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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
wowww
u updated
i was waiting badly for it
do update d 2nd part soon
amazed
specially d last part
sooo cuteee
thankx for d pm
loved it
byeee
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
awww arnav & khushi's nephew... shooo cute!!
loved da ss shalu!!!

belated christmas wishes & happy boxing day 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Lovely story. I like your writing! Please PM me is it is possible!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
REPLIES BEFORE CHAPTER 1:

@sarach: thank you for ur excitement! 😳
@priya_luna: PRIYA! yes! an xmas story! I LOVE XMAS! 😳
@devishree: DEVS, your constant support keeps me going on, gal! 🤗 i thank you for that! 😳
@nyxx: Dee, your excitement and ur lovely reviews have become like my daily supplement tablets! so essential for me to continue writing! 😳 thank you for that!
@Krishnaluv94: really? you love it? HAHAHA! awesome! i like it too! 😃 it's a superr fun song! 😳
@Arhi-Sarun: thank you! 😳 i hope you liked the prologue! 😳
@LyssaPie: thank you! yes, i'll PM you everytime i update! 😳
@minimuffin86: thank you my munching buddy! 😃
@Rozy77 : thank you so much!! i'm pretty excited for this one too! 😃
@shybabe : thank you shy!
@Bloem123 : i shall! promise!
@ ..-Sanzz-.. : okay! i hope you'll like surprises!
@AquaBluez17 : thank you mya! :D
@littlemoi : thank you for ur support!
@meenaluma, angelic shaz, mollycoddle, dbr_kmichi, preethi12345, -Ridzzi-, thecraze92, Vampire.wingz: THANK YOU ALL FOR THE LOVELY REVIEWS AND THE EXCITEMENT! KEEPS ME EXCITED! 😆
@-Murphy369-, PrasRas, shobrakapooor, srahs: thank you! yes, i shall update everyday, regualrly! 😳
@aashizin, pinkpearlz, ipkkndank: thank you! yes, i will be updating everyday, so no worries there! 😳


@ALL: you see how i grew lazy by the time i replied to the first 10 people? 🤣 sorry. 😳 that's me. LAZY LIKE CRAZY!
Edited by sharneil92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Replies AFTER Chapter 1.

Originally posted by: nayika

Awww! This was sooo cute!

Loved how Khushi remembered all the things that happened in the past and Arnav saying 'our nephew'.

Looking forward to the next parts already :D


thank you shuheda! next part, i have a hunch, you'll love it! 😉

Originally posted by: mademoiselle927

Yay! You've updated!


Payal and Akash had a baby? Woah! That was a really nice surprise! So, I absolutely loved how Arnav and Khushi were so motherly - fatherly to the baby! And how Arnav gave the news to her! Awww!

Oh, and the explanations you give to your titles and all, that's damn cool too!

Can't wait for you to update tomorrow! Don't be lazy about it! 😉


yup! you'll get explanations everytime too! 😳 it's my job to reveal the secret nah? 😆 and i promise, i am not being lazy! 😆 AND THANK YOU! 😃

Originally posted by: AquaBluez17

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wow Shalu!! It was amazing!! Great job!! I can't wait for day 2 already!! yay!! Well we all know when day 2 is coming!!

Loved the name of the child! You are so good at this Shalu!!😃


mya! you're so nice! 😳 yes, i love the name too! ARNAV! AAAHH!!! 😆


thank you!

Originally posted by: dumas

so sweet love how khushi told him about happy ji sorry for that guy so cute when she said our nephew loved it can't wait for day 2 loved it thanks for the pm


haha! thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: harsh42

shalu!! i can't type longer co?ments through my cell phone! gimme like 12 more hrs.. n i'll give u a looong comment!! =D


LOLOLOLOLOL!!! hahahaha!!! omg! harshita! THAT JUST MADE ME FALL OFF MY BED ALONG WITH MY 2 LAYERS OF QUILTS!!!😆

Originally posted by: shobrakapooor

so sweet! awesme strt! lovd it!


thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: reyabear

Shaluuu! That was too good! Khushi calling him Arnav and then Arnav saying 'our' nephew. It was all so adorable! Can't wait for the next part! :DD


shreya!!! THANK YOU MY JAANUU!! 😳 next part would be even mushier! well, muchy according to my standards anyway! :P

Originally posted by: aashizin

owww dear awesome upd seriously loved it it was cute


thank you!

