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Posted: 13 years ago
THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL
I AM SPOILED NOW
WHOLE DAY I WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATES AS I KNOW THEY WILL BE QUICK
LOVED MAAN IN THIS
HE WAS SO EXPRESSIVE AND HE KNEW WHAT HE WANTED
LOVED THE WAY HE LISTENED TO HER APPREHENSIONS AND MADE HER SECURE IN HIS LOVE

IF YOU HAVE ANY OTHER SS IN MIND, PLEASE POST THAT TOO
LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE WITH SO MUCH DETAIL, EXPLANATION AND FEELINGS
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Posted: 13 years ago
Roseee!!! That was soo beautiful; almost had me in tears at the last part yet it was so bloody hot😳. How do you manage to do that you little genius👏

I loved it and as always waiting for more!

Love you,
-Marvee
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow mindblowin ff luvd it
beautifully written ur such an amazin writer
cnt w8 2 read more 😍
fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rose darling I Edited my Maha long comment on PG 43 <33

Luv Sanzy :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini01

OMG rose, this SS was BEAUTIFUL. most amazing SS ever. and i just knew maan was going to propose to her and he did it so beautifully. will i ever get a ma(A)n like that 😔 *sigh*rose you have me drooling over your SSs and i am serious, ever time i think about them i end up grinning like an idiot and everyone thinks im losing it 😆 give us another SS soon please please please.❤️


i can agree more shallu...

Rose
this was a beautiful SS...,i just loved the love story and Maaneet...i also think about maaneet in this story and have this happy feeling like how maaneet brought me a smile in the early days of GHSP...the thing i like about Maan characterization is that even if he was a womanizer before meeting his love Geet...he was gentleman in his own sense...and i just loved his every gesture from the time he met Geet...and the way u portrayed Geet the beautiful and charming girl who is truthful to her family and with values.u can't help from falling in love just the way Maan did...

loved Maan impatience once he reached Vegas and his line take ur clothes off woman😆.and the following intimacy was☺️
the proposal was so sweet...and when Geet got emotional for not getting pregnant was surprising yet made her love more...and how she opened up to Maan about her feelings and insecurities was brought in the right moment...loved the kitchen romance and how Maan wanted to make babies with her being his wife...and the epilogue where the little one is born as a symbol of their love was a perfect picture...

also i have to appreciate how u wrote maaneet first love making...Maan approach made him so sweet as he didn't want to hurt Geet since it was her first time...he treated her like a rose petal...it showed the emotional attachment and that Geet is not just any other woman to him...

i was hoping to have this story go for some time as i loved Maaneet portrayal and how the love blossomed...hope u will excel like this one in ur next one
Edited by Maya_P - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you for the wonderful journey
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Posted: 13 years ago

😃Once Again😃

~My Heartfelt Thank you Note~

Dear Lovey-Dovey readers,

I would thank you all from the bottom of my heart, but for you my heart has no bottom...

Thank You for all the valuable suggestions and wonderful comments! Your words are my inspiration! It can be really hard to write a good thank you note which is tougher than writing a story. Thank you all for your kindness, thoughtfulness and wishes. I can't express how much I appreciate it all. I have so much to be thankful for, and so much to smile about! But sometimes it just isn't. You can't find the right words, it sounds too corny or insincere,

A famous peace activist once said, "Wisdom is knowing what to do next; virtue is doing it." You guys are obviously wise and virtuous. Please accept my thanks for volunteering your time to read my craps.

As my appreciation to thank you for all of your great support and love. I'm really flattered and glad to know you are all enjoying my crap write. And that will be the great honor to know you all loving and demanding it. In the back of my mind, on a subconscious level, I'm always looking for something to write about. It has subtly shifted the way I see them(MAANEET/GURTI), to have something to be thankful for, to find the thing that I can dream of or live the moment, even if it's not a good thing or something that makes me happy. That's the beauty of it. It makes this forum so much more alive. I think all of the other activities that I engage in ' my job as a software developer, i design the applications - help me structure and implement the ideas I have naturally. And i do read a lot and lot of novels as i don't have any specific genre or theme. I read everything i get in my hand, it may be a piece of paper. It became a thing to me; I had the feeling that I want to be true to myself, and it doesn't have to be uncool. It started to get passed around on the IF, and now I've got hundreds and hundreds of people who look at it every day. It's mind-blowing.


In the meanwhile, thank you for your patience and time to read my fictions!

Dear GEET,

you taught me how to be normal without changing, to change my image while the way I think stays the same, to be myself without hurting others. MAANEET/GURTI, they taught me what is love-trust-sacrifice-passion-desire-intimacy-relationship-hope and what not? My heartfelt thanks to GEET ' Hui sabse Parayi makers. Eagerly waiting for Season 2.


Thank you for being the dream reader we writers all wish for--someone who takes from another story not only what we put in, but maybe even a little more. Most of the scenes I use in my writes are from mills & boons or some other novels. So if you find any similarities; I apologize in advance.

Thank you for making a story part of your life, and thereby affirming something the poet(Unknown) wrote: "The world is not made of atoms, but of stories."

Once again, THANK YOU ALL.

Thank you for bothering to read this

Hope i didn't bore you all.

Love,

Rose

Edited by Gurti_Rocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great ss. Loved it.
U hav spoiled us,
back to back 3 ss.
Now m waiting 4 next. Great wala fab wala ss.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg omg omg omg u had me readyin from 1am - 4am i. Was just addicted!!! Awson ss!!! Just loved it!!! Its wasnt to long or short, perfectly exicicued!!! All areas coverd!!! Lovely read!!! Just cant wait till i get 2 read another one!!!! Pure lovage 2wards ur writing!!! 👍🏼 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow this was so beautiful a story and I am spellbound ..kudos to you dear..
Edited by Saams - 13 years ago

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