Pyaar keh rang!.a fanfic(sujal n kashish) - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Rly nice story Farah!!!!!! 👏

looking forward to reading the rest 😊


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Posted: 19 years ago
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Gr8 Farah jifinaly ur going to start Pyaar keh rang thanx 😊 gr8 story 👏 plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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farah me very happy u continued pkr.. 😊
as always ur write very damn well...... 😃
ab jaldi se continue it.... 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice story 😊
keep it up 😉
cant wait 4 the next part 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oye hoye... chuk de phatte 👏 👏 ....cont plz 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Farah...itz da third...time i am reading this...again..itz gr8 👏 ...plz continue soon.... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank you so much everyone adi, ac bachi, surya, RS, shehzadi....heres the next part for you guys..lol.....adi mein chahti hon tum log is story ko rat lo....hehehe

kashish aur piyush class attend karke bahir ate hain...kashish was still very angry and holding the 100 rupee note....

piyush:...kuch thanda ho jaye
kashish looks at piyush:...agar muje woh mil jaye to mein uski woh halat karungi keh woh yaad rakhe ga?
piyush:....kon..kisi kya halat karogi keh kon kya yaad rakhe ga? (totally confused)
kashish:..piyush......mein uski baat kar rahi hon jisne yeh...yeh (she shows him the note again)....jisne yeh harkat ki hai.......
piyush:..oh god...tum jaisi larkiyan
kashish:..kya?...what do you mean by muj jaisi larkiyan? (she gets furious)....
piyush:..mera matlab...tum jaisi larkiyan bahut emotional hoti hain...kashish...yaar, ek to usne tumhari madat ki upar se use hi bura bhala keh rahi ho......chalo ab jao aur jake kapre saaf kar wa lo.....(he giggles)
kashish:...piyush mein tumhe (she raises her hand keh uski nazar kisi cheez peh parti hai.....ek gari peh.....are yeh to wohi gari hai.....aur yeh kya....us gari ko kholne ki koi koshish kar raha hai......kuch saaf nazar nahi araha......he has his back towards us....ok lets go.....)
kashish:..piyush......woh dekho...
piyush: kahan (starts to look around).....koi achi larki hai ?
kashish:...are stupid...woh ...woh udhar (she points)..yeh wohi gari hai na........
piyush:....haan....shayad.....
kashish:...aur yeh shakas shayad wohi hai jisne mere saath batameezi ki..........chalo.....abhi sabak sikhati hon
piyush:...are yaar rehne do na.....bara aadmi lag ta hai
kashish:..bara ho ya chota.....mujse batameezi karne ka anjaam acah nahi hoga.....tumhe nahi ana mat ao, mein khudhi chali jati hon.....(she leaves instantly....while piyush follows her too)

yahan gari keh paas ek aadmi gari khol raha hai jab usse kashish peeche se bulati hai

kashish:..excuse me!
the guy turns around....wah! kya dashing banda hai....kya ala suit hai woh bhi branded.....shoes polished.....magical scent aur upar se sunglasses.....yes its none other than our very own sujal garewal..........! taliyan ho jayein!!!

sujal removes his glasses.....:..jee...aap ne mujse kuch kaha.........(sujal was impressed by kashish par pyaar jaisi kisi chiriya ne abhi tak dil peh dastak nahi de thi....lol).........
kashish:..jee, filhaal to yana apke siva aur muje koi nahi nazar araha, to mein apse hi baat kar rahi hon
sujal looks at her suspiciously...

kashish:..yeh gari apki hai?
piyush:..kashish, rehne do na
kashish:..tum chup raho (she tells piyush)..jee to yeh gari apki hai....
sujal:.jee...meri hi hai
kashish:....oh i see (she smiles at piyush and picks up a stone from near by....goes infront of the car and smashes the front window)......
piyush:...satya nas!!!
sujal (gets shocked)....what the bloody......yeh yeh kya tareeka hai....do i know you...?....apne meri gari keh saath (he touches the broken glass while kashish smiles).........
kashish:..oh..i am sorry........waise gari dekh keh lagta hai keh aap kahte peete khandaan se hain........to khudhi jur wa leejiye ga yeh sheesha.........
sujal looks at her with anger......
kashish:...par yeh lein......(she hands him the 100 rupee note).....yeh mechanic ko tip mein dene ke kaam ayega......(she leaves after saying this and shows attitude)

sujal: (after she leave to piyush)...yeh khud ko samjhti kya hai....mental hospital se ayi hai kya?....
piyush:..woh...i am sorry on her behalf likin abhi subah apne jo uske saath kiya ussi ka ghusa usne is gari pe nikal diya.....
sujal:...mein ne?....(hez shocked...)...mein ne kye kiya.....
but before piyush could say something ek awaaz ati hai
voice:...big b.....papers mile kya?
sujal looks on his side aur wahan se ek aur dashing young man ata hai towards sujal....
voice:...kya huwa.....mein ne pucha papers mil gaye hain to chabi de dein...i have to go.....

sujal:...o...to yeh tumhari har kat hai
voice:..meri?
sujal: (hands him the mote)....subah tumhari is tip ki recipt meri gari ki front window peh chap gayi hai woh!....kitni dafa kaha hai rishi.....to stay in control.....ab bhukto....meri gari ke sheeshe theek kar wa ke office mein lana.....and you better!