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

i have butterflys in my stomach that was so cute and fizzy awesome!!!


i loved everything about it and the last para had me swooning!!!
this is awesome
your awesome
we're awesome :D


Munching on Cotton Books iBB!!


HAHAHAHA!!! you're awesome my friend, SAHAR! 😳

Originally posted by: Fammakhan1

Great Update hun..cant wait for moree

Do add me to ur pm List.. X


thank you! i will!

Originally posted by: Pearl_mystic

Very nice start...

Waiting for the next update...!


Thank you!

Originally posted by: moon_mine

hey pls pm me the nxt time u update!!!!


thank you! i shall!

Originally posted by: devishree

⭐️shalz it was gr8 superb and the title line and its explanation was fabulous ..i loved the whole update and u have written beautifully and fantastic and fabulous uncle and chirpy and bubbly aunt and a handsome lad nephew the trio rocks 🥳

this is for u
cute little nephew arnav (yishu)


thank you! thank you! thank you! and the boy was lovelyyy!!! so cute!! 😆

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Awesome update! Loved it! Great explanation! Can't wait for day two!


thank you! 😳 day 2 would be better! 😳


i shall!

Originally posted by: SanayaBarun4eva

extra-ordinarily beautiful OS.. enjoyed it thoroughly.. cant wait for next update..


thank youuu!!! i'm glad it pleased you!

Originally posted by: sparikh

cute beginning - 1st Day of Xmas!


-Sona


thank you sona! 😳

Originally posted by: shybabe

loved it my dear...thank you😉


thank you! and you are welcome! 😆

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Amazing very nice start!


thank you!

Originally posted by: Harshiti4Lyf

That was sooo cute!!!!! Omg loved it dear:)


thank you!! means a LOT coming from you!! 😃

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

awww sooo cuteee loved it!!


thank you!

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

how cute!!😊
liked it a lot..!
"our nephew"...so nice😊
continue soon😊


thank you!!!

Originally posted by: littlemoi

omg!! wht a start!! i loved it!! thanks a ton for the pm!!


thank you! and no problem!

Originally posted by: harsh42

I'm posting a new comment!! 😆

Wow, Shalu!!! It was too good!!! 👏 ⭐️

When Khushi explained abut Happyji telling her call the Raizadas, and when she explained it to Arnav, all Arnav could catch was "Happyji"!! I loved the way he asked, who's Happyji?!! And trust Khushi to explain who Happyji was. In detail!!! 😆

And aww. . . . Arnav likes his nick name?!! 😍

And especially loved the moment they shared with Arnav Jr. in Arnav's arms. . . . . 😍😍😍😍

Hope they'll have an ACTUAL Arnav Jr. in Khushi's arms by next year. In your SS, that is!!! 😆 😉


hahaha!!! YOUR'E BACK! 😆 thank you soo much harshita! this mushy mushy chapter was NOTHING compared to what is about to come! 😉 and yea.. an actual Arnav Jr would be adorable wouldn't he? 😳

Originally posted by: Vampire.wingz

Lovely Update I love this ! plz send PMS when u update the other part !


thank you! i shall!

Originally posted by: Nici0306

it is so cute.. please add me in your pm list..


thank you! i will!

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

The best part was Arnav saying "Our Nephew"


i know! WHICH IS WHY I SAVE THE BEST FOR THE LAST! 😉

Originally posted by: nyxx

A wonderful start for sure...and "our nephew"..AWWH! Love these two lotss!

