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Posted: 19 years ago
here is a long part😃



The phone starts ringing and kripa picks it up.
It was raj and told her to come to the meeting fast. Kripa told angad that she is going to work and angad notice what she mean.
K: can I trust u guys that u will behave
S,Ka: yes mom
K: ok if anything goes wrong call me ok
S,Ka: ok
A: to the kids) I have to go somewhere I will be back in half an hour
S,Ka: ok dad

Angad leaves then after him kripa leave few mints later. Angad was already at the place waiting for her.



Kripa smiles and gets off her bike. They both inter the cottage

All the gang were waiting for them. They stand there will josh was explaining the next job

J: we need someone who could give us lots of information about people
P: what do u mean
J: im talking about there is someone who could find people easy for us if we get her
Karthic: Her?
J: yes her
R: who is that

Josh turns on a slid show and puts the picture. The picture was kripa's. raj, kripa and angad were shocked.
J: her name is kripa…is we get her in our gang we could easily find people
R: but sir what is she doesn't come in our team
J: she will…we will make her
K: whispers to angad) yea right
A: giggles)
K: how are u going to make her
J: everyone has a weakness and so does she
K: confused) what is that
J: puts the picture of sasha and karan) this is her kids
K: shocked and really angry)
J: if we get them then she will easily join our team
K: angry) u cant do that
J: why not
K: listen don't u dear to touch the kids or u wont survive
J: what do u mean?
K: if u touch her kids she will kill u
J: yea right….we will see
A: she is right….u cant use the kids as her weekness
J: this our job…we need to do it
K: try and u wont survive from me
P: when are we going to go and get the kids
K: u cant?
J: today….we need to do this as fast as we could
K: angry) if u do this then I quit this job
All the gang shocked)
Ka: 5 u cant quit this
K: yes I can….josh if u lay hand on the kids u will be dead….

Kripa leaves to her bike angry and rids off. Kripa reaches home and sees sasha and karan still playing game. She smiles and sits next to them watching them.
S: mom can we go to the park
Ka: plez mom
K: sure
S: were is dad
Same time angad inters
A: im here
S:,Ka: smiles big) dad lets go to the park
A: sure
S,Ka: yayyyyyyyyyyyyy

Sasha and karan leaves to their room to change will angad sits next to angry kripa
A: they wont do anything
K: im going to kill them if they lay hand on my kids
A: they are my kids to…I wont spear them to(holds her hand to his)
K: smiles to him) lets go

They were at the park. Kripa sat with angad at the benches and sasha, karan playing with other kids at monkey bars. After few mints later sasha and karan runs to kripa
S: mom can we have ice cream
K: sure (hands them money and both of them runs to the ice cream truck)
A: when are u going to come home
K: I don't know
A: they miss u a lot there
K: how is dadaji
A: ok now
K: what do u mean ok now
A: will….after when u left…he got an heartatack
K: shocked) what?
A: puts his head down and talk) we were so scared…we thought we might lose him….he got really big shock after u left….he loved u a lot u know
K: slowly nods her head will getting teary)
A: will….the whole house go really different….I berly talk to anyone at home….the only person I talked to was mom and dadaji….the rest…I hate them all
K: why?
A: if it wasn't for them u wouldn't leave me
K: it wasn't their fault
A: oh yea….they were the one who acused u and u still take their sid
K: angad….they are u family…and they wanted beast for u
A: by separating u away from me…
K: angad…….
A: don't take their side….(angry)
K: laughs) ok sorry….
Kripa looks back and doesn't see sasha and karan
K: were are they
A: they must be playing
K: get up and looks for them) no they are not here (something hits her) angad….the gang might have (gets teary)
A: shocked) no…no they cant….lets go hurry)

They both rids to the gang place. As they inter they see josh, prithvi and karthic there.
P: u guys finally came
Ka: we got them
Kripa sees sasha and karan thigh up both sitting at the corner of the room
K: angry) why u (walks up to josh and punchs him hard in the face) how dear u…I told u not to hurt them (tries to hit him again but prithvi holds her and karthic holds angad tight)
A: josh leave them
J: after when I get kripa

