SS - 12 Days Of Christmas (COMPLETED. Chap 12 up!) - Page 10

Originally posted by: roshnidiya

CHAPTER 2 - On the second day of Christmas, my true love sent me two turtle doves.-----wow dis part touched my heart

i'm glad! 😳

"I'm so sorry bitiya, for being rude to you and your family all these years. I have no idea why I did what I did, but I'm sorry for it, I hope you'll find it in your heart to forgive me," whispered Mamiji, as she wiped away a lone tear from the corner of her eyes.

mamiji surprised khushi by dis dialogue n her actions n me too...i was like wat the...is it really her...too gud

yea, i wanted her to be good in this SS, thus the change!😳

i didnt get like wat she wrote a msg gave her to give anav...i guessed she asked arnav to propose her...dat was so sweet bt u didnt disclose wat was in dat note...anyways i m surprised by dis mamiji

you'll know soon enough! 😉

Ah! When this Laad Governor is there, then which other monster would be scarier, thought Khushi as she rolled her eyes and stomped off to the pool, ready to face the demon.

so cutee...khushi n her thoughts amaze me a lot...gud dat u could give dat flavour to her character.

aww! i'm so glad you think so! i wanted her to be her bubbly, over-dramatic, too-cute-to-be-true self! and i do tend to be as whacky as her sometimes... but not so constantly! 😆

dis 1 my god! touched my heart...hope he proposes me like dis...i mean so cuteee. dont worry khushi i wont take away ur laed governor...he is all urs...hehehe...bt awstuck by his proposal

sooo cuteee

HAHAHHA! i see, you're in the queue to grab arnav eh? no worries, the whole lot of us are! 😆

i mean u r amazing every ff, ss or os writers dont make it dis way...u did it...i was literally bored after reading all works which were all same bt u surprised me n also arnav by dis act of khushi...fab job...too gud for words...

thank you soo much! 😳 i am so happy you think that i bring in the element of surprise! really! and i'm happy you think so well of me! THANK YOUUU!!!

"Oh! That! I see," said Arnav, still not really understanding what she was saying, and pulled her into another kiss as he lifted a squealing Khushi Kumari Gupta off the floor and led her into his room so that he could properly satiate his thirst for a good kiss from this adorable woman he just proposed too.

sooo cute... n romantic...u no i was blushing badly after reading it.

hahaha!!! no worries, they DID NOT do what you are thinking! NAUGHTY GIRL!😆

usually i dont give such detal comments bt after reading dis part i couuldnt help bt comment...i only do after reading amazing updates.

aisa thankx for dis wonderful update toh banta ha bosss.

pl keep it up n do update part3 sooon.

i loved it as much as i could n enjoyed it too.

byeee

THANK YOU SO MUCH! may i know ur name please? i'm shalu btw! 🤗 that was one of the loveliest comments i have come across so far! 😳