Im eagerly waiting for the rest =) Continue asap girlll!!!


thank you dee!! yes.. in an HOUR OR SO! 😃

Originally posted by: roshnidiya

wowww

u updated
i was waiting badly for it
do update d 2nd part soon
amazed
specially d last part
sooo cuteee
thankx for d pm
loved it
byeee


thank you! i shall update pretty soon too!


thank you!


thank youu!

Originally posted by: Kaur89

Lovely story. I like your writing! Please PM me is it is possible!


thank you! i shall! 😳
Edited by sharneil92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
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ATLAST man...
u updated...
its MIND BLOWING!!!!!!!!

wow!!!!! i love this ARNAV of urs sooo much hun...
MAMIJI surprised me...
n kushi n her "AAKRAMAN!!!!" made me like ROFL...
poor aranv...got the blow of a bag from the woman he's abt to propose...
hahahaaa...

"Khushi Kumari Gupta, the one name that created havoc in me, body and soul, from the very beginning. Granted none of our initial meetings, heck most of our meetings started on the wrong foot, but that did not deter this heart," he said, pointing at his chest, "This stone cold heart from melting in your warm embrace. You are the only person that would dare to talk back to me, and that I like. Well, even NK does, but I really like him too. I just pretend to hate him anyways. You are the only person, who could ever dare to stand right next to me when the whole world does not dare to do, and for that, I thank you, because you Devi Maiya knows how much your presence is needed for this cold-hearted monster. I never thought this would happen, especially after I so cruelly wronged Lavanya a year back, that I would see this day ever again. But here I am. I guess your Devi Maiya has been kind to me. Especially after yesterday at the hospital, the epiphany that I am about to say could not have been stronger and truer than it is. Khushi Kumari Gupta, the Jalebi Bai, MY dearest Jalebi Bai, MY dearest Halwai, MY dearest and the most ajeeb girl, please do me the honour of accepting my hand in marriage, and become my wife." He kneeled on the floor, maintaining his intense gaze on her, and opening a tiny velvet box

the most beautiful proposal...whoa...
ON CLOUD NINE...hope sumthing like this happens on show

Khushi looked back at him, at the end of his proposal in a way that surprised him. He expected her to either,

1. Cry.

2. Open her mouth in shock.

3. Jump up and down, bouncing her pom-poms as well in happiness.

But he never expected her to stand there with a loving smiled etched upon her, then walk up to him, pull him up from the floor back to his original height, grab his waist from one hand and a bunch of hair on the back of his head with the other and kiss him to give him real fireworks everywhere in his body.


DAMN...!!!!
she surprised HIM n me too...
i love ur KUSHI KUMARI GUPTA alot...nt as much as arnav though

"I will marry you, you dumb Laad Governor," she said as she ruffled his hair affectionately.

that line was kinda cute...
AMAZING update...LOVED it alot shaaliii...
BEAUTIFUL...looking fwd to read more on cute little arnav soon...

nxt update btr be upto ur PAKKA WAALA PROMISE missy...
cant wait!!!!!! especially ur FF...
cant help bt wonder wats gonna be the nxt twist...
u always make me want more n more to read wen i actually have to wait awhile for ur updates...nt fair dearie...

luv u loads...
~~~~~sam

Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
⭐️shalz that was great and i dont have any words to describe ur writing iam shell shocked😲 because of ur awesome writing😳 .u have chose the perfect words and they are best to put into use 👏
amazing lines of love and i loved mamiji's moment and today really love her she is too good 😉
ur phrases matching with the 2 turtle doves are fabulous 😃...no need of proof reading it is all well said and written 👍🏼
sapphire stone and tiny diamond showing the purity of love and auspicious start of their love life ⭐️
thanks for the pm dear and waiting for the chapter 3 can't wait totally maddened by ur writing😛
here is the picture for u !!!!!!!!!

thats it from me bye
Edited by devishree - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Shalu! That was so good! You write so so so beautifully! And Arnav's proposal...hayeee *faints*
Loved it! :D
So excited for the next part!
Edited by reyabear - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
awesome update finally the laad governor proposed so sweet thanks for the pm can't wait for more love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
loved both the updates...waiting for the next part...

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