Josh walks up to the kids and pulls sasha from his shirt up
J: were is ur mom
S: ------
J: tell me or im going to slap u
A: josh stop it

Both kripa and angad had their hamlet on and sasha, karan didn't know them
J: call ur mom and tell her to come here
S: I wont
J: oh yes u will….hurry up kid
S: no
J: angry and slaps him hard) I said call her (hands him the phone)
Sasha got teary but still fight his tears back. Karan got angry
Ka: let him go…if mom find out u did this she will kill u
K: josh leave them alone (trying to free her self)
Josh rises his hand to hit sasha again

Kripa angry hits prithvi hard and takes out her gun. As josh was about to hit sasha kripa shots at josh's arm

The whole gang was shocked. Same time raj inters and saw that. Josh let go of sasha and holds his arm
J: why u….how dear u hit ur boss
K: u lay hand again on them and this time I will shot on ur head
Karthic) 5 what the hell did u do that for?
K: angry walks up to sasha and karan. She unties them. Sasha and karan were scared and confused at 5. Kripa took her hamlet of and the whole gang were shocked to see her face. Sasha and karan hugged her tight will both of them really scared of the gun fire.
K: looks angry at the whole gang) if u just asked me to look for someone I could have done that for u guys…but u used my kids as my weakness….u will pay for this really bad…..I quit this freking job….some day when u guys have kids as ur own and someone trys to used them as ur weakness u will know the pain.

Angad took of his hamlet to angry at the whole gang. Sasha and karan run to him
S,Ka: daddddd
The whole gang were more shocked to hear 6 their father.
Raj was surpised seeing angad and kripa together but he was really happy for her. Kripa, angad leave from the place with their kids both quitting the job leaving shocked gang behind.
Angad was with karan and kripa with sasha in her bike. They reached home and kripa hugged sasha will taking him inside and angad hugged karan and took him inside. They took both of them inside their room and sat them down together on the bed.
K: teary) im really sorry jaan….im sorry for what happen
S: mom…mom stop crying
Ka: its ok mom
K: starts crying) im sorry
Both sasha and karan gets up and hugs kripa. Angad looks at them and seeing them together they looked so cute. Angad sits next to kripa and puts his hand around her trying to calm him down.
S: mom C'mon stop crying now…ur being such a baby
Ka: u always told u not to cry and ur crying ur self
S: see I didn't cry when he hit me but nothing happen to u and ur crying.
K: wipes her tears) im not crying
A: aww look who is the little baby now
They all laugh at kripa
K: yea yea laugh as much as u want….
S: mom u were so kool
Ka: yea and the way u hit him
S: we always heard about that gang but we never knew our parents were in that gang…
Ka,,S: u guys rock
K: thanks (kisses both of them in the forehead) but u know u are
S,Ka: we know mom….its not good to fight and we should never ever touch a gun…we wont mom we promised u….
A,K: smiles to them)
K: ok I will go and make lunch


Kripa leaves to the kitchen will the other three went to the back yard playing football and talking
S: dad can we tell u a secret about mom
A: what is it
S: will u know…when u were not here…mom always at night came and sit in the back yeard crying
Ka: yea….and she smoked to
A: shocked) what?
S: we saw her for the first time when she smocked…she started coughing so much and she got pissed of so she throw the box of cigarette away…we were so happy becz she didn't smoke after that
Ka: have u ever smoked dad
A: laughs and slowly nods his head) once…when I was in collage…my friend let me try it but I hated it so I didn't get into it
S: yea its suck
Ka: u know…we saw some pictures how u become when u smoke…its disgusting…
S.Ka: ewwwwwwwww
A: laughs)
S: dad there is one more secret about mom
A: what is that?
S: u know how all wifes fast for their husbands
A: u mean carwachut
Ka: yea that
A; what about it
Ka: when we didn't know that we had a dad…but mom always every year did that
A: surprised and really happy) really
S: yea…we saw her to that every year…but we hated becz she cried when she did that
Ka: that sucked…all other women were happy but mom cried.
A: really sad)

They talked until kripa called them for dinner. Sasha and karan run inside will angad was still in backyard thinking about kripa.



