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Posted: 13 years ago

#591

*res*

*EDITED*

Firstly..anytime...for spamming...

Now coming to the update...Mannu Di..wapas aa gayi aap apni mormal self main...kyon...it was going on so well...anyway thanks for the update...

I loved the way you brought it about..i know its sad but the way you brought it out was wonderful..i love your way of writing...i loved Swayam's care for sharon..and their monologue too...

Can't wait for the next part...

Update soon and thanks for the PM...

Edited by swaron95 - 13 years ago

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#592

Amazing update mannu.

It was awesome.

lovely update.

Hmmm Plz clear Swaron tiff soon.

I want a bigger update mannu di.

Thanks for the pm.

Update soon.

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#593

*res**edited*

love you too dear...

manu tu kabhi nahi sudarne wali...

kamini kahiki...humesha unke pyaar mein bhangh dalne ke liye ready rehti hai...

coming to the update...firstly your late with the update...

first part was beautifully explained...

swayam toh caring hai he..no doubt in that...

par could not u make him listen to what sharon had to say...

anyways abb jaldi sulah kar unki...

nice update...

Edited by shaani2209 - 13 years ago

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praj

@Gratitude_Me

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#594

mannu yeh swayam pagal hai kya

dude some tykes give chance to others to speak...

& sharon is so rude...lol

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NikiBh8

@NikiBh8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#595

Manu Tune Pm Nhi Kiya :(

AnywAYS Love it :D

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#596

Lol, the ever so famous fights by Manu...Only you can make them fight out of no where...But still, damn man...Sharon actually wanted to give their relationship a chance but Swayam just had to spoil it by assuming stuff...Update the next part soon !!!

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#597

It was an appropriate update by th plot or per Swaron nature but it is so depressing to see that again yaar...hope thngs will b better off in ur next update 😊

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#598

Amazing update...again problems b/w swaron i hope it gets solved soon

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#599

Originally posted by: shaani2209
*res**edited*
love you too dear...
manu tu kabhi nahi sudarne wali...
kamini kahiki...humesha unke pyaar mein bhangh dalne ke liye ready rehti hai...
coming to the update...firstly your late with the update...
first part was beautifully explained...
swayam toh caring hai he..no doubt in that...
par could not u make him listen to what sharon had to say...
anyways abb jaldi sulah kar unki...
nice update...

ofcourse swayam usko shanti se sun sakta tha... par me usko nai sunvana chahti thi na..!!!

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#600

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Lol, the ever so famous fights by Manu...Only you can make them fight out of no where...But still, damn man...Sharon actually wanted to give their relationship a chance but Swayam just had to spoil it by assuming stuff...Update the next part soon !!!

ghhee even i dont like the romantic me...!!! fights are forte mann... u know that