Pyaar Kismat Mein Nahiye AK Fanfic pg210 - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks for your lovely comments 😊
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Heres the next part so enjoy 😊 😊
Episode 6

Riz approaches Kripa

Riz- What happened Kripa

K- Zaib aur Angad....... (Kripa cries)

Riz- what happened to Zaib and Angad

K- Riz they had an Accident they are in the hospital

Naina- kya kaunseh hospital

(Riz rings Natasha and asks her and she tells him that they are in Lifecare
Hospital so all the Sharma's go to the Hospital)

(Outside the ICU all the Khannas and Sharma's be standing the Doctor comes
out of the ward)

Damini (rushes to the Doctor) Doctor hows Angad

Doctor- Angad is out of danger (all the family is happy to hear this) but
we have to keep him here for one more day under observation and one person
has to stay with him today.

Damini- I will

Aliyah- Mom you take insulin's (diabetic injections) so you cant stay I will
stay with Bhai

Rishab- no Aliyah beta you all go home and rest Kripa will stay hain na
Kripa beta

K- erm ......... jee

(the family goes home Kripa stays in the Hospital)

(the Morning arrives Kripa wakes up and goes to talk to the Doctor about
Zaib)

K- excuse me Doctor

Doctor- yes Miss Kripa

K- Doctor I wanted to know how is Zaib

Doctor- I am sorry to say he is in Coma

K-What (shocked) Doctor when will he come out of coma will he be ok

Doctor- it can take 2 weeks or two months or even 2 years, at the moment
Zaib is showing no recovery signs

K- can I meet him Doctor

Doctor- sure Ward 3

(Kripa goes to Zaibs ward and remembers the happy times with Zaib in Oxford
and how they broke up and is very sad and a sad song is playing in the
Background)

K- Zaib I told you many times not to drive the car so fast but you never
listen, Zaib get up please get up(Kripa cries)

(3 Hours later Kripa is still in Zaibs room crying and in Angads room he
starts choking he presses the Emergency button all the doctors come, they
inform the family, after a while the family arrives)

Damini- Doctor my son Angad how is he now

Doctor- he is out of danger now but I told you yesterday someone had to stay
with him but there's been no one since Morning he could have died luckily he
pressed the Emergency button and we came and now he's fine we have given him
the injection and in a few hours he will wake up

Naina- lekin Kripa uskeh saat thi

Rishab- nahin mein jaanta hoon who kaha hai who us Zaib keh saat hai

(Rishab and Naina go to ward 3 Zaibs ward)

K- Dad (shocked)

Rishab- (slap) Kripa how irresponsible can you be you are sitting here with
him, Angad could've died coz of you(abit calmer now) ab chalo yahaan seh.

(After a few days Angad gets discharged from hospital and is fine)

(The story goes 1 week ahead and the Engagement day arrives)

The Engagement Day

(Kripa is getting ready and so is everyone else in the Sharma house, the
Engagement is in a very big venue at a very big hotel)

(Kripa is ready wearing Sky Blue and Lilac Lengha with matching jewellery
Kripa is not happy but has to pretend to be happy coz of her brother and
the family so she has a fake smile on her face)

(Suddenly downstairs in the Sharma house where all the arrangements were
going on Shazmin comes from Canada after 6 years and surprises everyone.
Everyone is happy to see Shazmin especially. Shazmin is wearing Short
black skirt and a baby pink top with high black heel boots)

Naina- beta Shazmin tum agayi I thought you said tum agleh hafteh aneh wali
thi

(they both hug each other)

S- no mom mein agleh hafteh aneh wali thi lekin jab aapneh mujhe bataya keh
Di ki Engagement hain toh maine socha kyun na aap sab ko mein surprise doon
isliye maine aap ko phone peh nahiye bataya keh mein is hafteh aneh wali
hoon so mom kaisa laga Shazmin ka surprise

Naina- bahuth acha Kripa tumhe dekh kar bahuth khush hogi

(just then Rishab and Riz come and Shazmin hugs them they are very happy to
see her as they have seen her after 6 years, Naina phones Natasha and tells
her that Shazmin has come and she is also very happy)

preview- Riz and Aliyahs Engagement happens
New character enters in the story (the character has been
mentioned in the character list)
Will Kripa go through with the engagement??

😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
hey cont soon...that was a great part!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
it was fantastic!! cant wait for the next part 😛 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
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i read all the parts at last sorry 4 taht unum i was the 1st one to know about it so sorry but u guys r doing excellent job
i just love this ff 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
just caught up with the story,its mindblowing 😃 .
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
i just caught up wid ur fanfic!!! and man, it rocks!!it's just amazing!!plz plz plz u have to cont. soon!! i am dying to read more!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Thanks for your lovely comments they encourage us a lot we will continue soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39

kripas engagement lengha

shazmins lengha

aliyahs lengha

natashas lengha

angads sherwani

rizwan sherwani

sheraz sherwani

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#40
guys that was posted by me but my sister forgot to logoff and i thought i was logged on my name sorry about that i hope you like the clothes if you have trouble seeing them please let us know.
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