'meri nazar mein raho', as of now, it's done - Page 24

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey my papers are finallie over so here is the new update...sorrie its short..

Angad lay in bed but as soon as he closed his eyes, her tear-stained face kept popping up in front of him...ARGH!this girl is driving me insane, he muttered to himself but then again he could not decipher as to why he cared about her.

Why did he feel sad when she was sad and why did her smile bring one to his face? Clearly I'm going crazy he conceded and shut his eyes firmly, blocking out images of Kripa...for the time being.

The nex day Angad came down the stairs his eyes bloodshot due to the lack of sleep to find Kripa standing in the kitchen making breakfast. The smell of parathas wafted through the air in his direction and he made a beeline for the table

Angad: Yum aloo ke parathay!!My favourite. Did you make these? Kripa nodded, a small smile on her lips as she watched him tuck in, attacking the food like a starving man. He finally finished the last morsel and got upto leave for college.

Kripa: Woh..em. she began but could not get the words out. Angad watched the inner battle and came close to her.

Angad: Kya hua(what happened)?he questioned softly.

Kripa: I've decided to go to the university today, she said.

This admittance brought forth both surprise and a surge of pride on Angad's part. He was surprised to see her bravery for she had not been to university since the incident and was proud of the way she had decided to deal with the matter rather than shy away from the matter. He smiled at her encouragingly.

Kripa: I was wondering if you could give me a ride to the university, just for the day she added quickly, unsure about his response.

Angad: Yea bhi koi poochnay ki baat hai? Aaj say tum roz meray saath he aao jao gi.(You don't even have to ask, from today onwards you will always come and go with me)

Kripa: Nahi.. I dont mean to burden you, its just that...i dont want to go alone..her words faltered but Angad caught the meaning. He merely smiled at her at tucked her arm through his, an act which surprised both Kripa and himself.

Angad:(thinking) Why did i just do that? He surprised himself further when he opened the door open for her but was rewarded by a sweet smile from Kripa.

He zoomed away and the two reached uni in a matter of minutes, parking the car, Angad waited for Kripa to collect her things and join him. Unlike other days he did not wait to flirt around with the girls who usually surrounded him, instead, he guided Kripa through the throng of people around, pausing when he reached his friends.

To say Josh and the rest were surprised to see Kripa with Angad was an understatement. Mishti, Prithvi and Josh stood there staring at the two confused about this apparent change in the two. Kripa smiled at them and bid them hello which immediately brought forth a smile on Prithvi and Josh's face. There was something so endearing about her that the two couldn't help but like her and felt guilty for their part in all that had happened.

Josh: Hey Kripa! How's it going?

Kripa: good! She sat down next to Mishti who gave her a brief hug and a smile. Kripa sat there chatting with the others while Angad watched her. He could not believe she how easily she made friends and the level of comfort she had achieved in such a short time. Kripa stood up to go to class with Mishti, leaving Angad and the guys there.

Angad: All right first things first..i want someone to be with Kripa at all times for a week or so till she gains back her confidence. Secondly I told her we're going clubbing tonight so be there around 10 and while we are there, stick to her like a shadow.

Josh: You like her don't you man?

Angad: No I'm just concerned about her wellbeing…Why did this seem like a lie to him?
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesum part 👏 😃
poor guy is so confused,he is not realising but he has already fallen for her.chooooo sweet 😳.loved it when angad was being protective for kripa.hope he gets to know that kripa didn't do anything and she is the girl,who he was suppose to marry.would love to see a jealous and possessive side of angad 😉 in the club.u r doing a doing a wonderful job 👏 👏 .keep it up.eagerly waiting for next part.plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Kripa stepped out of class with Mishti by her side. the whole day, she had been surrounded by someone or the other but mostly Mishti with whom she had become good friends. Even now as she turned a corner, she felt rather than saw Angad's presence as he fell into step besides her. The two walked silently to their Business class where Angad departed with a pat on her shoulder. Kripa stared at his retreating back. During the past few days, she had grown to respect him. He was so very different from what met the eye.

She saw him take a seat besides a curvy blonde and flash his charming smile at her. She grinned, something never change. Now the knowledge that he was her bethroted did not trouble her. she shook her head and turned away smiling away and the smile lingered as she made her way to the cafeteria to Mishti. Mishti grtabbed her arm and made her sit.

Mishti, so Kripa what are you waring to the disc tonight? she asked excitedly. If there was one thing Mishti loved more than shopping it was partying. She launced into a very detailed explanation of her dress and shook her head in horror when kripa informed her she would be wearing a simple jeans and a skirt.

Mishti, But you can't! Why don't you wear a dress.
Kripa, because I don't have one! This brought forth another exclamation of horror as Mishti literally steamrolled Kripa to the mall after telling Angad to pick them up at night. A reluctant Kripa followed an impatient Mishti to the parking lot and the two departed to the mall. Once there, Mishti hopped from one store to another buying up a storm with Angad's credit card despite kripa's protest.

Later that day, Kripa sat in mishti's room, unable to belive that the woman looking back in the mirror was herself. She touched her reflection to make sure the girl looking back was herself and what a change. The normally reserved Kripa was wearing a low black halter dress that came to her knees, her hair blow dried, curling at the base giving her a vurnerable look. Giving herself one final look in the mirror, she made her way downstairs slowly where Angad, Josh and Prithvi were already assembled.

Kripa was so intent on making sure that she did not trip over because of the heels she was wearing that she failed to note the change in the volume level as it decreased rapidly. Infact Josh Angad and Prithvi were at a loss. There were no words to describe the vision of purity and loveliness in front of them. Kripa looked up to find all the gaping at her. She looked back unsure.

Kripa, er..hum chalein? she asked cautiously. Slowly the three snapped out of their dreamland and nodded. Josh approached Kripa gallantly and offered her his arm which she gladly accepted which left Angad fuming with anger. He offered his arm to Mishti and the five of them made their way outside and went to the club.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome part.
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part 👏 👏
looks like someone is jealous 😉
plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey great part....plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey!

wow. too good. i cant wait for more.

please continue sooon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi!!! i just read ur whole ff!!! n i gotta say.. its fabulous!!!! plz continue sooooon!!!!!! ~niti~
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry wrong post😳
Edited by mintfresh - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey i've just read the whole of ur ff... its reli good... i reli love ur writing style...
omg i felt reli bad 4 kripa... tht prof. lukas ..er can't remember his name..lol 😆 ... i hated him.. but i was reli glad angad saved her...

things r spicing up a bit now... hopefully angad wud start getting attracted 2 her as shr has kinda changed in the last part... i hope thrz some close AK moments in the nxt part-- in the club...

hmmm... u hvnt continued since a few months.. plz cntinue soon i cant wait 2 read the nxt part...

xx

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