Kripa puts everything on the table and asks the kids
K: were is angad
S: he is coming
K: uff..I forgot….I need to go to work in few mints

Angad come from behind
A: whats wrong
K: smiles) nothing

A: hey u guys wane go to the movies
S,Ka; yeaaaaaaaa
K; im not in mood
A: oh ok…I will fix ur mood (winks at the sasha and karan then kisses kripas cheek)

K: looks at him angry) anagddddddddd
Kids were giggling and angad started laughing
A: C'mon kripa lets go to the movies with us
K: I cant…I have to go to work
A: u don't need to….why do u need to work when u got a rich husband
K: no angad….im going to work….
A: disappointed and sad) ok

They sit down and have lunch will angad had his head down eating and not saying anything. After lunch sasha and karan run to their room to change and kripa went to hers will angad fallowing her
A: kripa I want to talk to u
K: what is it?
A: listen kripa….I don't want u to work anymore….I have lots of money….
K: no angad….im working
A: don't u love me
K: yes I do love u
A: then why don't u let me do my job as responsible for being a father and husbend
K: u are angad
A: no im not….ur working and giving everything for the kids….that a good thing but now its my job….I cant let u work

K: but angad
A: plez kripa
K:……ok

A: smiles and hugs her)
K: ok now go I need to get ready
A: go ahead….im just going to sit her and wait here

K: angad go outside and wait
A: nope
K: fine (leave to the bathroom and few mints later comes out
A: weasels) wow
K: blushes and leaves to the kids room)
Both sasha and karan were ready. Kripa took a brush and combed their hair.
K: ok lets go
Edited by Star* - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
roking prt yaar...cont soon 😃 ...well actually it was more than roking it was AWSOME!!!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
mindblowing plz do continue
Edited by lucky-moon - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awesome part! It was just 2 good! Cont soon!
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that is soo cute....its soo good to see the old pics again!! awesome part!!
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They went to the movies. Angad sat next to kripa will watching movie.

Kripa looked a little pall
A: u ok kripa
K: yea im ok…I will be back need to go to ladies room
A: ok

Kripa left to the bathroom and looked at her self in the mirror…she washed her face with cold water will feeling a little dizzy. She went back and sat next to angad. She rested her head on his shoulder will still feeling dizzy. After when the movie finished they sat down on angad's car.
A: we are going to dinner
K: angad I want to go home
A: kripa…C'mon we are going for dinner then home
K: plez angad…how about u guys go I will be at home
A: but kripa
K: plez just drop me home and u guys go
A: ok

They reached home and kripa got off. Angad and the kids went out for dinner will kripa went to her room to rest. She had a high fever and could barely stand. She laid down on her bed and fall a sleep.

Around 8 angad and the kids came home. They had a great time out. Angad saw kripa sleeping so they slowly shut the door and stayed at living room playing game. It was around 10 pm and angad told the kids to go to sleep becz they have school the next day. He put them both to sleep and went slowly to kripa's room who was fast sleep. He smiles and bent down to kiss her forehead. As he kissed her he felt her forehead to hot. He put his hand on her forehead and it was burning. He got worried and got water with paper towel for her. He put the white small sheet on her forehead. He stayed up late keep doing that. Will he did that he got flash back of kripa doing the same thing to him 6 years back when she lived with them.

