Pyar ke pal:Go to pg.45 Fast!!! the end!! - Page 30

Originally posted by: shahidlover24

Awesome job on the last couple of parts! But I have a question, can Angad and Kripa see each other or is it totally pitch black? 😕 And about your writing, it's simply amazing! Don't ever think that it's not good!!! It's awesome! 👍🏼

omg!!! finally yaar i was waiting 4 sumone 2 ask that question!!!! lol u have 2 wait and read the next prt to find out...thnkzz😛

Originally posted by: kripa_angad=luv

please cont!!! 😭 😭 u had to end it on an intersting part!! 😭 😭

lol ...sory for tha wait lekin thora aur intazaar ho sakta hai kya???😛

Originally posted by: brainychild92

this is really good.. u should continue

thnkzzz i'll cont sooon😊

SORRY!!!!

Hi everyone!!! I am really sorry for not continuing for a while now 😳 .... I am taking a summer course and have to study for the SHSAT, that's why I didnt have the time. But no need to wait a lot more I will post a part tonight or tomorrow to the latest, thnkzzzz for understanding!!! 😳

xoxoxo-Hawa

Finally!!!!!
Its okay as long as you continue now! 😉
Waiting for the next part!

Originally posted by: soaps_01

Finally!!!!!
Its okay as long as you continue now! 😉
Waiting for the next part!

dont worri continuing in 2 hrs😊

Part 22

Recap: Aaliyah plans a surprise birthday party for Angad. Kripa helps out since Aaliyah doesnt want angad to take notice of her being away from college without him. Karthick helps Kripa out, but then has to leave since he recieved a call from the office. The birthday party is set beautifully by Kripa, Angad's family and friend arrive to the party location. Aaliyah plays a prank on Angad to get him to the party site. Angad goes to get his car but realises his car is with Aaliyah, so he takes his morocycle. Angad reaches the part site it is very dark. Kripa is not at the party since she went to take a walk. Both Angad and Kripa reach the the place at the same time and Which makes them bump into each other. Kripa looses balance and Angad catches her. Both forget everything and stare in each others eyes.😳

ok since Angad aur Kripa es postion mein thak gaye honge here is the next part.

(slow motion)

There was a full moon that night. And since it was dark the moon was the only source of light they had to stare at each other's eyes. They were just staring at each other forgetting everything around them. Angad forgetting Aaliyah, and her problems. They just stared at each other in those deep passionate beautiful moon lit eyes. Making Angad see Kripain the moon light made her seem more beautiful to him. Kripa looking him in the eye feeling something strange.

(slow motion over)

Then all of a suden out of their surprise the light go on,Angad and Kripa get out of their trance, and quickly apart and they see everyone and they (everyone) yell "SURPRISE!!"

Just then Aaliyah come up to Angad " Sorry bhai I scared you", she brings out her puppy face. " You idiot tumhe pata bhi hai ki how scared I was" Aaliyah shrugs her shoulders as a "opps" look then says " Happy Birthday!!"

Just then Dadi come up to both of them

"Aare Angad beta abb tho es badmash ko chorde es ne to tumhari kushi ke liye ky a tha yei sab" Angad smiles " Girlfriend agar app kahe aur mein na manu...eysa(spelling?) hoga" Dadi gives Angad a warm smile. " Happy Birthday my bacha" she says " Thnak you Dadi" he replied.

Everyone came up to Angad and congratulated him. Simone and Kripa also came up to him and wished him a Happy Birthday.Since Simone was there Angad didnt want to talk to Kripa about the incident that just happened between the two. It was really weird between the two while she was wishing him.

Simone went to another friend leaving Angad and Kripa alone together. When they were about to talk Aaliyah and Karthick joined the two.

" So Angad I assume you already know Kripa Sharma here as she attended the meeting you also attended 2 weeks ago."Just then it hit him she was that girl that was with Manek. " O I am so sorry I forgot that was you, you look so different from last time" he said. " Was that a compliment or an insult Mr. Angad?" Kripa grinned. " Compliment ofcourse Ms. Sharma" an embarressed Angad replied.

" Bhai guess who did all the decorations for your party!" said a cheerful Aaliyah " My sweet darling sister it had to be someone else besides you, because you are so intrested in flowers and stuff that you would have made it look like your birthday, all girlie." Teased Angad. " Well Bhai I must say you were right this time" she replied in a teasing manner. "Then who did all this?" asked a confused and curious Angad " It was Kripa. O'yea by the way this is my friend Kripa" Aaliyah said looking towars a lightly blushing Kripa. " Anyways can you belive she did all this with in 4 hours. I know,I cant."

" Thank you Miss Kripa for doing all this it is beautiful indeed" said Angad in a soft tone " Well you can stop being formal and call me Kripa, and your welcome" replied Kripa in the same soft tone. " How did you know i would like something like this?" asked Angad " I had to interrogate(spelling?) your brother like the gestapo" Kripa joked. All four of them laughed.

***************END OF PART************

Ok I am so sorry for the short update, but my Mom is a night gaurd tonight and is calling me up to go to sleep. Anyways I will try and continue tomorrow if not then hopefully by Friday. Hoped you guys liked this part I tried to make it Spelling mistake free!!! O' yes and i will try and make it more intresting!!!

xoxoxo-Hawa <3

okie so i updated happy now all of youzz

aww hawa tht wa really good!!! 👏 👏 👏 u kno they were in tht position for far too long 😆 but the way it turned out, i loved it! sweety take ur time ur busy so relax breath we are here waiting 😊

-Ruby

Originally posted by: ruby89

aww hawa tht wa really good!!! 👏 👏 👏 u kno they were in tht position for far too long 😆 but the way it turned out, i loved it! sweety take ur time ur busy so relax breath we are here waiting 😊

-Ruby

aww thnkzz😳 yep i think 2 weeks in that position was enough for them!!!😛 thnkzz for understanding yaar!!! i will try and cont today!!😊