o to yeh rishi tha , jisne subah kashish keh saath....oh ho....bechara sujal....muft mein saza ka haqdar huwa........(yeh mein nahi..piyush soch raha hai....who was listening to both the brothers)

piyush:...i am really sorry...woh kashsih...ghuse mein....
sujal:...its ok...i guess unko galat fehmi hui hogi....khair, itna ghusa bhi acha nahi hota....(sujal begins to leave when piyush asks his name)

sujal:...i'm sujal....sujal garewal....(he hands him a business card)......nice meeting you!......(sujal leaves in another car that he had come in.........ok so huwa yeh keh rishi subah sujal ki gari mein agaya, jabke sujal ki kuch important files gari mein hi reh gayi.....for which sujal had to come to rishi's college.......par yahan files to mili saath hi saath.......kashish bhi.............ab kya yeh mulaqat akhri thi ya ......abhi sirf shuruwat hui thi......hmmmmm.......)

sujal and piyush both leave, while rishi looks at the glass!

a girl comes upto him:...hi rishiiii!.....aaj raat kya kar rahe ho....?
rishi:...aaj raat?...(he looks at her and then at the broken window)....kisi se hisaab pura karna hai..........

ok...guys do comment plz.....hope you liked it and hope it wasnt too pakao.....anywayz...coming up sujal aur kashish ki meeting......lets see if it turns out to be any good!..........take care

farah!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks Farah...thank God..U posted a fan fic!! Love yaa..and keep up the gud work..I havent read the story yet.aaaraam se parhongii..But im sure..it wud b great!! Tc..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great story!!!!! 👏
I absolutely love it 😳
continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank you shehzadi...is you name areej??...hehe sara shukar hai mil gayi tumhe link.... 😆

ok so here is pyaar keh rang part 3

sujal and piyush leave while rishi tells his girl that he has to fix someone up!....hmmmmmm!

kashish goes to her room and opens up her diary again......and writes
"finally us se badla le hi liya....samjhta kya tha woh khud ko, mein koi aisi waise larki to nahi.....kahin mein kuch zaida to nahi..........nahi nahi....jo bhi kiya sahi kiya.....he deserved it"....just them therez a knock on the door

kashish goes and opens it....its piyush.....(piyush in girls hostel.....yaar yeh kaise ho sakta hai.........lol......well, idhar piyush keh pass special permission hai....heheheh)....
kashsih:...tum?....ab yahan kyun agaye....koi larki nahi mili (sarcastically)
piyush:....tum ho na...kafi ho.......aur khud ko tum samajhti kya ho, na dayen dekha na bayen ja keh us bechare aadmi ki gari ka sheesha tor diya.....

kashish:..dont you call him bechara piyush.....
piyush:..becahre ko bechara na kahon to kya kahon...yeh to uski sharafat thi jo usne tumhe wahan se janne diya warna woh tum peh........
kashish:...muj peh kya.....(she gets worried)
piyush:..woh tumpe.....case kar sakta tha, police ko bula sakta tha......tumhe court le ja sakta tha, accusing you of harrasing him.....
kashish:...are you nuts?...mein usse harras kar rahi thi?
piyush:...well....lag to kuch aisa hi raha tha.......
kashish:....by the way tum uski itni side kyun le rahe ho.....you're my friend na.....aur usne jo mere saath kiya woh tumhe yaad nahi
piyush:...kaise yaad rehta....jab usne kuch kiya hi nahi
kashish:WHAT?....matlab?
piyush:...matalb subah wali harkat usne nahi uske bhai ne ki thi.........rishi.......naam to suna hi hoga......
kashish:...ahn.....shayad...........likin phir....usne yeh kyun kaha keh gari uski hai?
piyush:...gari to ussi ki thi, magar subah rishi lek keh aya tha.....woh to bus apni luch files lene aya tha aur tumne uske saath..........(he shakes his head and goes and stands near the window)
kashish:(feels guilty)...matlab....mein ne khamkha mein usse.............piyush....ab kya karun.....
piyush:....yeh lo..(he hands her a card.......)...uska address hai, phone number bhi hai.....jane ki himaat na ho to phone peh sorry keh do.......
kashish:...(takes the card still feeling bad).....mein bhi pagal hon...hamesha bina soche samjhe faisle kar leti hon aur phir baad mein..........oh god, bechare ka nuksaan kara diya........(she flips the card and reads)......sujal garewal..............(she gets a happy feeling.......).....piyush.. phone hi kar deti hon.
piyush:..kyun us waqt to bare josh keh saath badla lene gayi thi, ab samna karne mein sharam arahi hai
kashish:......(thinks)....tum chalo ge kal mere saath?
piyush:....well....kal mushkil ho jayega.......
kashish:...kyun?
piyush:.....kal pooja keh saath mein.........you know.....lunch, shoping, dinner, beach and ........
kashish:..bus bus theek hai....muje samajh agayi...........mein khudhi chali jaongi!
piyush:...great...
kashish:..hmmmm
piyush:...tum nahi.......woh larki....woh dekho....(he ponts out of the window)
kashish:....piyush......get out ok........(she pushes him out......aur waapis dairy ki taraf)
...."mein usse galat samajh behti........shayad woh waisa nahi jaisa mein ne socha tha.........kal milne jaongi.......hope he forgives me.......chalo abhi chalti hon......waise haan.....jo bhi ho naam acha hai...........Sujal!!!!!!!!!!!!"..........

plz comments needed ppl....

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