He smiled remembering her. it was middle of the night and kripa was still the same. He didn't know what else to do so he called the doctor. He let the doctor slowly inter the house and didn't want to wake up the kids. The doctor checked her and give angad some medicine to give kripa. Angad fall a sleep on the couch. In the morning angad work up and saw kripa still sleeping

He put his hand on her forehead and it still was a little hot. He left to the kids room and got them up and they got ready for school. He dropped them to school and told them that kripa was sleep that why she couldn't get them ready. He came back home quickly and saw kripa already up fixing her bed
A: kripa
K: yea
A: what are u doing…u should be resting
K: im ok
A: touches her forehead) no ur not…go back to sleep
K: no I don't want to (feels dizzy)
A: go back to sleep…u could barley stand

Kripa sat back and angad took care of her. Around 11 am kripa got batter. She smiled at angad seeing him taking care of her.
K: thanks
A: for what?
K: for taking care of me
A: my pleasure jaan….
K: sorry
A: for what?
K: for being mean to u for last 6 years
A: it wasn't ur fault….maybe I would have done the same thing if I was u….but u know…the thing u did was something I never expected from u
K: what?
A: whispers to her) u still loved me that way u always fasted for me
K: shocked) what? How did u know
A: I know lots of things about u
K: but how?
A: that's a secret
K: angad tell me plez
A: nope cant
K: ok
A: rest now….
K: ok

Kripa laid down and angad laid down next to her
A: im soo sleepy
K: sorry…becz of me right
A: nope…becz every time when im close to u I feel like hugging u and fall a sleep (hugs her)
K: smiles) angad…did u tell home that ur here…or they will be worried sick
A: I don't care
K: angad
A: fine I will call home

Angad called home and told nina that he stayed with kripa. And he told her that they are coming home to visit. Nina told everyone at home that kripa was coming. Everyone was surprised and really happy

A: kripa…will u come home
K: smiles to him) yea
A: really happy) really
K: nods)
A: hugs her)

Around 1pm they pick up sasha and karan from school and leave toward anagds house.
S: mom were are we going
A: ur going to see grandma and uncles
S: we have grandma…kool
Ka: how come u guys never told us that
A: didn't have chance….now u guys will meet them all of them

They stop by a big mention and get out of the car.
S:,Ka: wow….I didn't know we are rich
A: u guys are richer then u think
S,Ka: really
A: yup
S,Ka: yayyy that means now we can meet rada and guri…yayyyyyyyy

Angad rings the bell and nina opens the door with poja tali in her hand. All the rest of the family was behind her. Nina gets teary and does poja around kripa and angad. Sasha and karan just stirred at all of them and had no idea what was going on. Kripa smiled and touched ninas feet. Nina hugged her will both of them cried. Kripa went to the rest of the family and hugged them all. She went up to buwa and she cried a lot asking for forgiveness. Kripa just hugged her and smiled. Nina went up to the kids and greeted them.

She was really happy and hugged both of them. Everyone in the family thinks sasha and karan are kripa and anagds child but only angad,kripa and nina knows the truth. Kripa went up to the dadajis room. He was sitting in his chair reading book. Kripa slowly went behind him and put her hands on his eyes. The dadaji felt her hand and got teary.
D: kripa
K: surprised how did he know)
Kripa went in front of him and smiled. She touched his feet and hugged him will both of them crying.
D: how are u my child?
K: im good dadaji
D: we all missed u so much….why didn't u ever come back….u didn't care about us
K: its not that….im here

Kripa haled from the old mans hand and took him down. The whole family sat together after long time really happy. Sasha and karan went up to dadaji and touched his feet
K: this is ur great grandsons
D: really happy)
K: this is sasha and karan
D: hugs both of them)

They all talked a lot will sometimes cried and sometimes laughed. sasha and karan talked and the whole family started cracking up.

