Maan and Geet FF-Hameshaa **NOTE** - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
awesome update
This vikram is such a loser
Oh here she come
Love the precap
Cont soon
Luv
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Loved the starting...
please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Nice prologue n part.
Do add me in 4 prologue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
👏 Vickram spells trouble with capital T.
Oh how sweet Maan lost in Geet
waiting for maan to tease geet...
❤️ Frankie
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
awesome dear!!😃
loved it...😛
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Superb start dear...
I dont like Vikram at all...
Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
I hate vikram too... Inspite of dadi and adi telling about vikram why doesn't maan get it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
congrats on new FF...
prologue
Vikram seems to be the antagonist...
and Maan and Geet's rival...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
part 1
nice part...
so Geet is the dream girl of Maan...
both Dadi and Adi are not so in good opinion of Vikram...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Part 2

Maan kept looking at the girl who was standing in front of him.It was like his childhood dream had come true.The girl who used to come in his dreams is finally standing in front of him.He smiled looking at her and was lost in her beauty.Adi was puzzled that why Maan
wasn't answering the girl.Adi looked at Maan and at that girl.Adi was confused.
Girl:''Every college has a Principal and every Principal has an office...so May I know that where is the Principal Sharma's office?''
Adi:''Excuse me...pls take stairs...the office is at the left hand side on the second floor''
Girl:''Thank you'' she said and passed by Maan.He was still lost in her fragrance.Maan kept his mouth opened and Adi went to closed this mouth.
Adi:''You can close your mouth now...she is gone...where are you lost? Maan...Maan...you didn't answer the girl but at least answer me''
Maan:''This is a dream...it cant be true''
Adi:''It is true''
Maan:''No...it not''
Adi:''Yes...it is''
Maan:''No...it not''
Adi:''Yes...it is'' he pinch Maan hardly on his arm
Maan:''Ouch...What was that for?''
Adi:''I was tired answering you...Is she a dream? Is she a dream? Cant be true? Cant be true? so tiring questions and I have to answer them''
Maan:''Really...if she wasn't a dream then where has she gone to?''
Adi:''To Principal Sharma's office...
that the place the girl has gone to'' Maan and he smiled at each other.
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Principal Sharma:''Dear...your marks are very good that I am so proud that you selected my college to study in...In fact...its a matter of pride that you are the student of this college and I really hope that you will excel in this college'' Maan was looking at that girl from outside of the door but her back was facing him
Maan:''Cant see my dream face''
Girl:''Thank you so much Sir...I will do my best''
Principal Sharma:''You may contact me if you should have any inconvenience...now you may go and get your identity card ready...All the best dear''
Girl:''Thank you Sir'' she got up and left
Principal Sharma's office.Maan hid behind the pillar.
Maan:''
identity card'' he smiled.The girl was walking towards the office and saw the board that it was the identity card office.Maan saw her coming and signal to Adi ''She is coming...Ready Adi''
Adi:''Ready'' The girl knocked at the door.
Girl:''Excuse me...May I come in?''
Maan:''Come in'' He was wearing a wig and a beard to cover his face.
Girl:''Thank you'' and went to sit on the chair.Adi was sitting beside her.
Maan:''So are you married? young man''
Adi:''Not yet but if you have a girl on your mind...you can tell me''
Maan:''You think that I have open Shaddi.com here...you only answer me on those questions that are ask on the form...I have no time to talk nonsense''
Adi:''Okay Sir''
Maan:''Age?''
Adi:''55 years old''
Maan:''I was asking your age not your father's''
Adi:''22 years old''
Maan:''Okay...you may leave now...you can collect your ID card tml''
Adi:''Okay...but you didn't ask me about my hobbies?''
Maan:''Get out'' the girl was sitting there laughing ''May I have you form miss'' the girl passes the form to Maan ''Can I have you photographs pls'' the girl passes Maan her photo''You have only given me one photo...I need four photographs''
Girl:''What for?''
Maan:''One for the ID card...one for records...one for library card and one for me''
Girl:''For you?''
Maan:''I mean for the form'' she passes him 3 other photographs ''What is your Name?''
Girl:''Its written on the form''
Maan:''But I want to hear it from you''
Girl:''Geet Handa''
Maan:''Geet...Maan ki Geet''
Geet:''What?''
Maan:''Where do you live?''
Geet:''Chandni Chowk''
Maan:''Your age?...oh sorry...18 years old...perfect...are you married?''
Geet:''No''
Maan:''Are you engage with anyone?''
Geet:''No''
Maan:''Any boyfriends?''
Geet:''No...its is also a need for me to tell you''
Maan:''Rules of College...by the way...What are doing tonight?''
Geet:''I am going to a mela...Wait a min...Why would college care where am I going tonight? Who are you?'' She stood up and removed Maan's wig ''you''
Maan:''My name is Maan Singh Khurana...my friends call me Maan...Did you like it'' he said while he removed his fake beard
Geet:''N
o way'' and she came out of the office.
Maan:''Geet...Geet...listen to me'' he came running after her ''Geet'' he shouted.Geet turned and looked at Maan.He went near her and whisper into her ear ''You are Maan ki Geet'' and then he want to his friends .He took his guitar and sang



**pls listen to this song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E5GMzTHvDvI


After Maan had singed the song for Geet...he found her missing.
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Maan was sitting in Adi father's canteen waiting for Adi
Adi:''Your black coffee with one cube of sugar''
Maan:''Thanks Adi''
Adi:''She left...hasn't she...your dance and singing didn't stop her...waste of time...you should have just told her that you like her but no...you have to sing to her a song...
Neela Duppata ''
Maan:''No Adi...nothing was waste of time...today its mela and she will be going there...so will I''
Adi:''All the best'' Maan smiled.

Precap:''Maan and Geet at the mela
1st kiss




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Edited by KTPROCKS - 13 years ago

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