IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :)

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suadvani

@suadvani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

OMG - loved it - thank you - I really loved the open ended ending.. :)

it was sad but happy too..

thank you for sharing your talent !

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Great ending, unfortunately this disease always takes the loved ones away. Death always comes. Sooner or later. This was beautifully written. And heartbreaking too. I like how you left it unsaid and undecided in the end. The end will come but it is left to the reader as to how that end will be and how painful it will be. Beautifully written as always. There is no escaping death with a disease like this and you have captured the helplessness and the inevitability of death as surely it will come for Khushi. All Arnav can do is watch it happen.Thank you for writing this. Great story.

KF

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renee

@renee27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

you are a fabulous writer hayley...n once again i will tell u to consider publishing your works...your FF tearing ourselves apart was soo good i dont have words to describe...and now this SS...hats off...i kinda liked it when u left it open ended...some will like a happy ending but is all about being realistic...we'll leave the dramas to the shows... 😊
the last few lines mirrored absolute brilliance...XO 👏

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deepa

@deeps_92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

fantastic...

u know wat this was the way i wanted it to end...

i dint want her to die or get cured suddenly...

the end was perfect...

i loved it...

thanks for writting such nice story...

pls keep writting

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

That was sooo Good, Hayles!! Great update!! Hope you're soon back wid some more of your awesome work :D

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

Touching.
I cried this time. Numb I felt.
Why do things like that ever happen?! :(

Your update had a striking resemblance to A Walk To Remember.
The list and all...(Just felt like saying)

But Im glad you ended it the way you did.
You know just left for the reader to decide...cause what I believe is that she lives for years with Arnav there by her side all along...if not happily ever after...it gives the reality touch to it!

I m waiting for another one now. Something happier this time...cause this left me feeling all sad :P

*Edit - Thank You so much for putting my name up there, Hayles.
It's the first time someone's done that.
It made me smile. Big. :)

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

Hi ccuteaangel! 😃

Recently I got a chance 2 read this SS. U hav done a gr8 job...for a few minutes I forgot dat it was a fiction, I won't lie dat I cried..but I did freeze with a heavy heart and I think dat is ur success..u made me live along with the characters...And the ending so apt! The most Realistic ending!

Loved it! Do PM me when u update, I hav sent buddy req 😊

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#448

There are some update that words fail. Words can't describe how beautifully you captured both of their emotions and brought them to life. It was like I was watching the scene unfold in front of me. The fact that you left the ending incomplete made your update all the more better. It's an open opportunity for anyone to create his/her own ending. Arhi's story in the ss is timeless and there couldn't have been a more appropriate ending. This update reduced me to tears, but al the while, I had a smile on my face. It was a poignant story that touched me and many of your other readers with it's wonderfully woven words. I think Arnav's thoughts at the end made everything so much better.
"He was going to hold on to the way he was feeling in that instance even though he knew there would come a time when he would have to let go. Let go of her and all the happiness and pain that came with her. But he would keep it all buried, deep in his heart and never let it fade, no matter how much of his heart she stole, he would always remember, because the memories of what only seemed like fleeting moments, were all he was going to have left one day..."

Thanks for writing this ss.

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mimi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#449

i jst loved it!!!!

bt leukemia diagnosed at an early stage can be cured...so i jst want u to gv another update...on hw they both overcame the disease!!!!!

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Sharmini Segari

@Chimpsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#450

What can I say? Holding On and Letting Go is a beautiful story... and you're a fantasic writer, Hayley 👍🏼

Every writer has her own style and yours is not only unique, but it stands out brilliantly!

It's obvious that you put a lot of effort into it, and you really love and cheerish what you write... one really has to fully appreciate their own work of art before anyone else does! 😃

A word is not the same with one writer as with another. One tears it from his guts. The other pulls it out of his overcoat pocket.

~Charles Peguy

You're remarkable in the way you put extra effort in setting the right mood for each part, and I must say that your choice of songs are always fantastic...👏

And now for my tribute to Holding On and Letting Go, hope you like it:

( Both parts from Arnav to Kushi)

If the rain was my love and the sky my heart,

I'd drench you to your skin and never let you part,

You thought I'd leave you, that I won't care?

But, losing you, darling, I just could not bear...

I'll pledge eternal love to you, my dear,

Let there be no sadness, not even a tear,

I love you truly, but this you should already know,

I'll always, always hold on, and never, ever let you go...

I've kept my word, my dear... so you have to keep yours and write more and more and more beautiful FFs (I'm always hoping for a mini serial 😆) in 2012...

-Chimpsy-

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