SwaRon FF- HONA THA PYAAR...

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: namratajadhav
vl comment 2mrw as m reading ur ff's nw.. do keep on pm ing me plz..

yeaaa for sure will pm u... hope u like the FF... 😊

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: manasie

ill try to write the next part ASAP...!!!

take your tym dear...studies first...

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nish22

@nish22

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#333

Manu di just read both the updates!! Masha Allah!! Awesome!! :D

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#334

Really cute update Manu...I love all the chits tat Swayam writes to Sharon...and Sharon hoping that its Swayam...Cant wait for the next chapter !!!

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Palak

@partyprincess16

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#335

thats was such a cute update thanks for the Pm and update soon!! 😊

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#336

Hiii abhi abhi iss FF ko starting se padha hai so i wuld like to comment from the 1st update kyu ki mujhe ye FF bohot accha laga plz bare me 😆

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#337

swayam on his cycle...
Sw: shit me bahot late ho gaya hoo... I need to hurry up... Varna bharat will be all ready with a plan to murder me...!!! Woo woo kaun hai...!!! SHARON?? Bich raaste me... Lagta hai uski car kharab ho gayi hai... I'll offfer her help...
Sw: car problem???
Sh: haan... Swayam...
Sw: mere saath chalogi...cycle pe???
Sh: iss din ka toh muje kabse intezaar tha... Tumhare saaath cycle pe...
Sharon sits on the bars... And swayam starts to ride his cycle again... Their hands met twice... Sharon blushed...
Suddenly he could hear loud horn... Peeep peeep...
Ramu kaka: swayam baba utho utho...! Swayam baba...🤣 🤣

bechara sapna dekh raha tha 🤣 🤣

update bohot accha tha but bohot chota tha 😔

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#338

Suddenly swayam stops the car...
Kr: ha ha pata hai... Kisiko apke baareme nai pata... Aur batana bhi nai hai...

bechari koi ye baat swayam se kitne baar sunna pada ki usko yaad hi hogaya 😆 😆

Sh: vo tum bula sakte ho...
Sw: kisko bulao...?

ha ha loved these lines awesome

once again awesome update...

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#339

While going towards the class Sharon misses a step and was about to fall flat on her face… but swayam saves her in time

swayam to humesh iss kaam kelie ready hi rehta hai 😆 😆

And the partners are…

Re: ya me and kria…

haha rey hai to kriya to hogi hi 😆 😆

Music starts... Labon ko labon se..
Both lost in each oders eyes...😍 😍

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#340

Kr: kya aap mere saath dance karoge...?
Rey gives his hand... Background me Inn lamho ke daman me
rey and kria start dancing... Lost in each others arms and eyes...😍 😍

And i was so lost in trance of that song(in ur eyes he wanted to say but dint)

che yaar bol deta

koi problem nahi awesome update...