth.
Geet (st) : oh god annie, maan ki sister hain. Ab muje sab kuch samaj aaraha hain. Annie n dev ki khushi ke liye maan aisa ban gaya hain. Maan lost his parents. Oh maan I am very sorry maine aapko galat samjha. Why I went to london for MBBS. Agar main yaha hoti tho maan ke paas hoti. I am sorry maan jab aapko ek friend ki jaroorat thi tab main aapke paas nahi thi. I am very bad maan. Now I understand how much u hve suffered. But ab nahi maan ab nahi. Main hu aapke paas aapki geet. Main meri maan ko wapas paakar hi rahungi. Now I am there for u maan ab aap akele nahi hain.
At the same time meera came to geet's cabin. She saw her crying n got worried.
Geet kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahi ho? Sab kuch thik hain na?
Geet just hugged her n cried. After some time geet stopped crying n broke the hug.
Geet ab batao kya hua?
Meera now I came to know why maan change a lot .
Kya hua geet?
Geet told the whole matter to her. Meera is shocked to listen this.
Oh god.. itna sab luch ho gaya. Because of his family he became like this. Humko pata bhi nahi tha. Ha meera ab muje hi kuch karna hain saying this geet lost in her thoughts.
Geet now u should do something. Only 3 days r left geet. Uske baad maan will be discharged. I can do anything for ur happiness. Agar meri zaroorat padi tho muje bulana.
Meera I want u to do one thing. Balki maan uski DIL KI BATEEIN aaj hi bol dena chahiye.
Bolo geet kya karna hain muje.
Geet told something to meera.
Geet r u sure that the plan will work.
I dont know. But he has face the past today he has to cry his heart out. Or else we cant get our old maan back. He should come out of that past. Just u do what I told.
Sure geet I will help u. u should be happy geet thats what I need.
Geet hugged meers n told thanku meera.
Aeylo.. telling thanku to me.
Geet made a baby face n held her ears. Meera laughed at her n left the room to implement the plan.
In maan's room:
annie, dev n pari entered the room n annie is crying bitterly seeing maan's condition. With sudden noise maan opened his eyes n saw annie. He closed his eyes seeing his little sister crying like that.
Annie stop crying bacha. See I am perfectly fine. Plz dont cry baby.
Annie calmed a bit touched his injury on his head n asked dard ho raha hain?
Maan smiled a little n told thoda sa.
After their parents death dev n annie didnt talk to maan much. But they love him to the core. They both r afraid of his anger. They never expressed their love to him. They r not that good in studies but after their parents n seeing maan they dont want to trouble him more. So they studied day n night to make him proud. Maan was very happy to see them concentrating on their careers in that process they all missed the bond they built in the past. But it doesnt mean that they hate each other but never expressed. But annie n dev r sad for maan's changed behaviour. But they too cant help circumstances made him like that. But today annie couldnt control n poured her heart out
bhai aapko pata bhi hain hum kitne darr gaye the. Agar aapko kuch hogaya tho how can we live bhai. Mom n dad jaane ke baad u became our parent, friend n guided us to rite path. Aaj aapka yeh haalat sirf aur sirf hamari wajah se hua hain.
Annie... when maan was about to say some thing but annie didnt allow him to.
Plz bhai let me talk today. Kyun bhai main kuch galat keh rahi hu? Nahi na. Meri aur dev ki khushi ke liye aapne itna sab kuch kiya. Plz bhai ab aur nahi humko hamari maan bhai wapas chahiye. Plz bhai ab hum itna khush hain ki hum aapko bata bhi nahi sakte. Humko kabhi mom n dad ki yaad bhi nahi ayi. Humko aapki chinta hain bhai. We love u bhai we cant see u in pain. Agar aapko kuch hua tho hum zinda bhi nahi rahenge.
ANNIE... shouted maan. Just stop it yeh tum kya keh rahi ho. His eyes r red due to anger. He even cant imagine something bad happened to annie or dev.
Ha bro annie sach keh rahi hain agar aapko kuch hua tho hum zinda nahi rehenge. U r our life bro. We cant imagine our life without u.
stop it u 2. kya hua aaj tum dono ko. Kya bakwas keh rahe ho. Maine kaha na I am safe then y all this non sense. Plz aise barteein kabhi mat kehna. U both leave from here. Annie tum takh gayi hogi jao yaha se.
par bhai...
annie I told to LEAVE. GO ITS MY ORDER.
With no other option they both left with pari. Before going annie turned back n told
bhai we respect u very much. If u dont care for urself then we cant tolearte. Jo hua so hua we r there for u. hum aapko kuch nahi hone denge. Agar aap MAAN SINGH KHURANA ho tho main bhi aapki behen ANVESHA SINGH KHURANA hu. Told annie authoratively. With that they left from there leaving shocked maan there. Maan never thought in his horrible dreams that annie will talk to him like this.
But somewhere maan is happy seeing her little sister. 'we r there for u bhai. We cant live without u' these lines r ringing in his ears.
But one thing they all dont know that outside the room geet is listening all this convo between them. she immediately called meera n told her that plan cancel.
Geet but y?
Kuch nahi meera, annie ne hamara kaam karli hain.
Matlab?
Meera ab yeh sab chodo. Main baad mein tumko batati hu.
Ok fine.
They both cut the call. Geet went to maan's room n asked
hello Mr. khurana how r u feeling now?
oh... Dr. handa. As I told u before u should know better how I am feeling.
But this time geet smiled at him n answered oh ya Mr. khurana I forgot. Sorry I will check. But wo.. kya hain na Mr. khurana if u dont tell what is ur problem then how can we know.
Maan just stared at her without any emotion but understood what she is intimating him. He dont know what to tell. But he spoke he know what he is saying is meaningless
agar aapko pata nahi aapki patient ki problem kya hain then y u came here.
Geet again smiled at him. Now maan is irritated with her continous smiling. Before she use to avoid him but now she is SMILING at him
Dr. handa y thik hain na?
G main bilkul thik hu.
Then y u r laughing.
Aapke bateein sunkar hasi aarahi hain maan. U should speak maan tell us what is ur problem open up maan. Aapki DIL KI BATEEIN boliye humko. Aap akele nahi ho maan. We all r there for u. U R NOT ALONE MAAN. Tell us what is problem maan. U have open up maan u have to. Aap aise hi chup chap rahe tho hum kaise samaj sakte hain. Maan apni dil ki baat kehna koi paap nahi hain. Agar aap aise hi chup rahe tho koi bhi aapko kaise samaj sakte hain boliye maan boliye. She is literally begging him to say something.
But maan didnt say anything after so many days he is not feeling alone. A drop of tear rolled on his cheek. He just touched his cheek is he really crying??. He almost forgot hw to smile n cry long back. No he cant cry. He should not loose again. He is MAAN SINGH KHURANA. his eyes became red due to anger.
Precap: angry maan😡... but on whom??
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