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mimi

@moon_mine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

loved it!!!!

too good...n a diff one!!!!

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shazeena

@angelic shaz

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

dat was superb!!!!!!!!!! loved it!!!!!

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Fab chapter Saie.

Beautifully written.

I love the chemistry between Arnav and Khushi...perfect.

Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks for the PM.

⭐️

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: devishree
ur update is like walking in the dream it was so cute and adorable i am loving it the writing is fantastic do continue the last line is so good and thanks for the pm dear
but they never let go of their intertwined fingers. She was his strength, he was her forte...
They were friends, companions, partners...
And they were more than lovers...
they are perfect soulmates i would rather say

Hey... Thank you...! Your comment was one of the best I have received till now... Thank you sooo much for liking the update!

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Angels11
Hey mystic this is so unlike ASR i mean him apologizing & being scared of Kushi. 😆 Feeling bad 4 Nani though!

Hi Angels...

I know, I don't know why but I always want ASR to be more human, than a rakshas! 😛 😆... Especially when he is gonna get married to her, he should get a bit scared of her na, I mean, alll husbands do that..!! 🤣... ASR hain toh kya hua, he has to be a joru-ka-gulaam in the end! 🤣🤣🤣

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Zeee
this is just so sad and so romantic. love their chemistry. sorry for the late comment. but remember i always comment on everything i get pm-ed so thank you.
xxx

No problem Zeee... As long as I get a nice and lovely comment from an amazing writer as you, I'm honoured! Thank you for liking my work dear... 😊

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Note...

Just a clarification from my side... This story is purely based on Arnav-Khushi and set at a few months after Shyam's revelation as Anjali's husband... There will be no NK in my story, not that I haven't liked the character, but given the background of my story, his character is not required... Sorry, if anyone expected him to be a part of my story...

Thank you all for the awesome response to my story... I had a great time reading all your comments...

Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Content Removed by the author for personal reasons. This FanFiction is discontinued. Readers, please take notice that all my work will be removed from the Forums - however, external links to the chapters, if any, will be provided.
Please contact me for further details and blog address. The blog will soon go private. Thank you for such a wonderful response and readership on India-Forums.

Edited by -.Pearl.- - 12 years ago

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

I know it's not much... The update hasn't exactly turned out the way I wanted do, very sorry for that... 😔... I'm actually feeling down, it may have reflected a bit in my writing... 😔 😔 😔 ... But I promise, pakka wala promise that I will try my best to make the next update as good as I can make it... 😊

By the way, guys, the proposal scene was something I wanted to write at any cost... I wanted the journey of Arnav-Khushi's marriage to kick off in a happy way, so I added it... I know this is not something Arnav would do, but somehow I just want this to happen...!!!! 😉

Please leave your valuable comment to cheer me up! 😊😊😊😊😊

Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

awesome update loved that arnav choose khushi was not expecting dumbo anjali to support her she will always choose that pervert snake the emotion were well written the feeling were well done perfectly written loved it thanks for the pm can't wait for the next update

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago