ss.love is beautiful last part 30 updt pg 46

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

wowww

part 12 was really gud i mean her realization was wat i wanted n her desire to confess him.

part 13 was dammm beautiful except d last part bt darkness in any love story is imp varna no fun

loved d way dey danced atlast happy after so many days of separation.

loved both d parts

i m planning to make a siggi for ur dis ss

bye

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devishree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

⭐️thanks for the pm and update siya..

i am gonna kill that evil shyam 😡

plzz continue soon

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Siva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Just now read all the parts

its nice & interesting.

Dialogues were really nice yaar 😊.

In some parts i felt really bad for Arnav coz he is constantly hurting himself 😭😭😭😭.I love Arnav so much . so pls dont make him cry.

Me goona kill tat stupid shyam 😡😡😡😡. why the hell he is doing like this.???.

last part OMg anjali&akash reaction towards Arshi was cute😃.

I Dont know want tat girl gng to do 😡. I want to c Kushi happy pls dont make her cry ???????

Pls continue soon

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arshiiasr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Thnxu so much for ur appreaciatn i wl try to write smthng intrestng in nxt part

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.Sandal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

fab itx getting amazing i am loving it

thankx for p

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

that bloody snake some needs to put a beat down on him awesome update thank you for the pm

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renee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

fab piece of work there siya...i read it at one go n loved it...😊

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Ohhh, Nooo The Girl Is Gonna Do Something :( 🥺

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Nice updates Siya!

Arhi dancing.. That is cute😛

Thanks for the PM!

One more thing - Could you please send the link in PM, as the FF is moved to FF section now??😊

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arshiiasr

@arshiiasr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

part 14

As they were dancing lost in each other arms everyone was watching them but as such as music stoped they were back from there dreamland to reality...Khushi felt ackward of there sitaution and left from there and took a drink from the waiter which was for arnav and drank and went outside and it was raining heavily arnav follwed her..they were wet and looking at each other khushi felt nervous seeing the way he was looking at her eyes full of love,passion desire...she tried to run he held her hand lovingly and pulles her towards him and went to a lonely place where no one can see them as she was loosing her control because of the drink...her hairs were all wet and arnav was gazing at her she as looking simply beautiful...they both were lost in each other eyes,khushi was feeling very shy and had her cheeks red and was blushing..he was standing in middle of the place arnav came closer and she moved backwards until she was backed against the wall.he cupped her face in his hands and she closed her eyes he forgot everything else and moved closer until there lips touch they felt an pass of electric current through there bodies arnav held her so close and khushi put her arms around his neck and he deepend the kiss they hearts were pounding against each other and they could clearly hear there heartbeats..they were kissing each other her hand went inside his thick hair as there is no tomorrow.. arnav broke the kiss and started putting soft kisses on her neck and gave a love bite,he again brushed his lips on her...he looked into her innocent eyes which were also looking at him...As arnav saw khushi was not feeling alright he just stopped and wanted to continue all this when she would equally agree as she was not in her senses so he picked up her up in his arms and took her to the car and called anjali to inform khushi parents that khushi will be staying with you as he will drop her to her place...

Arnav went to anjali place to drop khushi and anjali was shocked to see both of them wet and he took khushi to her bedroom and lied on her bed and went out from there as anjali came to khushi and saw she was shivering from cold she changed her clothes,when she touched her she was suffering from high fever...she gave her a blanket and tried to her level to decrease the level of temperature by giving her medicines on the other side arnav was also sneezing again and again her sister payal came and asked what happend are you alright she touched his forehead and said you are having temperature as she gave him the medicines and said him to sleep..

guyz i wil be finishing this soon in other few upadtes

Edited by siya03 - 13 years ago