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Posted: 13 years ago
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yaar... every story has to make with l'll twists and turns. ab agar sidhe abhay aur piya ko mila diya to kya mazza.. let the love blossom between them.. n triangles always makes an historical love.. so wait n let the story go.. i will try to make my full effort to make this love story magical..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KITTY&ME

<font color="#ff00ff" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3">yaar... every story has to make with l'll twists and turns. ab agar sidhe abhay aur piya ko mila diya to kya mazza.. let the love blossom between them.. n triangles always makes an historical love.. so wait n let the story go.. i will try to make my full effort to make this love story magical..</font>


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YES agree :-) dear:-):-) Waiting for the update:-):-) when will u update dear??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Eleventh episode

Abhay is standing in front of enterance door. And Tamanna is coming from the door with her green dress. And she is looking awesome. Abhay is looking at her. Abhay' is thinking itni der kahan kar di? Mrs. Aggarwal comes to him and asks.

Mrs. Aggarwal: Abhay tumhara bronge kahan hai?

Abhay: wo mami mera bronze.. 😕(Supriya looks at the gate and moves to Isha)

Mrs. Aggarwal: oh Mrs. Re... Where were you? And they walk aside and talking

Abhay: (to Tamanna) tumne bahut der kar di.

Tamanna: Abhay main bas.😕

(before she could say something.. Piya and Neha come there)

Piyali: Abhay, ye kaun hai?

Neha: ye hamari sabse pyari dost hai. Tamanna. And Tamanna, ye hai piyali Chandra. Hamari nayi dost.😊

Piyali: hi… Neha ne abtak tumhare bare me bahut sari bate batayi. And you are really very sweet and good looking. Glad to meet you.😊


Tamanna: (with a smile) same here.

😃

(Abhay stands aside.)😔

Piyali: I wud like to join you guys. Main yaha is sehar me nayi hu and I don't know anyone or anything here. So.. Will you guys help me?

Tamanna: of course we will love to… (Looks at abhay and abhay is looking at her as if he is angry)

Piyali: thanks tamanna.

Tamanna: tammy. Mere saare dost mujhe tammy keh kar bulate hain.

Piyali: oh... Then you should also call me piya.

Tamanna: (with smile) ohk...

Neha: achcha bhai ab tum dono me dosti ho gayi to mujhe bhula diya.


Piyali and tamanna both smile.

Tamanna: ofcourse not dear. (Abhay lefts and tamanna is worried now)

Tamanna: excuse me. (And she looks for abhay)

Arjun and vivek are having softdrinks.

Vivek: dude.. kya boring part hai.

Arjun: seriously yaar. Its like hum yahan kisi party meeting me aaye hain. No dance no fun. Girls bhi bhao nahi de rahi hai.(piyali comes to them)

Piyali: hi again.

Arjun: hi so tumhari dosti ho gay neha, abhay and tamanna se. we sab kahan hai?

Piyali: neha is busy with her school friends and abhay pata nahi kahan gaya aur tammy bhiuske piche gayi.

Arjun: neha to aisi hi hai and abhay aur tamanna hamesha sath hi rehte hai.

Vivek: so u r alone. Wud u like to have dinner with us.

Piyali: ya sure y not?

{And they left for dionner}

Mrs. Aggarwal, Mrs.. Chandra and Mrs. Re conversation with having their dinner plates.

Mrs. Re: Mrs. Aggarwal, ab aapko kya batau. In bastiyo me Jane par mujhe kitna bura lagta hai. Maine in logo ko kitni bar kaha safai par dhyaan de. Par ye log mante hi nahi. Ab iss hafte 15 logo ko malaria ho gaya.

Mrs. Chandra: owe, that's so bad. Poor people. Par we sunte kyun nahi?

Mrs. Re: hmm.. kai baar maine unhe pani saaf rakhne ke liye kaha aur waha pani jamne se rokne ke liye kaha.. par ye log.

Mrs. Aggarwal: main virendra se baat karungi to take care of it. 15 log malaria ke chapet mein. Uff..

Mrs. Chandra: Mrs. Re, aap in garib logo ke liye kitna sochti hain. Its really very nice of you. Aap apna time in garib bechare logo ke beech spend karti hain.

Mrs. Re: priya ji, ye to mera kaam hai. In garib logo ki madad karna, aur is samaz me faili buraiyo ko khatam karna. I am a social worker. Aur fir Mrs. Aggarwal bhi hamari bahut madad karti hai. She is very kind woman.

Mrs. Aggarwal: Owe Isha, aap to mujhe sharminda kar rahi hai. Hum to janta ke sewak hain. Infact mujhe to aapko thanks kehna chahiye. Aakhir, in logo ki help karne me aap hamari help karti hain.

Mrs. Chandra: Mrs. Re. hum bhi aap dono ke sath in logo ke liye kuch karna chahte hain.

Mrs. Aggarwal: ya sure Mrs. Chandra. Ye toh bahut achchi baat hogi hamare liye.

Mrs. Chandra: main un bastiyo me to nahi ja sakti par financially aapki har madad karneke liye taiyaar hu.

Mrs. Re: that would be a lot for us.

Piyali and vivek are talking with dinner plates in their hands.

Piyali: so tumhe padai se jyada sports me interest hai.

Vivek: ya.. I love to play cricket. Infact I was the team captain of our school.

I won lots of matches.

Piyali: oh really that's good.


Arjun: and piya, tumhe kis cheez me me interest hai?

Piyali: mujhe.. I love dancing. And m a trained dancer.

Arjun: oh that's good. Ab hamare group me do dancers ho jayengi.

Piyali: do dancers (with confusion and eager to know)

Vivek: tamanna is very good Indian dancer. Even she won lots of prizes.