N: there is a party tomorrow night…we invited all friends…

They all chatted few more hours and have dinner there. Around 10 pm kripa got up
K: we have to go now
N: were are u going
K: mom…we need to go home…its late now
N: but kripa this is ur home to
K: I know thank you so much….but we need to go
N: I understand…but remember after tomorrow on ur moving back here…no buts
K: smiles to them and hugs nina) bye
N: take care

They say bye to all and leave back toward home. Sasha and karan fall sleep in the car. When they reached home kripa carried karan and angad carried sasha in his arm. They laid them down on their bed and slowly left from the room.
A: im sleepy to…let go to sleep
K: ur not going home
A: this is my home….im sleeping here (lays down on kripas bed)
Kripa smiles and lays down next to him. Both talk a little bit and soon fall a sleep angad hugging her tight.

In the morning kripa wakes up early. She sates up but angad pulls her down.
K: surprised) ur awake
A: eyes still closed) hmmmmmm….
K: leave me I have to go
A: its so early…ur crazy…go back to sleep
K: an…

Angad pulls her back and puts his arms around her not letting her get up. Kripa smiles at him and angad was fast a sleep again. After 2 hours later angad wakes up and slowly opens his eyes. He looks in his side and kripa wasn't there.
A: how did she got away….god this girl.. (gets up and leaves from the room.)

He looks around the room and no one was there. He was confused for were everyone was. He was about to go back toward the room when the door opens and kripa inters.
K: hi ur up…
A: where were u…and how did u got up I was holding u hard so u don't run away
K: giggles and walks up to him…she kisses his cheek) good morning ( walks toward kitchen)

Angad fallows her to the kitchen
A: still confused)
K: laughs) kids went to school…after today on they will be off for 2 months…u wouldn't let me go so I just used a trick for u to let me go
A: how?
K: giggles) I tickled ur ear with the fader and u put ur arm up so u could touch ur ear so that's how I run from there
A: why u? u always trick me
K: that me (smiles to him)
A: oh really ( hugs her from behind)
K: angad go get ready we are going shopping
A: shopping?
K: yea I need to buy new cloths for my self and for the kids….remember tonight there is party in ur house
A: our house
K: ok sorry..our house
A: smiles to her)
K: ok now go ( pushes him toward their room) hurry up
A: ok ok…im going but (quickly kisses her cheek and runs to the bathroom)
Kripa smiles seeing him acting like kids.

Angad comes back out after 10 mints.
A: ready
K: ok lets go

They drive to the mall and shop there for about 2 hours. Kripa buys her self beautiful blue sari and for the kids jeans with cute boys shirt. She pick a suit for angad and angad shakes his head
A: I don't like that
K: ok….how about different
A: I already have so many suits….I don't need any
K: ok….lets go im done
A: lets go

Kripa was about to pay the bill but angad doesn't let her. He pays the bill and both of them drive back toward home. Later on they pick up sasha and karan from school.

Kripa gets both of the kids ready when angad inters the kids room. He was wearing the same suit that kripa picked for him in the mall. Kripa looks at him surprised.
K: u got the suit
A: yup
K: but I thought u said u have so many
A: I do…but this one is special
K: how come
A: becz u picked it for me (kisses her cheek)
K: angad
Kids giggle seeing kripas face red

They leave to the khanna mention. After an hour later the party starts at 5 pm. People starts coming and greeting all of them. Sasha and karan were next to kripa and angad when all of sudden big smile spread in their face seeing rada and guri come to the party to. Both of the sisters looked really cute
The girls parents come up to them will both rada and guri glancing at karan and sasha and blushing. Kripa talks to the parents and see the two girls. She bends down and kisses their cheek
K: ur kids are really cute
P: than you….(sees sasha and karan) are they ur kids
K: yes
P: I didn't know they were ur kids…they go to the same school as my daughters

K: smiles to them then winks at sasha and karan.)
Sasha and karan were really happy becz now the girls parents would let them play with them.

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Posted: 19 years ago
Thank you so much for great comments

I will be going to vication this month on 22 for 3 months...so i wanted to end both of the ff fast before i leave thats why im posting long parts 😃 when i come back im starting two defferent new ff 😉

thank you u guys 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
as usual roking prt yaaar...cont sooon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was such an adorable part, Great job! Cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!i finally caught up!ITZ AMAZING...CONT SOON

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