Piyali: ok... Abhay intelligent hai, tammy is good dancer, arjun is a good singer, um ek achche player ho what about neha…?

Vivek: neha… usko kuch nahi aata… siwaye dusro ko pareshaan karne ke…

Piyali: (smiles)


Arjun: Shut up vivek… piya, neha is a wonderful painter. You should have a look on that.

Piyali: It's glad to know that you all are so talented. By the way.. Abhay and tamanna kahan gaye?

(Abhay is angry with Tamanna. And Tamanna usko manane ki koshish kar rahi hai... Abhay balcony me khada hai aur Tamanna uske pass aati hai.)

Tamanna: Abhay, I know am late par hamari gadi bich me kharab ho gayi thi. We were in trouble. Aur driver ne bhi use repair karne me der laga di.

Abhay: Sshhh… (Abhay uske hotho ke pas apna index finger rakhta hai) tammy, tum aaj bahut sunder lag rahi ho.

Tamanna: matlab tum naraz nahi ho?

Abhay: I was worried but not angry. Tumhari maujudgi mere liye bahut mayne rakhti hai.

Tamanna: Abhay, ye tum kya keh rahe ho?

Abhay: (uska hath apne hath me lete hue) tammy, main ye nahi kahunga that m in love with you, but our relation is not love but not of friendship too. Ye dosti se bahut aage bad chukka hai. And I really like you. Tum mere pas nahi hoti to mujhe kuch bhi accha nahi lagta.

(And he hugs her)

End of eleventh episode

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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
nice update ... oh abhiya ki luv story se pehle hi abhita( abhay -tammy ki story star ho gyi ...😲
Edited by hema_rawat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hema_rawat

nice update ... oh abhiya ki luv story se pehle hi abhita( abhay -tammy ki story star ho gyi ...😲


abhay said ki dosti se aage bad gayi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
nice update...but yeh kya abhay aur tammyyy😭 i want abhiya yar...make somthg special 4 abhiya yar
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
i knw love triangle tammy love abhay i understand tht but yyy abhay love tammy yar...now thy liked them than wht abt my piyaaa...i know its just a start of abhiya loce story i will wait 4 it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AMAGING UPDATE DEAR:-):-) but ye Abhay ko kya ho gaya???
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
nyc ..
kya yaha abhay n tamanna ki lovestory start ho rahe hai...
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tewelve episode

Neha is walking n bumps to a guy.

Neha: u stupid cant…(surprise) jay tum.. Australiya se kab aaye?

Jay: Australia nahi hotchicks austriya.. 2 days back..

Neha: ok whatever.. lekin bataya q nahi.. ek call kar dete..

Jay: feeling very tired.. u know.. these jetway.. yaha chill karne aaya tha par ye party bhi kitni boring hai.. no music dj nothing.. L

Neha: don worry.. music aur dj ka bandobast to ho jayega.. bas hamare dude ko aaane do.. tabtak tumhe hamare group k new member se milati hu.

Jay: new member?

Neha: off oh aao toh

(and she drags him to arjun vivek n piyali)

Neha: inse milo ye hai hamari team ki new gangster, Piyali Chandra. N ye hai hamara sabse shararati Jayraj Vardhan.

Jay: hi miss Piyali..

Piya: hi n Jayraj.. u can call me Piya..

Jay: n miss Piya u can call me Jay. Nyc to meet u. (to Vivek) abtak to hamari team me sirf 2 hi hotchics the but aaj ek nayi runak shamil ho gaye. waise Tammy aur abhay kaha gaye?

Arjun: yaar aur kaha sath me honge kahin..

(In between, neha holds d mike n say)

Neha: guys.. now dis boreness has come to a l'll end.. pls put ur hands 2gether for our rocking dj,.. DJ Raunak..

Dj raunak: Guys.. kaise ho aapsab.. (smiles)

Crowed: yoo

Dj raunak: main yaha Aligarh se sirf aur sirf aap sabke liye aaya hu.. Aur aaplog meri beats par jhoom uthenge aisi main ummeed karta hu.. So now its time to break ur knots and rock the floor.. aur suruaat karte hain mere sabse popular track se..

Mr. aggarwal: chaliye ab bachcho ke beech humara kya kaam.. ab ye masti karenge.. hume ab garden me chalna chahiye..

Mrs. Chandra: Ya dats right.. ab bachcho ki bheed me hum kyu rahe..

(And they moves to garden, Mr. Malay looks at kids enjoying and moves with company)

Now this is all time for youngsters n teenagers.. dj floor is all set and dj raunak starts what the f.. (soundtrack)


Everybody is enjoying and Abhay and tamanna coming down with a big smile on their face. Neha looks at them n c too smiles.


Piya feels l'll jealous but she gets confused why she is feeling like this. Abhay n Tammy comes to dance floor..


Arjun asks Neha for dance n she goes with him.. n Piya is l'll aukward for her feeling. Tamanna n Abhay are enjoying their dance.


Vivek is busy with a girl.

Abhay: u r looking gorgeous Tammy..

Tamanna: (with blushing smile) Abhay, tumhari choice sach me bahut achchi he..

Abhay: really..

Tamanna: (blushes)


Here Jay is also feeling bore... But when she saw Piya alone.. he went to her..

Jay: may I have the pleasure of dance with you?

Piya: (a look to Abhay n Tammy dancing) ya sure n dey start dance..

Jay n Piya comes to dj floor to dance..


(now song is changed n tum mile song..)

Abhay looks Piya n he gets l'll auckwardness but he ignores n gets busy with Tammy) (Arjun comes and asks Tammy to dance with him)(Tammy and Abhay agrees n dey dance)(Abhay moves)


End of Twelve Episode

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